PreRish SS || Darmiyaan || [Chapter 10 - Pg 63] *Completed* - Page 3

A fresh take on PreRish, Niyati this is awesome❤️

Coming to character sketch, RB/P/Kukki are interesting. RB needs a companion, Kukki understood this and wanted the same for her father, Prerna wants someone who can understand the pain behind her smile.

Now coming to the prologue, it looks like though A is a Mumma's boy, he is decent and helpful like his father. Rishabh Bajaj, an unknown to many who think he is unapproachable, but would change their opinion once they know him👍🏼. Basus, just because Bajaj is successful in less time and they can't do it, they think Bajaj is doing dirty tricks. 

It's very interesting to see Rajesh and Bajaj bond. And only Prerna knows about this secret. Prerna & Kukki's bond is hearts❤️. So Prerna is hiding about her closeness with Bajaj from her dad. Let's see where this would lead her. What all she needs to go through to reach her happiness. Another thing I liked about Prerna is she is studying and also earning giving private tuition👍🏼. 

This is Amazing Niyati🤗. Now give us the first chapter soon.

a new story from a great writer.  the start is very good,  it's intriguing & interesting. I'm sure your story would be how the show actually should have been. great start & can't wait to read more. 

Saving the thread to read it later.

Interesting and new concept!  This is like a breath of fresh air from the cringefest we were watching.🤪 

Glad to read that prerna is studying, unlike the show.😵 so prerna is getting close to rishabh, interesting!☺️

Update soon niyati! 🤗

Hi Niyati 😊

I really liked the prologue....it is related to the original show plot but a little tweaked which is very interesting  ...

Continue soonish..

And please add me to your PM list as well 😳

Originally posted by: Ruhanika08897

Interesting and exciting Prologue.🥰🥰

Can't wait to read further chapters, publish soon, please😍😍

Thank you for the comment Ruhanika, I’ll update the story today ☺️

Originally posted by: AryanSahil

Wowwwwwwwww interesting ❤️😛😳😉

So bajaj and prerna already knows each other  😉 and her dad tooooooooo 😉

I’m so exciting about this one 🥳

And about basus  I don’t want to talk  because my mood is already off so 😭😒

Waiting for next part 

Zohal.. 🤗

yes they know each other and it is because of dad only 😉

About the Basus,  chinta mat karo.. unhe main sambhal lungi 😉😈

I’ll update the first chapter by the end of the day 😳

Originally posted by: mitras

The prologue and the character sketch is very nicely written. Waiting for the story eagerly😊

Thank you so much for the comment 😃

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Lovely. Classic. Wonderful. 

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Speechless. 

😳😳