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Rashmi's way of proposing Rishab was romantic. Their concersation was romantic. Glad that Preeran confessed their love to each other. Shrishmeer nok jhok was funny.
Rashmi's way of proposing Rishab was romantic. Their concersation was romantic. Glad that Preeran confessed their love to each other. Shrishmeer nok jhok was funny.
This SS is ending here.
plz try to give a detailed comment on the last part.Plz write ur favourite scene,favourite character,favourite jodi n y u liked them
Dedicated to arshiabhigya as she only told me to show Ravesh's love life also.Since it's a short story I could show it only in brief.Sorry.
Rashmi was getting inside the mall forshopping.Suddenly she bumped into someone.
She was stunned to see him.It was Ravesh.
Rashmi:Ravesh..how are you?
Ravesh:I am good.How are you?
Rashmi:I am good.And like you said finally I met my soul mate.Rishab Luthra.
Ravesh:Wow.I am really happy for you Rashmi.You deserve it.
Rashmi:You have become a popular singer now.Your debut song was such a big hit.All are adoring you and your songs.Finally your dream to be a hit singer was been fulfilled.Guess Chanchal is your lucky charm.After she entered your life you became a successful singer.
Ravesh smiled:Yes,Chanchal is my luck.
Rashmi:How is Chanchal?
Ravesh became dull.
Ravesh:She came to know about you and have decided to go back to her house.
Rashmi was shocked.
Rashmi:You did'nt stop her?
Ravesh:I wanted to.But she was not willing to listen to me.It is my fault too.I never gave her attention as I married her only for Maa.But later I started feeling happy in her presence.Then when she told me that she is leaving I felt depressed.That time I realized how important she is to me.
Rashmi:Tell me Ravesh..do you love her?
Ravesh:If losing a person is painful for a lover...then I am in love with Chanchal.
Rashmi:Then go tell her that you love her.Only then she will decide not to go.She is leaving only because she thinks that still you love me.If you confess your love to her I am sure that she will never ever leave you.
Ravesh was silent.
Karan took Preeta to a restaurant.
The whole room was booked by Karan for privacy.
Karan:It's our first date Preeta.I wanted to make it special.But...
Preeta held his hand and said:Every moment with you is special Karan.
They looked at each other romantically.
The food was served to them.
Preeta took a piece of food and moved it closer to his lips.His face blossomed.
He opened his mouth to be fed by Preeta.
He also started feeding Preeta making her blush more.
Karan:Preeta...ever since I became your fan my dream was to dance with you.But now my desire to dance with you has deepened as my respect for you as a dancer has increased.Without becoming weak you fought against all the odds,struggled hard...worked hard and made it possible to dance.So I respect you more Preeta.
Preeta was becoming emotional.
Karan held her hand:We danced together on Navratri.But I did'nt get enough.May I dance with the most favourite dancer of mine?
She nodded smiling.
Karan-Preeta danced romantically.
Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Mujhe aadat bana lo ik buri
Kehna ye tumse hai
Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Jism ke samandar mein
Ik lehar jo thehri hai
Ussme thodi harqat hone do
Ho shayari sunati inn
Doh nasheeli aankhon ko
Mujhko paas aake padne do
Ishq ki khwaahishon mein
Bheeglo baarishon mein aao na..
Tumhe paakar na khone ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Mujhe nazron mein rakh lo kahi
Kehna ye tumse hai
Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Mm rokna nahi mujhko
Zid pe aa gayi hoon main
Is qadar deewanaapan chadha
Dekho na yahan aake
Mera haal kaisa hai
Tootke abhi takk na judaa
Ab sambhalna nahi hai
Jo bhi hai wo sahi hai aao na..
Tumhe khud se milane ka junoon
Sarr pe hai, kab se hai
Mujhe rehne de apne paas hi
Kehna ye tumse hai
Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sarr pe hai, kab se hai
Sarr pe hai, kab se hai(hate-story-3).
Rashmi was in her studio.There she saw a woman who has come to visit her.
Rashmi thought:I have seen her somewhere.
She:You are Rashmi.Right?
Rashmi:Yes.
She:I am Chanchal.
Rashmi was stunned.
Rashmi:Chanchal!
She thought:Why has she come to meet me?
Chanchal:I know that Ravesh and you love each other a lot.Unfortunately he had to marry me.But we never had any husband wife relationship.Please come back to Ravesh's life.Don't consider our marriage as an obstacle.I am leaving Ravesh.
Rashmi was irritated.
Rashmi:Why should I accept Ravesh back when our relationship is already broken?Now my marriage is fixed with the person I love the most in this world.Now he is my life.Ravesh is nothing to me.Before trying to unite us you first ask Ravesh what he wants.
Chanchal was shocked.
Rashmi:I am not your sautan.I am your friend as Ravesh and I are jut friends now.
Chanchal smiled unknowingly.
Rashmi:Who does Ravesh love?That you test by yourself.You will get the answer which makes you happy.
Rashmi hugged her from the side.They both smiled.
Chanchal packed her luggage to go back to her house.
Ravesh:Are you leaving me?
Chanchal:Yes.
Ravesh:What if I say that I won't allow you to leave?
Chanchal:Why can't you allow me to leave?
Ravesh:Because I want you.
Chanchal was stunned.
Apne Roothein, Paraaye Roothein
Yaar Roothein Naa..
Khwaab Tootein, Waade Tootein
Dil Yeh Toote Naa..
Chanchal:Why you want me?To look after the house?
Ravesh lost his control in frustration:Because I love you Chanchal.
Chanchal's face blossomed.
Ho..Apne Roothein, Paraaye Roothein
Yaar Roothein Naa..
Khwaab Tootein, Waade Tootein
Dil Yeh Toote Naa..
Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe
Saath Chhoote Naa..
Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe
Saath Chhoote Naa..
Ravesh cupped her face in his hands and looked at her tearfully:Please Chanchal.Please don't leave me and go.
She looked at him emotionally.
O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..
O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..
Chanchal:Why did'nt you say this before?If you had,I would not have taken the stupid decision of leaving you.
Ravesh smiled.
Udte Patangon Mein
Holi Waale Rangon Mein
Jhoomenge Phir Se Dono Yaar
Waapas To Aaja Yaar
Seene Se Laga Ja Yaar
Dil To Huye Hai Zaar-Zaar
They cupped each other's face smiling.
O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..
O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..(Yaariyan).
They heard someone clapping from behind.It was Rashmi.
Rashmi:Made for each other jodi.Be together always.
Ravesh-Chanchal smiled.
Sameer brought Shrishti to a place closing her eyes with his hands.
Shrishti:Where have you brought me?
Sameer removed his hands off her eyes.She saw the room being decorated beautifully.
Shrishti:So beautiful Sammy.
Sameer was surprised:You called me Sammy?
Shrishti:Ya.Since we have become so close to each other I thought of giving you a cute nick name.Sammy.
Sameer:I loved it.When you call me Sammy it's so sweet.
She blushed.
Maine puchha ye dil se
Main kyun hoon jahan mein
Ek dhahkan boli tere liye..
He gave her a greeting card.She looked at it.
She read the words in it:Sorry Shrishti for troubling you.
Sameer pulled his own ears as Sorry.
Shrishti:Sammy...I used to scold you when you tried to flirt with me.But I always enjoyed it.
They smiled at each other.
Maine yaadein tarashi
Aur khwaab bana di
Nayi duniya basa di tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..
Sameer gave her the next greeting card.
Shrishti read the words written in it:A big heart for the cutest bubbly girl...My Shrishti...
Shrishti looked at his eyes.His romantic eyes were on her.
Jo main kehta hoon, jo sunta hoon
Jo sehta hoon, tere liye
Main girta hoon, sambhalta hoon
Phir chalta hoon, tere liye
Shrishti:Sammy!
Sameer:I love you Shrishti...
Shrishti blushed:I knew it from the beginning that you love me.
Sameer:I also know that you love me.
Koi dard hoon gehra
Koi aks hoon pisra
Main kya hoon bata de tere liye
Shrishti:How do you know that?
Sameer:Because I saw you looking at the moon at midnight following my instructions.
Yaadon ka chehra
Koi khwaab sunhera
Main kya hoon bata de tere liye
Tere liye.. tere liye..
Shrishti was embarrassed.
Sameer:That night you saw my face on the moon.Right?
Shrishti blushed.
Main khoya saa ik lamha hoon
Bas iss pal hoon tere liye
Main aawara baadal hoon
Bas iss pal hoon tere liye
Sameer:What are you waiting for Shrishti?Why don't you say those magical words?
Shrishti looked at his eyes romantically:I love you Sammy.
He was very happy.
Mere har marz ki tu duaa hai
Hui hai qubol wo duaa hai
Yeh ulfat hai ya koi nasha hai
Jise chhuna chahe wo dhuaan hai
They shared an intense eye lock.
Tere liye.. tere liye..
Sameer embraced her from behind passionately.They got lost in the passion of romance.
Jo main kehta hoon, jo sunta hoon
Jo sehta hoon, tere liye..
Main girta hoon, sambhalta hoon
Phir chalta hoon, tere liye..(Fitoor).
The engagement party of the three sisters were on the same day.
Shrishti was walking fast.Her foot got slipped and was about to fall down.Suddenly Sameer caught her.
They shared an intense eye lock.
Dil mere na aur intezaar kar - 2
Dil mere na, dil mere na aur intezaar kar
Ishq hai to ishq ka izhaar kar - 2
Sameer:At least on the engagement day you walk carefully.Otherwise on the engagement day you will be hospitalized after a fracture.
Shrishti:Sammy...don't make fun of me.Purposefully I pretended to fall down so that you will catch me.
Sameer was stunned:What?Are you crazy?
Shrishti:Yep.Crazy in your love.
I love you love you like crazy
I want you want you like crazy
Kisi aur ki na hone doon main
Meri zindagaani hai tu
Jise raat din main padhta raha
Meri voh kahaani hai tu
They both giggled.Shrishti observed Sameer from head to toe.
Sameer:Why are you staring at me like this yaar?I feel shy.
Shrishti:Oh come on Sammy.Good that you wore the sherwani I selected for you.You look damn handsome Sammy.
Maine teri baaton pe yakeen kar liya
Baahon ki panaahon mein tujhe bhar liya, aa jaa
Jaan kehti hai, jaan kehti hai mujhpe jaan nisaar kar
Ishq hai to ishq ka izhaar kar - 2
She embraced him.
I love you love you like crazy
I want you want you like crazy
Sameer:You look simple and elegant.Very pretty.
Deewaanon se bhi deewaana hai tu
Teri zid se haari hoon main
Mere saathiya mujhe hai pata
Teri beqaraari hoon main
Shrishti:I know that I am pretty as I did my own make up today.
They both giggled.
(I love you love you like crazy
I want you want you like crazy) -2(Fida).
Preeta was dressing up for the party.
Karan entered the room.
Preeta:Karan..I am ready.
Karan looked at her deeply.Preeta became shy.
Karan:Preeta..something is lacking in you.
Preeta:What's that Karan?
Karan held her hand:Vermilion on your forehead.Very soon I will make you complete with my vermilion.
She blushed.
Rishab-Rashmi were looking at each other with a sweet smile.
Rishab:I never knew that dreams can become real.You were my dream which is a reality now.
Rashmi:When love is there with a beautiful face life becomes beautiful like a dream.
He smiled.
Karan held Preeta's hand.She smiled.Holding her hand he brought her to the engagement hall.
All the couples exchanged rings.
Ragini:All the couples look so adorable Neil.Let no evil eyes fall on them.
Neil:No evil eyes will fall on them as their love has the power to block it.
They smiled.
All the couples danced beautifully enjoying the romantic atmosphere of the function.
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye
Jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnava
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye
Jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnava
Ho chaandni jab tak raat
Deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein
Na chhodna mera haath
(Na chhodna mera haath)
Ho chaandni jab tak raat
Deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein
Na chhodna mera haath
Na koi hai, na koi tha
Zindagi mein tumhare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnava
Ho...(Atif Aslam & Shirley Setia version)
Finally the most important day arrived.The wedding...
All the 3 couples got married in a blissful manner.
Sameer looked at Shrishti:You are snake beauty Shrishti.
Shrishti:What?You called me snake?Do I look like a naagin to you?Did I ever bite you like a snake?
Sameer:Calm down Shrishti.I meant you are attractive like Naagins..
Shrishti smiled:Oh..I thought...But tell me..like which Naagin do I like?Mouni,Ada,Anita or Surbhi Jyoti?
Sameer thought:Oh God!Why did i compare her with Naagin?
Shrishti:Sammy...
Sameer:You are more beautiful than all of them Shrishti.You are really a Naag Rani.
She blushed.
Shrishti pulled his chin cutely:You are my Naag Sammy.
They both giggled.
Preeta's eyes were wet.
Karan:On our wedding day why are you crying Preeta?
Preeta looked at him emotionally:I never thought that this day would come to my life and I will be a bride.You made it possible Karan.I owe my lie to you.
Karan cupped her face in his hands.
Karan:I owe my life to you.Thank you for marrying me and fulfilling my dream.
Rom rom tera naam pukaare
Ek hue din reain hamare
Hum se hum hi chiin gaye hai
Jab se dekhe hai nainn deewane
Sajda
Karan knelt down before her extending his hand towards her:Will you be with me life long?
Preeta smiled holding his hand.
Teri kaali ankhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudu, sapno se aagey
Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye
She embraced him emotionally.
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun
Sajda tera sajda
Din reain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda(My name is Khan).
Ragini:This is the most beautiful day of our life Neil.Our daughters got married together.
Neil:Yes.What more do we parents need?
They smiled.
The End
thanks for this amazing story!
Last Part
terrific update, well written!
Great that Rashmi and Ravesh met! sad that Chanchal left Ravesh! surprised that Chanchal went to meet Rashmi! nice that Rashmi cleared Chanchal's mu! finally Ravesh and Chanchal are together, thanks to Rashmi!
wonderful that Karan and Preeta went out on their date.
Shristi and Sameer now together!
all three couples get married!
lovely end
Thank u very much 4 the detailed comment.Plz write ur favourite scene,favourite character,favourite jodi n y u liked them
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
thanks for this amazing story!
Last Part
terrific update, well written!
Great that Rashmi and Ravesh met! sad that Chanchal left Ravesh! surprised that Chanchal went to meet Rashmi! nice that Rashmi cleared Chanchal's mu! finally Ravesh and Chanchal are together, thanks to Rashmi!
wonderful that Karan and Preeta went out on their date.
Shristi and Sameer now together!
all three couples get married!
lovely end
Rashmi & Revesh's conversation was sensational. Chanchal's decision to leave the house was shocking. But she is right at her place. Glad that Revesh stopped her & confessed his love to her. Rishab-Rashmi's scene was romantic. Preeran scene vermillion scene was romantic. Their engagement scene & proposal scene was emotional. Sirishmeer conversation was romantic. I like all the couples. All the scenes are good at their place.
fav scene - all couples getting married.
fav character : all
fav jodi - Karan and Preeta
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