One Shot: Rishabh Bajaj! Fated to be the Devastating God! - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Wowwwwwwwwwwww wowwwwwwwwwwww Wonderful πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Tooooooooooo Shortttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ I want more please πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is the Bajaj we need in the show.  So perfectly written! Glad he made prerna realize what she has done and left her in the puddle of her own regret and guilt, she deserved that for taking his tender side for granted.πŸ‘ 

Write something more like this, such a treat it is to read a savage RB.☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

L Lazy and L for also Loved it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

wow this is lit πŸ‘

continue kar do πŸ˜†

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Very nicely written shruti jiπŸ€—

Thoda tho mood thik hua apna...πŸ˜‰

Wish serial me bhi aisa hotha😊

RB β€οΈ 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

You are clearly a writer who likes an adventure with words. Good read. Keep at it. 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

BrilliantπŸ‘....Just too Good dear....U write so beautifully that it connects with us easily...❀️LOVED IT SO MUCH.....Want this RB to unleash his wrath...😈Pls do write more dear....πŸ€—

Hehe....Tumhari dhamki kaam aagayi...Commented after a long time in IF....πŸ˜†

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Oi wistπŸ˜†

From where do you bring such literary wonders?!

I absolutely loved the line rishabh had hurled at prerna 'about sleaze &all' mazaa aa gyavo padhke read it like 4 times!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Loved this - this is what I want to see in the show but am subject to the antics that are going on currently. It is only writers like you - who bring out the true essence of RB. You have showed him to be so powerful, so in control but at the same time so alone... love you writing. Please do continue to write...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: SapSur

Reserved..My Spot..

Lately you have been doing this with consistency.