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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: inlieu

This was just perfect from start to end. Loved the way you touched upon the zidd, the hurt, the concern, and then how they both blurted out what they were feeling directly and complained to one another. The thoughts HS had about expectations from one another, the relief they both felt, the tight hug that they both need desperately.

Especially the bapu bit here, which as you know I am partial to.

Kuch khabar hai aapko, aap ek 17 saal ki chori ke baapu ho," she laughed. "Aur yaad rakhna, aap bhi mhaare liye first ho." She said, as he hugged her again.

Aww Jean, this has become special now that you liked it too.

Yeah, the expectations are bound to burden both the sides.

Haha, that bapu one was especially only for you! Plus Mini speaking Haryanvi ;)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Jiarao

This is so beautiful.  I am too emotional to write anything now. I want them back😭

Awwww. 

Thank you so much!!! Everyone wants them back.

CVs 😡

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Ahhhhh....it's just perfect....

Sukun Mill Gaya mahre kaleje ko....

Perfect mixture of all the emotions....zidd...haq...anger.... vulnerability....hurt....care...love and affection.....

Love Minnie's hariyanvi.....

Thanks for keeping babes away from the dueo....

PS:- I too was badly missing HaNi scanes so purane episode dekhne lag gayi thi.....

Yaar show me kabhi ayega yeh sunhara din .....

Do write more...one in Hanita and one on naiembi knowking some sense into babes ki Khali khopdi....

Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it!

Babes has no room for intervention when it comes to them. They're very much independent from her.

Mujhe ab inki kuch zyaada hi yaad aa rahi hai. :'(

I'll try 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Resham

This was so perfect.. I almost imagined it.... Kaash aisa ab dikhade... Bahut hua.. I am dreading for their reunion.... 

Thank you very much! Well I didnt expect ki itna pasand aayega sabko.

Yeah I want them back. Anyhow. Right now.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Wow... It was just amazing.... 

Loved it totally.... Hope we can see such scene in the show as well.... I actually imagined them here and had tears... Their conversation and the last dialogue of Minni is a cherry on the cake... 

Thanks for this one yaar... 

Thanks a ton honey!

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