Oh my my ! I’m speechless! I wish the cvs read it and try something like this. I was imagining How Ronakshi would render it .. amazing love 😊 .. keep writing more... Thanks, Aparna
Oh my my ! I’m speechless! I wish the cvs read it and try something like this. I was imagining How Ronakshi would render it .. amazing love 😊 .. keep writing more... Thanks, Aparna
Aaaaaahhhhhh ☺️ That was quite an OS! You know, in all my years of (self-proclaimed) writing, I've only touched upon this kind of a story a couple of times. I have to admit it's actually quite difficult to maintain a level of decency but still keep it sensuous. You've done a fabulous job with that!!
As soon as I got an inkling of the video that Rohit was about to watch, my jaw dropped. I absolutely loooooved it! I would love seeing such a thing on the show, but I feel like that's probably not going to happen :P
Regardless, Rohit's reactions were on point!!!! 😆 And when he asked Vimmi to bring the pole too
I was especially happy with the last part #noshame lol
But seriously, one thing about tv relationships is that they always show the girl shying off and the guy having to initiate things everytime. I don't think that's necessarily the case in all relationships. So I'm glad we got to see something which is more realistic for a ridiculously attractive couple :P
Okay I'm rambling on, but aaah looved this OS!! I've added it to the index too. Please do write more!! Even other genres don't worry haha. But I'd really like to read more of your works :)
Oh my my ! I’m speechless! I wish the cvs read it and try something like this. I was imagining How Ronakshi would render it .. amazing love 😊 .. keep writing more... Thanks, Aparna
Aww thanks a lot 🤗
Originally posted by: basket_101
Aaaaaahhhhhh ☺️ That was quite an OS! You know, in all my years of (self-proclaimed) writing, I've only touched upon this kind of a story a couple of times. I have to admit it's actually quite difficult to maintain a level of decency but still keep it sensuous. You've done a fabulous job with that!!
As soon as I got an inkling of the video that Rohit was about to watch, my jaw dropped. I absolutely loooooved it! I would love seeing such a thing on the show, but I feel like that's probably not going to happen :P
Regardless, Rohit's reactions were on point!!!! 😆 And when he asked Vimmi to bring the pole too
I was especially happy with the last part #noshame lol
But seriously, one thing about tv relationships is that they always show the girl shying off and the guy having to initiate things everytime. I don't think that's necessarily the case in all relationships. So I'm glad we got to see something which is more realistic for a ridiculously attractive couple :POkay I'm rambling on, but aaah looved this OS!! I've added it to the index too. Please do write more!! Even other genres don't worry haha. But I'd really like to read more of your works :)
I so wanted a detailed review like this Thank u thank u sooo much this means a lot. I love ur work too ♥
It was hot🔥
Do write up often
dr surgeon aur pole dance????🤣🤣 dat ws funny literally🤣 hot hot chap🙈🙈 veena cud hv cum a little later though😉
I luved d idea of sona having two other friends..show mein kyu nehi diya pata nehi..she used to say she hv friends..but kbhi dikhaya nehi😕
Never have I thought Sona would do pole dancing 😍
This was well written.
Keep up the good work.
Looking forward to your next ronakshi story.
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