Originally posted by: Legilimens
I really envy your capability of setting a scene's location without trying hard🙈 I find that hard to do. The conversation also flows very naturally, this is a good oneshot. Logically speaking, they really won't be able to be friends after this fake courtship and it bothers Rohit so much, hope he introspects. I like how Raima did not even once cross his mind, thank you for that😆
Nicely written, I liked the ending as well. Everything(introspection, realisation, confession) does not need to happen together, it takes time😆
Thank you! When I’m in doubt about the setting or location, I usually go for the simplest and least distracting choice (if that makes sense) which I think is usually the best. Plus I love the drinking coffee or tea on the balcony visual haha I played the scene in my head first and then tried to put it into words. I’m glad you liked it! And yeah I wanted this to be Raima-free 😆 Oh I completely agree! I want to see the slow process of introspection, realization and confession. I also want Rohit to suffer a bit and work hard to make it up to her! Let’s see what the show offers 😆
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