RAMYAAA! 🤗 I am glad to have written this because ghanta dikhaya humko aur na hi umeed hai 🤣 Cookie has to play Pretend Papa not once but many the times. That's it. ✋ Thank you so much <3Originally posted by: MR21OMG. This is so good. I loved it. CVs dekho, I hope atleast they show half of this in the show. Prerna's pain, guilty was showed very well. Kukki 😘, sharing the bed as a family for the first time😍. Kukki imitating her dad. And the ending sasuma-damaad scene❤️.
AWW! Thank you so much! I hope it was worth your time <3Originally posted by: Surbhi123Omg kitna aacha os likha tumne padh ke maja aa gaya I liked saas damad most saachi mein hamara RB world's best damad hai I wish humein show mein bhi aage chalke tumahare os ke jaisa saas aur damad ka scene dekhne mile
hahaha some stuff are better left where they end. Thank you so much! Garbage could have been better but I was too lazy to edit it again with flowery words which is why it is GARBAGE hahah. Thank you,Originally posted by: Grey-liciousWhat ??? 😮
You called this garbage😲😖
Really 😩
Or you want us to do your tareef huh🤐🤨
Koi ni you deserve it😏😉
To write such an amazing amazing story🥳😎😁
I was so engrossed in it😇....and when it comes to an end I was like bus ittu sa😔
I want more😣
Please write more.... sequel or something🤔
All the doubts you created in Prerna mind😵
It should be cleared right🤯
That why Mehra was aggressive when Tanvi was there🤔
And why Bajaj told Mehra to take care of them at when something happened to him🙄
Why Massi didn't came to meet him😒
There's so many loopholes🤪
So don't waste time and start writing a sequel🤨😐
Thank you so much. I hope it was worth your time 🤗Originally posted by: shahijazzBeautiful and sweet OS...❤️LOVED IT so much dear....❤️
Loved Prerish and kuki scenes and enjoyed the saas-Damaad equation👏
PLS do write more .....🤗
na ji na i wanted to add it. As per the cute scene that followed, i really want a scene like that were in just matter of seconda RB bowls Veena over and Prerna is left thinking ki ho kya gaya 😂🤣 consider it as a deal that Bajaj cracked with her 🤣🤣🤣 😆 Yes she made gajar ka halwa for damaad ji with lots of kishmish which bajaj loves <3 thank you so much,Originally posted by: fitoori_kudiSuperb ankie I hope aisa kuch show mein bhi ho
Sasuma made bahar k halwa for her damaadji
Yeh last paragraph RD ji k liye tha nah? /🤣
thank you so much! Hope it was worth your time 🤗Originally posted by: sneha_17Wow, Kuki plays Cupid so well.
Mr.Bajaj as expected saves Veena ma
Every scene and emotion is well written
Ending was picture perfect
aww thank you so much my favorite writer <3 this means a world to me 🤗Originally posted by: IAdoreYouThis is too good to praise in words. A beautiful, beautiful shot. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
Size 8 jooties fit me well Aww thank you so much to reaffirm that readers didnt feel a drag. This is something I feel all the time, that my readers are getting bored especially with details that I throw. Thank you so much! I hope it was worth your time. 🤗Originally posted by: Monali5You call this garbage! You fool ! You should be hit with size 8 jootis for thinking so! This is good Picking of from the show stopped and giving that plot a direction is amazing there is not a single moment in this OS where the reader is let down. The portrayal of emotions ,thoughts of each character is bang on! Prerna's emotional turmoil was the bigger arch of the story ,it had to bring fruition and you my friend did it so well !😘😍
YES HAMARA BAJAJ went to court and saved his MAA <3Originally posted by: AdvaymerijaanAww it was soo good Ankie ❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗
Finally wife came to know the value of the man she has married..😊 Hamara Bajaj went to court in the nick of time to save sasuma
Finally we got the sharing same bed with kuki yey!!☺️
Oh the Damad’s Khatirdaari with apne haath ka gaajar ka halwa is best.. 😊😊
I have only hopes from COOKIE thats it 😆 no one else can make them do so or else 😆
Yes Soft gajjar ka halwa with lots of kishmish for him <3
thank you so much! 🤗
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