PreRish One-Shot: You Are Tired I Think!

Posted: 2 months ago

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Posted: 2 months ago

Res first smiley16

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 2 months ago
Posted: 2 months ago

No words to describe this, just wowsmiley32

Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by TC_FA

No words to describe this, just wowsmiley32

Really? smiley23smiley22

Thanks a lot! smiley31

Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by Wistfulness

Really? smiley23smiley22

Thanks a lot! smiley31

Yup smiley31

Posted: 2 months ago

amazing darling.. dil mange more

Edited by opsora2090 - 2 months ago
Posted: 2 months ago

It was simply beautiful.

They have the same pain inside them but never shared it maybe thought they weren't supposed to. Both were suffering. If only they had communicated things would have been easy.

One thing I really don't get is why does the man think he can take decisions for his partner. She is not just his wife she is the mother of his child too. They are a family one day he says marry me and on another i want to free you. She should be the one to make that decision. 

Loved it to the core. Loved the confrontation, confession and there after. smiley1

Edited by Chahat_A_Doshi - 2 months ago
Posted: 2 months ago



WIST. Everytime I read something you write, I'm filled with such longing. idk what is it about your words? There's a certain, subtle agony there, a deeply rooted melancholy that elevates your words. All I want is more and more. Also, let me confess, I'm a glutton for confrontational scenes like this. I just love two people standing together and venting their hearts out. That cleansing, that catharsis, that peak of human emotions and ferocity. Oh my god, I absolutely loved it.

Your beginning para was so wonderfully described, omg.

"The garden bloomed in full glory with its buds blossoming, flowers erupting in beautiful hues adding splashes of varied colour, bees buzzing, pollen floating like magical dust, and grasses whispering into the air while softly dancing in perfect unison."

Beautiful and so picturesque. And the ensuing paragraph hints at mystery and misery and intrigues you so much. Their shared anguish, that little moment where he's so cold to her really gets to you. You understand the pain, and each word drives home their connection, and everything they've gone through. I love how they both come clean and hold onto whatever is between them. AAH THE LAST LINES ARE LOVE OH MY GOD! That bit where they come together, I could literally imagine him tracing those drops on her lips yikessmiley43 THE PASSION WAS SO WELL DELIVERED. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Edited by .amigos. - 1 months ago

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