Originally posted by: fitoori_kudi
I agree with last line thoda cheesy ho gya but still I loved this simple romantic piece of your writing ❤️
PS. Rishte update jaldi do 😡
Lmao I'm going to delete that line🤢
Glad you still enjoyed it ❤️
Rishte update weekend par😎
Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
this one is a really sweet one and you write so well ❤️
Thank you so much ❤️🤗
Originally posted by: Moushumi
It was simply nice to read.keep it up.thanks.and hmm the last line was bit cliche 😋
Hahaha thank you 😁
Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Let me read this story again my headache will go 🤣
Gaya ya nahi?🤣
Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi
Never watched the show b4
Interested for KSG playing Mr. Bajaj
First story
Loved it and its best when the reeader can inagine it happening
First story! Omg I'm honored❤️
Hope you are liking the show!🤗
Originally posted by: davinajebakani
Lovely story, I love how you made Mr Bajaj getting restless of Prerna keeping fast for Anurag, thinking he's the baby's father and then his realisation that Prerna kept the fast for him(her baby's father) and also the cute gesture of Prerna writing R with mehendi on her palm...it was lovely scene to imagine, which would not be happening anytime soon in the show...
I hope something like this would happen in the show in the future...
Thank you! This prompt was by @MisHumptyDumpty so she also deserves the credit😆
I hope so soon❤️
Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi
This was SOOOO good and feel warm!❤️
Loved it!
And those one liners from Prerna gosh. Amazing to read and imagine, kyunki madam ko show mein rone se fursat kahan!🤔
I love how your Bajaj kinda undermines himself and feels pissed about it too!
Madam ka job hai Rona dhona aajkal😆
Well, Bajaj is a human too, usey bhi takleef hoti hai😭
Thanks ❤️❤️
Originally posted by: Breezi11197
It was really really really beautiful .. you are a fantastic writer ..loved PreRish alot !!!
Thank you so much ❤️😍
VEry well written Sanya, this is what I was wishing to read,, cheesy or not, cringefest or not but I love reading romance...
Just a suggestion write something about Basu & Bajaj's connection. I know you hve mentioned about it in Rishtey... but a full fledge OS on that subject, yes Prerna can be here..
Prompt can be like Bajaj snatch some deal or some contract from Basus and Priya is agitated and ask him why he is after Anurag, what wrong he did with him. And Bajaj replied that its not Anurag but Moloy Basu who wronged him years ago...he wanted to destroy him but since Anurag is his son and seeing his barbadi Moloy will be devastated.... scene can be something like in Trishul movie starring Amitabh Bachchan, Shashi Kapoor and Sanjeev Kumar. when Shashi kapoor confront Amitabh that why he want to ruin them what wrong they did to him and Amitabh replied ask your father, what wrong you or he did with me.
Now its up to you what reason you give for their, (though I would prefer pure business but if you want some personal enmity i wont mind.
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