PreRish OS : Deservedly So - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago

LOVED IT morning flower ❤️ esp bajaj's last words about better opportunities👍🏼 pls write more 

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Posted: 4 years ago

What an extraordinary shots yaarr .why this is OS ..it should be two/three shots..

keep it up more

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey ..Mithila dear🤗

Bit busy with commitments and travel  .Not able to be that active .Shall bounce back soon😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Jodha_Rani

Hey ..Mithila dear🤗

Bit busy with commitments and travel  .Not able to be that active .Shall bounce back soon😆

ok

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

It's raining PreRish one-shots and I'm enjoying getting drenched. 

It's a fantastic OS, Morning.Flower! ⭐️👏

You portrayed their emotions really well. I loved the way they broke the ice and felt at ease. The rain scene was beautifully written and served a major symbolism. RB's last dialogue is everything...❤️

Haha, thank you so much Wist!

The last line is open to interpretation 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Hii hello hii 

this is the first time i am reading your work and I am mind blown. 😳

Aww, thank you so much!

My fav parts 

1) Bajaj knew though he got everything once again it wasnt true happiness😭

Yes! No one can be truly happy in someone's barbaadi.

2) Prerna's turmoil and the way she vent it out especially the choice of words. 👍🏼

Thanks a lot! :)

3)  Bajaj's quick decision making skills. Took her outside 👏

Yeah, Prerna wasn't shutting up so 🤣

4) but you certainly deserve this The way he gave her hope and maintained his image was classic. that was true Bajaj and he would have done exactly the same. 👏 

Thank you!!!

The OS was perfect, ended at the correct place yet left wanting for more and more. just 2 lines and entirely dekhne ka nazariya badal gaya. just like Bajaj says. Very nice OS. Very good I WANT MORE FROM YOU NOW 

I haven't even seen him properly on the screen, so all my understanding of Bajaj comes from you and your posts. So this really means a lot to me!!!

Thanks again, much love!🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

That was a lovely os...The way Rishabh put it out in front of Prerna that she had a world full of opportunities waiting for her was brilliant... Though they were at loggerheads but it seemed like the gates for their better future opened up with the conversation...👍🏼

Thankyou so much!

Yep it's all a new beginning!

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Posted: 4 years ago

I have forgotten if I commented here, I loved your story. ;)) 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ah the last line..😂. I wish someone would knock some sense into the show Prerna as well.. This is great ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

It was amazing...

I am surprised how I missed this one

I really wish someone knocks this sense in Prerna in the show that marrying to Bajaj was actually relieving and nice