it was just too good....i just love it....plz continue....
~sweta~
it was just too good....i just love it....plz continue....
~sweta~
that was really!!!!!! good should should definatly wright som more and please make it very soon cus im lovin wat ur wrint soo far!!!! wounder wats next
later
Godi2
plz cont
i enjoyed their fight mainly the last part where kripa fources angad to say sorry
plz cont fast
waiting for next part
lots of love
esha
thank you guys you made my day my lil brother kept on saying that uguys won't like it i will post really soon after i finish the arguement with my cousin
Originally posted by: Angad's angel
thank you guys you made my day my lil brother kept on saying that uguys won't like it i will post really soon after i finish the arguement with my cousin
lol. ok finish ur argument then continue.š
OK GUYS
I AM GOING TO POST IT IN 10 MINUTES BECAUSE I THINK BY THEN THE ARGUEMENT WILL BE OVER
KYPH:
REINCARNATION
K: MERA SAMAN
A: OTHAO DON'T TELL ME YOU WANT ME TO CARRY YOUR BAGGAGE
K: PLEASE ANGAD (GIVES HIM A SAD PUPPY LOOK)
A: OK
PICKED THE BAGGAGE
A: KYA TUM PORE COSMETIC KI DUKAN KHARID KE LAYE HO
K: PATANE DI NE KAISE DRIVERS RAKH LIYE HAI
A: DRIVER
PUTS YHE BAGGAGE DOWN
A: KHUD OTHALO
K: SORRY PLEASE (YAH SE NIKAAL PHIR BATATIEN HOON LOOK ON HER FACE)
HE PICKS UP THE BAGGAGE AND THEY DRIVE OFF
KHANNA HOUSE
KRIPA GOES INTO THE ROOM IN WHICH AALIYAH IS GETTING READY WHILE MISHTY IS HELPING HER TO GET THE JWELLRY ON
M: TUM JAANTE HO AJJ MERA ADA SAPNAA SACH HO GA
AA: KAISA SAPNAA
M: MEIN HAMESHA SE CHATE THI KI APAN TEENO SHADDI KAR KE EK HI GHAR MEIN JAEEN
K: SORRY DI PAR YEH SAPNAA PURA SACH NAHIN HO PAYE GA KYUNKI ISSE SACH KARNE KE LIYE MUJHE ANGAD SE SHAADI KAR NE HOGI.
M: IT'S OK
AA: ACHA ABHI TO TU TAYAAR HO JA
WHEN KRIPA IS READDY SHE HELPS AALIYAH PUT ON THE JWELLRY WHEN SHE GETS A VISION OF A GIRL GETTING READY. SHE CANNOT SEE THE FACE BECAUSE IT'S ALL BLURRY
IN THE VISION
SHE HEARS SOME VOICE LIKE BETA MEIN JAANT HOON KE TUM YEH SHAADI NAHIN KARNA CHATE HO PAR JO TUMHARE PAPA KAR RAHIEN HAI VO TUMHARE BHLIEN KE LIYE HAI
KRIPA GET OUT OF THE VISION
KRIPA AND MISHTI ARE TAKING AALIYAH DOWN
KRIPA GETS ANOTHER VISION THAT SOMEONE IS BEING TAKEN DOWN AND THAT GIRL IS CRYING
THEN KRIPA SAW THAT A PERSON IS SAYING BETA HAATH AGE KARO ANGHOTHI PHEN LO THEN THAT GIRL RUNS FROM THERE TO HER ROOM AND JUMPS OUT OF THE BALCONY. KRIPA GETS OUT OF THAT VISION
AT THE SAME POINT AALIYAH AND PRITHVI EXCHANGE RINGS
ENGAGEMENT CEREMONY
SOFT MUSIC IS PLAYING WHEN MISHTI COMES OVER TO KRIPA
M: TUM DANCE KYON NAHIN KAR RAHE
K: NAHIN DI
M: PHIRSE VO VISIONS AYE
K: HA
AALIYAH SEES HER SISTERS TALKING AND GOES THERE TO CHIT CHAT
AA: KYA BATIEN HO RAHE HAIN
K: KUCH NAHIN MEIN SIRF BAATA RAHIEN THI KI MUJHE JEEJ
KAISE LAGE
AA: KAISE
K: WELL JITE SMART VITE HAIN NAHIN
P: KYON????????
K: WELL APNE AALIYAH DI KO JO CHUNA HAI
KARTIK=KA
KA: IF YOU GUYS DON'T MIND MAY I ASK MY BEAUTIFUL WIFE FOR A DANCE
M: OK
MISHTI AND KARTIK LEAVE
PREVIEW:ANGAD AND KRIPA DANCING
thanks Jagmeet for posting it for me anyways it got fixed
it was really nice one
plz make angad attracted as in most of fan fic kripa is attracted if it doesnt interrupt ur story line
plz cont fast
waiting for next part
esha
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