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Posted: 18 years ago

it was just too good....i just love it....plz continue....

~sweta~

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Posted: 18 years ago

that was really!!!!!! good should should definatly wright som more and please make it very soon cus im lovin wat ur wrint soo far!!!!  wounder wats next

later

Godi2

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Posted: 18 years ago

plz cont

i enjoyed their fight  mainly the last part where kripa fources angad to say sorry

plz cont fast

waiting for next part

lots of love

esha

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Posted: 18 years ago

thank you guys you made my day my lil brother kept on saying that uguys won't like it i will post really soon after i finish the arguement with my cousin

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad's angel

thank you guys you made my day my lil brother kept on saying that uguys won't like it i will post really soon after i finish the arguement with my cousin

lol.  ok finish ur argument then continue.šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 18 years ago
please continue this is a really lovely story and the way the characters are connected are too good please make Kripa very attracted to Angad but not the reverse please
please continue

Angad's angel thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

OK GUYS

I AM GOING TO POST IT IN 10 MINUTES BECAUSE I THINK BY THEN THE ARGUEMENT WILL BE OVER

Angad's angel thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

KYPH:

REINCARNATION

 

A: AB NAHIN CHALNA

K: MERA SAMAN

A: OTHAO DON'T TELL ME YOU WANT ME TO CARRY YOUR BAGGAGE

K: PLEASE ANGAD (GIVES HIM A SAD PUPPY LOOK)

A: OK

PICKED THE BAGGAGE

A: KYA TUM PORE COSMETIC KI DUKAN KHARID KE LAYE HO

K: PATANE DI NE KAISE DRIVERS RAKH LIYE HAI

A: DRIVER

PUTS YHE BAGGAGE DOWN

A: KHUD OTHALO

K: SORRY PLEASE (YAH SE NIKAAL PHIR BATATIEN HOON LOOK ON HER FACE)

HE PICKS UP THE BAGGAGE AND THEY DRIVE OFF

 

KHANNA HOUSE

 

KRIPA GOES INTO THE ROOM IN WHICH AALIYAH IS GETTING READY WHILE MISHTY IS HELPING HER TO GET THE JWELLRY ON

M: TUM JAANTE HO AJJ MERA ADA SAPNAA SACH HO GA

AA: KAISA SAPNAA

M: MEIN HAMESHA SE CHATE THI KI APAN TEENO SHADDI KAR KE EK HI GHAR MEIN JAEEN

K: SORRY DI PAR YEH SAPNAA PURA SACH NAHIN HO PAYE GA KYUNKI ISSE SACH KARNE KE LIYE MUJHE ANGAD SE SHAADI KAR NE HOGI.

M: IT'S OK

AA: ACHA ABHI TO TU TAYAAR HO JA

WHEN KRIPA IS READDY SHE HELPS AALIYAH PUT ON THE JWELLRY WHEN SHE GETS A VISION OF A GIRL GETTING READY. SHE CANNOT SEE THE FACE BECAUSE IT'S ALL BLURRY

 

IN THE VISION

SHE HEARS SOME VOICE LIKE BETA MEIN JAANT HOON KE TUM YEH SHAADI NAHIN KARNA CHATE HO PAR JO TUMHARE PAPA KAR RAHIEN HAI VO TUMHARE BHLIEN KE LIYE HAI

 

KRIPA GET OUT OF THE VISION

 

KRIPA AND MISHTI ARE TAKING AALIYAH DOWN

 

KRIPA GETS ANOTHER VISION THAT SOMEONE IS BEING TAKEN DOWN AND THAT GIRL IS CRYING

THEN KRIPA SAW THAT A PERSON IS SAYING BETA HAATH AGE KARO ANGHOTHI PHEN LO THEN THAT GIRL RUNS FROM THERE TO HER ROOM AND JUMPS OUT OF THE BALCONY. KRIPA GETS OUT OF THAT VISION

 

AT THE SAME POINT AALIYAH AND PRITHVI EXCHANGE RINGS

 

ENGAGEMENT CEREMONY

SOFT MUSIC IS PLAYING WHEN MISHTI COMES OVER TO KRIPA

M: TUM DANCE KYON NAHIN KAR RAHE

K: NAHIN DI

M: PHIRSE VO VISIONS AYE

K: HA

AALIYAH SEES HER SISTERS TALKING AND GOES THERE TO CHIT CHAT

AA: KYA BATIEN HO RAHE HAIN

K: KUCH NAHIN MEIN SIRF BAATA RAHIEN THI KI MUJHE JEEJ

KAISE LAGE

AA: KAISE

K: WELL JITE SMART VITE HAIN NAHIN

P: KYON????????

K: WELL APNE AALIYAH DI KO JO CHUNA HAI

KARTIK=KA

KA: IF YOU GUYS DON'T MIND MAY I ASK MY BEAUTIFUL WIFE FOR A DANCE

M: OK

MISHTI AND KARTIK LEAVE

 

PREVIEW:ANGAD AND KRIPA DANCING
Angad's angel thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

thanks Jagmeet for posting it for me anyways it got fixed 

Coolest Esha thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

it was really nice one

plz make angad attracted as in most of fan fic kripa is attracted if  it doesnt interrupt ur story line

plz cont fast

waiting for next part

esha