When Akshan Met Kalma OS part 5 (last part ) updated - Page 5

Cute one

Both akshan are in love with each other nad want their own baby its so cute

Plz update the next part asap

Cute update

Akshan conversation and pov was beautiful

Kalma are missing their son and hope misunderstanding is removed soon

Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

Aww so cute

Guddan ka dream mast tha hope it turns true soon ...

Aj with pillu is cute....

Guddu and pillu ko bond mast ho gYa...

Yeh pawar na siyappa Kar Raha he...

Hope galatfami jaldi due ho....

And 4 ko apne apne pyar ka ehsas b ho Jaye....

Nice update and cute one 

Nice chapter

Love guddan's dream about their baby

Kash uski yeh wish puri ho jaye

Omg kalma akshan ko kidnapper samajh rahe hai 

Update soon can't wait to read

Lovely 

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                             Part 5

Aj: guddan chlo hum ise khi khuli jagha pr le chlte hai..yha bht bheed hai..dekho ye preshan ho rha hai....

They take moksh to the silent side of the beach..

Meanwhile, pawar called kalma to that place..

Malhar get call from someone and kalyani spot akshat with moksh...she takes a plastic pipe from one side and reached to him...

Akshat was talking to Malhar slowly but guddan snatched his phone from him and start talking and explaining things to him..

Akshat tries to cool moksh who was crying..and kalyani reached there..

Kal: dekho mujhe ye baccha de do nhi to mai...mai tumhara sr phod dungi...

Aj looked at her in shock and backed away from her while embracing moksh protectively..

Aj: kon hai aap aur mai ye baccha apko kyu du...dur hatiye..

Kal: aap mere pillu ko mujhe hi nhi denge...dijiye ise...

Aj: dekhiye mai police ko bulayunga aap dur hatiye..

Kal: police..aap kya bulaoge..aap jnte nhi aapne kisse panga liya hai...ACP Malhar Rane hai mere pati...aur ye aap jo mujhe mera beta nhi de rhe hai naa...jb wo ayenge to apki..and she turns and see malhar there .

Kal: malhar ji dekhiye ye hmare pillu ko ...

Aj: To ye hai aapki wife..aur ye aapka beta..

Malhar nodded in yes..while confused kalyani spot guddan..

Kal: Aap Jindal sahab hai...guddan ke pati...

Aj: haa..mai hi hu guddan ka jindal sahab..aur mai koii kidnapper nhi hu ..Mrs.Rane..

Kalyani embarrassingly asked sorry from him...

Gudd: aree koii baat nhi..wo itna khadus face bna lete hai to sbko dhoka ho hi jata hai..and start laughing..

Aj glares at her and looked at kalma and malhar gave him same pity look..

Mal: sorry Mr. Jindal ..wo meri wife...

Aj: it's ok ACP maa hai wo...aur fr mai smj sakta hu..mai bhi ek pati hu..

Guddan takes Moksh from Aj and kissed his cheeks and gave him to kalyani..

Gud: bht hi pyara hai aapka beta...hum lord krishna s pray krenge ki hume bhi esa hi beta mile...and then she realized what she said and avoid looking Aj..

While Aj was looking at her intensely...

He came out of his trance when moksh starts giggling  

He came forward and put his hand on his head ..

Aj: sach m Mr and mrs.Rane bht hi pyara baccha hai aapka..

Malhar and kalyani once again apologize and thanks them and take their leave..

@Kalma

Malhar was angry with kalyani...

Mal: kya jroort thi wha ese jane ki ..agr eo sch mai koii kidnapper hota to...kch fikr hi nhi h khud ki ..tumhe kch ho jata to...mai to sb kch kho deta apna..

Kalyani starts crying..

Mal: sorry...mujhe ese...he take her hand and take her to some silent place..

Mal: dekho kalyani tum aur moksh hi ho mere pass..aur jb tum ese gyi to mai bht drr gya...darr gya ki mai tumhe ye bhi nhi bta paya ki mai tumse pyar krta hu..aur tum ese..khi kch ho jata..

Kalyani looked at him in surprise..

Kal: kya kha apne...pyar..aap..

Mal: haa kalyani..pyar ..pyar krta hu m tumse..aur yhi bolne ke liye mai tumhe yha laya tha aur ye sab...

Kalyani hugged him..

Kal: finally apko mujhse pyar ho gya..m kbse wait kr rhi thi kb aap khoge ..kb m btaungi ki m bhi apse kitna pyar krti hu..

Malhar happily hugged her tightly..They know that this trip to Mumbai is special for them..they confess their feeling on this trip they will never forget it..

@Akshan

Aj: wo...wo jo tumne bola ki ..tumhe bhi moksh jesa beta chahiye wo..

Gudd: wo to humne bs ese hi...and she turned to move away with tears...aj held her hand..

Aj : wo ese hi tha to ye ansu..

Gudd: hume pta hai ki hmne us chz ki khwaish kr li jo aap Hume nhi de skte...kam se kam is drd ko aur mt bhdaiye...jane dijiye hme..

Aj: agr ese hi bhagti rhogi mujhse to mujhe kese pta chlega ki tumhe kya chahiye..bolo guddan..

Gudd: hume aap chahiye aapka pyar chahiye de pyenge aap nahi naa..fr chhodiye hume..

Aj: Aur de paya to...fr to nhi jyogi hth chhudakr..bolo..

Guddan looked at him..

Aj : haa guddan m bhi krta hu tumse pyar..bus smjh ni pa rha tha..but jb moksh ko tumhare sath dekha to life mai frse ek spna dekh liya tmhare sath...hmare parivar ka sapna...tb smjh aya ki m to kbse tumhe pyar krta hu bs..ehsaas aaj hua hai...aut tum bhi to kch nhi bolti thi to...

Guddam hugged him..

Gudd: hum to kbse aapka intzar kr rhe the..and he also respond back to her hug..

Now their journey of love starts...

The End

Awww...so cute ..

So pillu is Cupid for all 4of them...

Both the confessions are really cute and unique....

Do write more....

Nice ending 

Loved their confessions

Do write more