Originally posted by: dusk2dawn
Superb ya.. Finally something fun to read about KalMa and AnuSar
My Sunday becomes fun filled day with your update.. 😊
Loved it.. ❤️
Keep on inspiring us to get our creative side out with your writing.. 🤗
Thank you..
Update the next part soon.. 🤗 🥳
Super..I.like this possessive malhar..thinking about family and all..hope u will update next part without any delay..
Originally posted by: porankisrilata
Wow... Superb update... Maza AA gaya...pls update the next part soon.. .
Originally posted by: Shona1991
Are wah...
It was good ..Malhar's frustration was so beautifully penned..Kallu- manaoing mallu with song was best...As usual deshmukh's the villans Brock there moment...Yeh kallu b na dhakkan he hai...Mallu k sath ja rahi he to yeh nhi k enjoy kare...Yaha b aai ki dum bana chahti hai...Khud k sath AnuSar ko b disturb karegi...BTW kallu ka darr hearing Mumbai name was so genuine and the wat mallu convince her was beautiful...Continue soon...Jyada wait karna sehat k liye hanikarak hai...
Originally posted by: kusharberry
Awesome update dear
Loved itAcha malhar was feeling left out by mallu attention seekerI loved hw kallu manofy him .So malhar to spent time with his family him his wifey aur sonPlease do continue soon
Teaser Part 2
Kalyani looked to the left then to the right. She also got up and looked at the boulders alongside Marine Drive.
"Malhar ji, inko dekhkar aapko kuch karne ka mann nahi kar raha.
"KYA? Kya karne ka mann karna chahiye mujhe inko dekhkar Kalyani.
"Wohi jo aapko karna chahiye lekin kar nahi rahe.
"Kalyani, chalo yahan se. Dekh kya rahi ho unhe, CHALO!
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