MG SS: Beholding Trust |last part page 44 | July 6th, 2022 - Page 17

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

How many readers are left ?

I am definitely reading this 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi Suhana  , I'm now looking forward to


Part 4  when you ready to update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Hi Suhana  , I'm now looking forward to


Part 4  when you ready to update

I just need to finish it before posting 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Teaser




Geet was arranging the clothes in the closet. She was tensed. He could make out from her tensed face.


Something was bothering his wife. Maan thought.


Geet could you please bring me a cup of coffee. Maan asked her and he saw that geet was too engrossed in arranging the already arranged closet. Maan went close to her and took the sarees that she was attempting to put in the closet.


Geet come.. we need to talk. He took her hands and found them cold. She looked at her husband and found him looking at her with questions in his eyes.

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You don't want to be here geet? Maan asked.. he wanted to know what is wrong with her. She was tensed, no she was way beyond what a tensed person would look like. 


You don't like it here geet? You don't want to be here.. his words were so simple and so calming that for the first time she ended up crying. 


The bottled up emotions that were choking her insides were finally let go.


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Will post in a day or two

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Posted: 4 years ago

Would love to read it suhana must say u Ra brilliant writer yar m loving all Ur stories totally different n new 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Would love to get the pw of part 3 dear have commented on part 2in blog

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Would love to get the pw of part 3 dear have commented on part 2in blog

Hey you can read it's open 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Would love to read it suhana must say u Ra brilliant writer yar m loving all Ur stories totally different n new 


Thank you ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

superb teaser! update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Right now I am having so much thoughts of this OS. But my hands are having bad seasonal infection.