Mishaan SS.YOU COMPLETE ME( last ,part, page-9 udated 18/4

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Hi guys, here with the.new idea hope you all like it
                  PART- 1
Its been a week since all the events happened. This birthday actually turned to be one which Mishti will never be able to forget 
Mishti was waiting for Veer. She wanted to talk him, apologise to him , she wanted to do whatever it takes to make their relation work 
Everyone now started to worry about Mishti , with every phone call, every door bell she used to think it is Veer but no reply from Veer 
Everyone was sitting on sofa on living area selecting dress designs for Mishti' s wedding . Ruhaan had gone for assignment and also how will he be able to see preparations of wedding of love of his life 

" ding dong " , doorbell rang
Mishti ran towards the door like fanatic as she knew it must be Veer for he wanted to talk to her.
Mishti opened the door
MISHTI: Veer 
(She hugged him )
Thank you, thank you so much for forgiving me, i promise i wont repeat what i did again 
VEER broking the hug 
VEER: I am sorry too, i should have reacted better 

Radhika : Mishti, Veer ko andar to ane do 
Mishti held Veer's hand and brought him inside 
PARI: Thank god Veer aap aa gaye, Mishti ke chehra par muskurahat aa gayi, hum mishti k liye dress dekh rahe the aap batao na kya suit karagaa apki mish par
Everyone shared a hearty laugh
VEER: Mish par to kuch bhi suit karaga, anyways mujhe aap sab se especially Mishti se kuch baat karni thi 
Par i guess its better ki ye baat mein sab se pehle Mishti se kaho

PARI: OO! Honeymoon ke baare mein baat karni hai kya 
Radhika :.Pari! 
Mishti jaa damad ji ko apne room mein lekar jaa 
Mishti: chaliye Veer 
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Mishti and pari's bedroom
Mishti: ( with soft voice ) Thank you Veer apne mujhe maaf kar diya 
I seriously dont know why i did what i did 
Veer: ( holding Mishti' s hand )
With sad deep voice 
I am sorry Mish, i know what i am going to say you will be hurt
Mishti: Veer i wo
Veer cutting mishti
Veer: plz let me speak
Mish i dont what changed but i think its better for both of us to be friends
Mishti: ( with sarcastic smile)
Kya Veer hum dost to hai hi na 
Veer ( with stern voice)
Cupping Mishti's shoulder
Mishti you dont understand, i think it is better for us to break up 
Mishti was shocked, tears filling her eyes she didnt reacted for 10.min 
She was frozen
Veer thought it will be best to leave as Mish needed time to process everything
He left
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      Living room
Radhika : Su mera maan bahut ghabra raha hai itna time ho gaya vo abhi tak bahar nayi aYe 
Su: o ho radhika, itne dino baad mile hai kya pata kuch 
Radhika : Su, meine dekha ta Veer ki ankho mein koi bahut serious baat hai 

Veer came out 
Radhika: Veer bete sab thik hai na, 
Veer: dadi aap mishti se puch lena, mujhe kaam hai 

Veeer Veer  Mishti came out crying 

Everyone was shocked seeing Mishti like this 
Mishti: ( with broken voice). Veer veer ( cupping his cheeks )
I i am so sorry , plz veer i promise mein sab karugi jo tumhe aacha lagta 
I wont fight, i wont speak rudely , i Veer i swear i apologised to Ruhaan plz tum... you punish, na but plz rishta maat thodho 
Everyone was shocked 

Seeing mishti pleeding like this, Radhika was reminded of Mauli , how she wished she didnt have to see one more broken soul

Ruhaan who just came was shocked 
It pricked his heart seeing mishti crying like this , broken and pleeding with veer to give their relation a chance 
Mishti saw Ruhaan and went to him and brought him towards Veer.
Mishti : Veer , i promise i wont ever fight with Ruhaan, kabhi nai dekho hum an friends ban jayega 
Mein na phirse maafi mangati 

Everyone stared crying seeing mishti like this 
Mishti turns towrds Ruhaan 
I am sorry Ruhaan i wont ever do this again plz forgive me 
She started doing sit ups sorry
Ruhaan with tears and shock in his eyes stopped Mishti and saw towards Veer
Veer: Mish plz dont make it hard, plz dont do this i am sorry 
I dont know mish ye saat din i thought alot and i dont know something changed, you changed amd i  dont think i will able to go what i was before .  I am sorry

Mishti gathered herself up 
Look towards Veer
Veer:.i am 
Mishti signalled Veer to stop 
She didnt speak anything , she removed ring and gave it to Veer 

Turned back and went to the room where she had mom and popsie' s photo and signalled Veer to leave 

She went to the room and closed the door 

That day everyone was seen for the first time a shattered mishti but Ruhaan he felt as if someone stabbed his heart, his soul 
He just wanted to hug his mishti, console his mishti and take her far far far away from here 
But alas how could he after all he was nobody to mishti just a PG
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How is it guys it has two more parts do tell me will try to write better 

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