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Posted: 5 years ago
It's looking painful nd it's really horrible...I think maan real parents came to meet him nd geet also may be hurt him but what bat babies?Are they fine?,
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Posted: 5 years ago




Chapter 18


Rajveer smirk as  head was sitting In front of him defeated. 
R- where is my son?
Now I have orders you need to tell me.
H- but it states that if the family who adopted them give their constant then only you can meet him.
R give me address they have to give their constant
H- please try to understand just give me time of a  day & let me tlk to them.

P- fine

Pallavi replied.
R- bur 
P- Raj please one last day.
He nodded and the head left.
...
In km

Whole house filled with guest as tomorrow is the baby shower ceremony of geet. 
Khurana's left no stone left to make the day memorable.
Unaware that after tomorrow they are not more going to be happy.
..

Maan was felling restless since few days and now he is getting more & more restless reason was unknown but he don't even know what to do. 
He was in garden when Ram eyes fell on him . 
R- maan what are you doing here?
You must take rest as tomorrow it's going to be a hectic day.
M- I was about to go.
R- is something bothering you?
M- nhi I was just not feeling good.
Ram get up immediately checking his forehead
R- do you have fever?
M- calm down dad . No I am well but I was feeling restless as something bad going to happen..
I know it's something stupid.

R- calm down maan. 
Nothing bad going to happen  . Everything is going to be well.
You don't take tension and go to sleep.
M- ji papa
Gud night.
R- good night beta.

Maan left toward his room after that unaware from the strom going to come in their life
Nxt day


Khurana mention was filled with a number of guest. Geet parents were there too. To bless the couple & childrens.
Celebration was on full swing. 
Geet made sit on a comfortable sofa with number of guest joking & enjoying but she was irritated totally. Reason was she is not interested in all this at all & presence of meera irk her to no extent.  Janki family was their also  to bless their grandson they were happy for him and proud of their daughter to handle think so well. They can't believe once a carrier oriented girl changed so much after being in love with the man of her life & especially her son maan   .But today she has everything that one can wish. She is a successful businesswomen, daughter, mother & wife. 

..
Function was on full swing when the orphanage head enter in KM. Janki greeted her with a big smile as she invited her last day. But she failed to notice the look on her face. The head blessed geet and cornered janki making her surprise.
H- mrs khurana I want to talk to you. 
J- sure but once we finish all this
H- we don't have that much time. Please try to understand. 
It's  I it's about maa mmaan 
She fumbled with her words in nervousness after all she was the one who did send maan with janki and gave approval fulfilling the process of adoption.
She did saw their love & madness about maan. 
J- what happen?
h- not here 
J- come.
Saying so janki guide her to a lonely corner. 
J- what happen?
Why are you so tensed .
When head narrated her everything.

H- Mrs khurana i want to talk to maan regarding this. I know it's a tricky situation for you. 
But I am bounded by law we have to give them a chance to meet maan after that its only his decision. They can't force him for anything but we need to inform maan about that. 
I I tried to keep them away but now I am bounded. I I'll be honest it's not sudden they are trying to approach since past 2 months I was surprised to know. First they send some men In search of maan as they were out of country but when we denied then day before tomorrow they landed in India to get maan back.

Janki her breath stopped almost. Like someone snatch something precious from her causing her to fell unconscious.

The head became panicked seeing her condition and call khurana's immidetly unaware that someone listen them.
It was geet whose blood boiled listening to all this.

THEY TRICKED HER?
SHE WAS MARRIED TO AN ORPHAN?
HOW DARE THEM?
NOW SHE WON'T CARE ANYMORE  . ENOUGH NOW!

.,..

Few minutes later


Janki open her eyes only to find herself surrounded by all  . She get up as she recall everything causing her to get panicked immediately.
M / y maa stay 
They both stopped her from getting up.
R- what happened to you suddenly?
I told you that na to take care of yourself
M- dad bs abhi 
You please scold maa later on let her take rest now.
We should leave her alone to take rest.
I'll go & bring something for her to eat.
J- no
She held his hand immediately stopping him.
M- i'm coming maa.
Wait 
He left from their.

..
He was in kitchen ordering nakul to make something for janki first as she is not well. 
When geet come their angrily
Helding his hand stopping him in middle.
M- what happen?
What are you doing here?
G- How Dare You?
You Tricked Me? 
Now I Know How Low You Can Fell.
She shouted
M- calm down first
Speak slowly guests are here & maa is not well. 
I'll listen you after all left patiently.

Her anger increase more
G- I'LL SHOUT!
IT'S MY WISH 

Causing all guests to look at them 
G- YOU ARE A CHEATER.
FIRST BOUNDED ME IN AN UNWANTED MARRIAGE THEN FORCED ME TO CARRY YOUR BURDEN. 

Causing all guests to gasp in shock 
But she continued

G- Your Whole Family Cheated Me ! 
You Are An Orphan?
Geet Made A Yuck Face.
HOW DARE YOU TO EVEN TOUCH ME?

But before she proceed further she was slapped by someone.



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Chapter 19

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Edited by Ramjanki - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Super update I am waiting for the realisation what feet go through such a harsh fellow
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Posted: 5 years ago
interesting update 
geet is actually dumb 
poor maan is suffering so much 
eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 5 years ago
Yet to read sorry 
I will soon 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Part 15& 16
Maaneet having twin's .
Bt geet is not at all interested  abt all.
Babaji geet ko thodi akal Dede.
Maan is orphan still getting real love from khurana family
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Yet to read sorry 

I will soon 

take your time😛
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Posted: 5 years ago
Geet is totally dumb girl stupid waiting for next
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Posted: 5 years ago
Thanks for the pm
Nice update
Its geet baby shower
Orphanage head came and tell about  that man to jhanvi..and jhanvi gets unconscious.this whole scene overheard by geet and geet gets angry and shouted at maan that he is orphan
Iam happy that someone slapped geet but who slapped her...
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 5 years ago
How can someone be so heartless! Geet is so disgusting!! She will have to bear immense pain.