AlaSmine FF: Shahi Talwaar.. Part 11 updated on page 21 - Page 6

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Hi Shirin, I don't know if this question make sense or not... But then also how was your first paper... Best of luck and if luck is not so strong then all the best... 

I have updated the next part...do read it and tell me how is it...  😳

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

It's awesome 👏loved it...update soon dear👏

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks dear, I am glad that you like it  😳😳

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

It was fantastic...it was very easy😃...i read the next part...it was fantastic 👏

I really love reading ur uds. While reading the uds I always visualize the scenes between sidneet. Do continue soon

This is a really good story. Thank you for sharing ⭐️

FINALLY Read both 4th & 5th Parts one after another , 

Originally posted by: sanchita1410

I really love reading ur uds. While reading the uds I always visualize the scenes between sidneet. Do continue soon

Thanks sanchita, I am glad that you are able to visualize AlaSmine scenes while reading the updates... As a writer I feared sometimes that whether reader would be able to imagine or visualize th scene properly or not... 

Originally posted by: AProudBookworm

This is a really good story. Thank you for sharing ⭐️

Thanks dear for your appreciation... I am glad that you like it... 

Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

FINALLY Read both 4th & 5th Parts one after another , 

OMGG How Beautifully U described AlaSmine's Feelings , Their Love , Care , Possessiveness for each other ❤️👏👍🏼 . Fabulous update 👏 .

That Kiss part was ☺️ . I could very well imagine SidNeet in it ❤️

Thank u for extending this FS for all of us 🤗 Will wait for ur next update 😃