Samaina SS : Jeevansathi Hum( note on pg 41) - Page 17

Originally posted by: Suparna13

Ek suspense khulta hai to dusra hajir ho jata hai!!!! Rohan mar gaya? Kab kaise?? Eagerly waiting for next update.

With pyaar, Suparna

Originally posted by: Snehapandey12

Update was awesome pr... Mai pdhney Mai itni busy hi gyi ki smjh hi nhi Aaya ki update bdi thi ki choti pr Jo thi mere hisab se itu Mai hi mja gya  😊 pr Kitna royegi Naina 😭 please ha jldi nhi pr thode time Mai SB Kuch Kuch Acha Kr do please your story is damn cute opposite to sameer s attitude 👏 mja AA gya       AUR HA EK REQUEST HAI KI PLEASE JLDI UPDATE KRNA NEXT PART AUR HA IF POSSIBLE PLEASE IN EVERY UPDATE GIVE US A SMALL NOTE ON WHICH DAY IN A WEAK YOU WILL UPDATE   WE ALL WILL WAIT FOR THAT UPDATE 😳        😲thanku  For giving us this story fulfilled with every emotions 😊               LOVE YOUR UPDATES .😛😉 .

Originally posted by: PALAK17

Superb update

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Kudos to the update dear,

Ek Baar padke Dil nai bhara

This update goes to Sameer , he is totally love here ( for me atleast)

Akdoo, gusse wala, and most importantly Somani aur dadi Ko napasand karne wala.

So Rohan bhag gya , well last update me beti thi uski, isme wo aath din pehle hi chala gya.. 

Naina k Sath zabardasti ki shadi toh nai thi ?

Sameer is best here , bhudda Ludak toh nai gya  🤣

My god he is the best.. Biwi se ladai , 

Ramdhari Ko advice Wah.. beta shadi nai karna.. m sure Naina Ko ye pehle se Janta h 

M having an intution , Sunaina ki koi misunderstanding na ho.. 

Naina Sameer Ko shayad nai janti but he definitely knows 

Superb part

Update pretty soon..

Much love 

Suhana 

Originally posted by: dhk2311

Wow just wow 👏... Super duper update.

Loved the Samaina nok jok... And Ramadhari witnessing  their fight is  just like  cherry on cake...😆

Love DK

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hi Meena!  🤗

    Finally I am here.If I would not regret few requests in my life then this would be one.Pushing you to turn this story into a SS.And I sincerely wish this to continue till it reaches its logical and satisfactory climax..Trust me!I am falling in love with this story.And after each update I wish that I should have been a 'velli' ..so that I could reread from beginning..

Meena!Tumne to mayajaal mein daal di ho yaar..And I am in 'Behadh' love with this story.

And how I curse myself for not reviewing the last update.That was such a brilliant piece of writing.And you simply bowled me out with the progression and intriguing way of weaving this tale.Splendid!👏

The way you started the third update ..The songs and then Sameer Naina in car..married.Bowled me out with this fantastic idea of introducing the tale.I learnt a new craft from you.And perhaps I have told you before and repeating it now..You write the best dialogues for each character.No monotony and it feels that the characters alike onscreen mouthing them.And this very attribute makes you a master storyteller.

Adding to your great writing style and skills,I am way too impressed with your skill of maintaining suspense throughout.The marriage itself is a question mark..It seems so much to be in flashback.The missing Rohan from marriage, the hospital case ..Pushing readers into some real brainstorming.And not to forget the subtlities you show through characters like Visakha and Ramdhari has my heart.The assurances that not all is lost and this story is not a sadistic tragedy.

Coming to this update--

My darling!Take a hug..🤗

Since you kept my one request ,I request you to keep my another request too.After this story is complete please try with some publishing agency.This deserves to be a novella.Yeah!Don't stare at me.I mean it.This would be such a pageturner. 

Kaash!I could invade your brain and read all the updates in one go..The urge so greedy.But kya karun? I am so much irrevocably in love with this tale.❤️

That sun rise portion stands out the best for me.I re read the lines and kudos to you for envisioning such a beautiful scene.I could totally feel the warmth of sunshine through your words.

And yet again your dialogues.Sameer sharabi na hota to Naina thappad laga deti shayad..Man! Such indifferent and kinda rude words.But again I know there is lot of backstories surely for what he is today.Its the hardbitten life in our past that makes people stone hearted and least bothered about others.The world sometimes takes away the innocence and good nature of heart by playing with it carelessly and mostly in fraudulent ways.I am now intrigued to know why the man who could love till last breath,care till lees is so occupied in his world of self and drinks.Why has he become such a slave of his loyal drinks?

And coming to Naina..With Rohan passing away I don't think she is in any better state.The girl is too courageous to accept an all new birth of relationship with a stranger over dead ashes of a loved one.My heart breaks for her.😭 This is such a cruel joke of destiny.And here again you justified the title..

"Two broken people coming together to be complete."

When I am in concluding phase of reviewing this piece,I am remembered of Deborah Cox..Her words pretty sum The updates and Naina's state -

"So I placed my heart under lock and key

To take some time,and take care of me.

But I turn around and you're standing here".

How these two people who have locked away their hearts will open up to each other and become Jeevansathi..Needless to say I am excited to core and waiting to read the next updates.

Please update soon and thanks for the PM.

With love-

Minu

Originally posted by: Shippu92

Read all the chap in one go.. Good concept, well written.. Looking forward for further update.. 

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

I think I couldn't make it clear m sorry for that.. . Rohan ko gye hue 8 din hue mtlab he died 8 days ago.. .I inserted this line to show that story has moved 8 days ahead . But I m extremely sorry it wasn't clear and hence the confusion

I am glad u r able to connect with Sameer even when he's so different from that shown on the show😃

Sunaina Naina Sameer angle k liye wait karna hoga😉

Thank you for appreciating😃

Originally posted by: Yudkbh

Main nhi khel rha tumhare sath...

Matlb aise koi karta hai kya har update ke baad lagta hai next kab aayega 

There are so many questions running in my mind. About marriage about rohan about sameer past.

So update soon and keep it up  👏