Originally posted by: doublecross
Roses are red
Violets are blue
The grass is green
The sky is blue
And the reality is am stuck with you.
Pretty much sums up naina s predicament for the current update and vice versa. Two people brought together by the twist of fate, the twist is yet to be unravelled by the stoic author who chose to leave her readers in tenterhooks. The bickering seemed so like our Samaina though here the backdrop seems to be menacing. I like this one way too much meenakshi. And I must say the intrigue, interest, suspense that you have generated with this one is impeccable. It's like riding a roller coaster where at every juncture there's a new turn. To be saying that am hooked completely would be an injustice since am left completely parched after every update. It's like reading a suspense thriller whose pages turn on their own accord while you keep reminding yourself that you'll sleep after the sleep chapter until you finish the book and are left red eyed for an entire day. So you have a cracker up your sleeve. Am amazed at your thoughts since an amateur can never think the way you do so buddy you have big time polished your skills to a new pinnacle and now you are penning an absolute blockbuster with finesse! So congratulations on that!
Now coming to the story, well since the last two updates a lot has transpired. I love this pace that you have kept for this one since it makes it irresistible! Rohan has a daughter!?!? Whoa! That literally made me fall off my chair. But in my heart I was smiling gleefully since it was that ray of hope that samaina would be together for a loyalist like me. But the question remains did naina know about this daughter? If so then what were the dynamics if their relationship like since Rohan doesn't look like the typical anti hero. On the other hand we see a man in answer who is still mourning his past while drowning his sorrows in alcoholism yet he is doting brother to his younger sibling. But what made sameer be like the way he is? Was is a betrayal? Or some tragedy? And last but not the least. The story started with naina being on the threshold to marry Rohan while by the third part she is married off to sameer his older brother amidst a menacing disastrous and dark backdrop. Naina hints at a tragedy in this part what is it? So am really scratching my head and trying to find my own answers while you prepare to enthrall us with yet another smashing part.
The title had somewhere given me an inkling that the journey of being life partners wouldn't be an easy one. And they would be tried and tested before the reach the very peak of their togetherness. So yes it starts being a bed of thorns which would eventually be turned into a bed of grass and next a bed of violets and finally there'll be roses all along.
I know I haven't been the best of readers since I seldom visit the forums these days for obvious reasons and also the fact that my little devil has developed limbs now makes matter worse. And since I don't believe in leaving a cursory message on any story that am reading as I believe its an insult to the author who goes to great length to spin out each update, so usually am late or absent from threads. For that am sorry. I'll try and be regular but like I said sometimes 24hrs seem too less for me these days. So if you can please bear with me or you can choose to drop me from your pm list since I know it can be quite frustrating as a writer to put up with such readers who don't even bother to share their two pence on a story that you so lovingly pen and even go at great lengths sometimes even straining yourself.
Do am genuinely sorry.
Keep writing and keep entertaining, you are a powerhouse of talent whose every aspect should be exhibited and unleashed in the truest sense and that can only happen when you continue churning such amazing stuff!
Love
Pooja
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