Samaina SS : Jeevansathi Hum( note on pg 41) - Page 11

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Posted: 5 years ago
Thanks for the PM... Coming back to SS...It was a Dharthi phaad update with horror Twists... Naina Is Now MRS.NAINA SAMEER MAHESHWARI WNted to know what happened ... Do update more coz this one was Lil bit shorter.. And u have stopped at the cliffhanger...Want to know who they tied their knots together.. And Loved Sameer care for her ..He understood that she is uncomfortable so he shouted to him(driver)..Do update NEXT ONE WHENEVER U ARE FREE...AND DO PM ME...
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome update dear πŸ‘
Samaina ki shaadi hogyi , mujhe pta tha πŸ˜†


Itna interest hai thoda jaldi update deba please ,


Please send pm.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Please update next part ... Ab wait nhi Hoga yrrr awsome story line
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Posted: 5 years ago
Hi Meenakshi Di,
I am officially hooked to this story. This is awesome!

The scene in the car was funny with the Driver Chacha trying to make the 'romantic' mood for the newlyweds! Both of them fighting like a typical married couple!
Naina saying hoga apna zamana ka and his reaction made me laugh out loud. πŸ˜† But, on a serious note, I am curious about this declaration of his past being a racing champion?!

I really liked the line where she wondered which was heavier; the ornaments or her ordeals? Very good! And, good to know that Vishaka accepted Naina wholeheartedly. The latter actually needs someone, she is so lonely and even more alone after the betrayal from the one she love. She is in the process of discovering her true home, where she rightfully belongs!
I am guessing that Vishaka is in hospital..but why? Is she sick because of the shock of Rohan not coming? Where is Rohan? Did he chicken out in the last minute or couldn't he reach the venue? That comes to me asking you how did Sameer reach the wedding place?

The pungent odour will soon be replaced by the sweet smell of companionship and care!
and, something I liked is the bond established between Ramdhari and Naina. He is so sweet!

Ab, jaldi update kar lo, please! πŸ€—

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Posted: 5 years ago
Inki shaadi kaise ho gyi!! Not that I'm not liking it, but yaar mujhe laga ab flashback ayega, ab flashback ayega.. Lekin aya hi nhi! I am curious
And hospital mein kaun h? Kyu h?

Aur Naina ne Sameer ko kab kaise galat samjha?

I clearly hv too many questionsπŸ˜† jaldi se answers mil jaye
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome. . Can't wait for next update
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Posted: 5 years ago
Pehle to big sorry suhani dii
I am very late in commenting you for the two updates...
Kya karu thoda busy Chal rahi hu .
March chal raha h πŸ˜‰πŸ˜•πŸ˜†
Totally loved it .
Especially the recent one ... Dhamaka de diya aapne to samaina ki esi sudden marriage krwa kr...
Maza hii aagaya...
I am looking forward to read this even more...
Keep the BEAUTIFUL updates coming

Keep smiling
LabhyaπŸ˜ƒ

P.s- I'll try to do on time comments now...
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Posted: 5 years ago
Hey dear
Just read your other story dil ka rishta
It's thread is locked so commenting here

Just a beautiful thought it was just so good
How you portrayed Sameer's emotions were best.
The way Anand finally stood for Naina as her father I am in awe with him.
And last part
Wow what a mind-blowing plan but agar kuch ho Jata toh pta nai Sameer kya karta
Taiji and Rakesh again villians (well they deserve)
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Posted: 5 years ago
Hey suman this is not done yaar u left us on edge (this post was awesome,).. Samaina got married, and we have so many unanswered questions..
The car scene was hilarious at the same time felt bad for our couple especially Naina..this forced marriage is gonna be difficult and different for both of them.. Am sure u would make it a lovely read.

Sameer is so devastated, sunaina must have done something so harsh that he's lost all hope.. and our Naina would be his medicine that will heal him mentally and emotionally for all the past pain..

Am so very eager to read the next part yaar, this one had too much of suspense, shaadi, hospital , etc..

Waiting for another dhamakedar post filled with suspense..

PS. Thanks for the PM

Lots of love πŸ€—
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Posted: 5 years ago
Roses are red
Violets are blue
The grass is green
The sky is blue
And the reality is am stuck with you.

Pretty much sums up naina s predicament for the current update and vice versa. Two people brought together by the twist of fate, the twist is yet to be unravelled by the stoic author who chose to leave her readers in tenterhooks. The bickering seemed so like our Samaina though here the backdrop seems to be menacing. I like this one way too much meenakshi. And I must say the intrigue, interest, suspense that you have generated with this one is impeccable. It's like riding a roller coaster where at every juncture there's a new turn. To be saying that am hooked completely would be an injustice since am left completely parched after every update. It's like reading a suspense thriller whose pages turn on their own accord while you keep reminding yourself that you'll sleep after the sleep chapter until you finish the book and are left red eyed for an entire day. So you have a cracker up your sleeve. Am amazed at your thoughts since an amateur can never think the way you do so buddy you have big time polished your skills to a new pinnacle and now you are penning an absolute blockbuster with finesse! So congratulations on that!


Now coming to the story, well since the last two updates a lot has transpired. I love this pace that you have kept for this one since it makes it irresistible! Rohan has a daughter!?!? Whoa! That literally made me fall off my chair. But in my heart I was smiling gleefully since it was that ray of hope that samaina would be together for a loyalist like me. But the question remains did naina know about this daughter? If so then what were the dynamics if their relationship like since Rohan doesn't look like the typical anti hero. On the other hand we see a man in answer who is still mourning his past while drowning his sorrows in alcoholism yet he is doting brother to his younger sibling. But what made sameer be like the way he is? Was is a betrayal? Or some tragedy? And last but not the least. The story started with naina being on the threshold to marry Rohan while by the third part she is married off to sameer his older brother amidst a menacing disastrous and dark backdrop. Naina hints at a tragedy in this part what is it? So am really scratching my head and trying to find my own answers while you prepare to enthrall us with yet another smashing part.


The title had somewhere given me an inkling that the journey of being life partners wouldn't be an easy one. And they would be tried and tested before the reach the very peak of their togetherness. So yes it starts being a bed of thorns which would eventually be turned into a bed of grass and next a bed of violets and finally there'll be roses all along.


I know I haven't been the best of readers since I seldom visit the forums these days for obvious reasons and also the fact that my little devil has developed limbs now makes matter worse. And since I don't believe in leaving a cursory message on any story that am reading as I believe its an insult to the author who goes to great length to spin out each update, so usually am late or absent from threads. For that am sorry. I'll try and be regular but like I said sometimes 24hrs seem too less for me these days. So if you can please bear with me or you can choose to drop me from your pm list since I know it can be quite frustrating as a writer to put up with such readers who don't even bother to share their two pence on a story that you so lovingly pen and even go at great lengths sometimes even straining yourself.
Do am genuinely sorry.

Keep writing and keep entertaining, you are a powerhouse of talent whose every aspect should be exhibited and unleashed in the truest sense and that can only happen when you continue churning such amazing stuff!

Love
Pooja
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