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Strawberry and Red rose Part 6

It was raining heavily...
Guddan was about to go out of the office.Akshat called her:Guddan,it's raining heabily.So i will drop you.
Guddan:No thanks Sir.I will go by myself.
Akshat:Guddan...i am offering the lift as a friend,not as your Boss.So if you refuse it your best friend will be upset.
Guddan did not have any other option than to go with Akshat.
Akshat and Guddan were in the car.
Akshat:Rain is so beautiful.Right?
Guddan:Yes.

(AkshAn's look)

Akshat:You don't feel like dancing in the rain?
Guddan:No Sir.
Akshat:Guddan...here i am sitting near to you as your friend.Don't call me Sir.Call me Akshat.I am longing to hear it from you.
Guddan's lips shivered.
Akshat:Come on Guddan...call me Akshat.I will never fed up of listening to you calling me Akshat.Last 5 years i missed it.I missed your voice.
Guddan:Akshat...
Akshat was very happy.
Akshat:Your voice is so sweet Guddan...sweet like strawberry...your lips are beautiful like a red rose.
Guddanwas reminded of Akshat tasting her lips imagining that it was strawberry...and Akshat planning to give strawberry and red rose to Sameera.Guddan went mad thinking of it.
Guddan:Stop it Akshat.
Akshat:What happened Guddan?
Guddan:Nothing.
Guddan tried to calm herself.
Akshat stopped the car.
Guddan looked at Akshat.
Akshat:Guddan...i feel like dancing in the rain.
Guddan:Akshat!
Akshat:During college days you used to love dancing in the rain.
Guddan:Yes.But that time you used to hate dancing in the rain.You refused to dance with me fearing that you will catch cold.
Akshat:Yes.But i am not having that fear anymore.
Guddan:Why?
He said in his mind:Because now i am in true love.When there is love nothing else bothers me.
Akshat saw beautiful rain drops in Guddan's eyes.He smiled.
Akshat got out of the car.
Guddan also got out of the car.He held her hand.
Akshat:Guddan...please dance with me in this beautiful rain.Please don't say no.Please...
Guddan could'nt resist herself when he started dancing with her.
They imagined the instrumental music of 'Kuch kuch hota hai..' in the background.

Akshat's eyes were going blind by the rain drops filled with his mad love for Guddan.He felt that  her lips 
looked like strawberry.He could'nt control himself.He tasted it.Guddan felt the sensation.Guddan forgot that this kind of a moment only broke her heart 5 years back.She was living in the present moment.Akshat started tasting her completely as her wet body curves tempted him.
Akshat said softly:Guddan...you look so beautiful in this red saree.
Suddenly she came back to her senses and went backward.Her eyes were wet.
Guddan:What did you do Akshat?Are you not ashamed to do this with me?You say that i am your best friend...still...how can one do this to his best friend?You are a cheater...you are a coward...
Her words pricked his heart.
Akshat:Guddan!
Guddan:Don't you know that i am a mother?
Akshat:Yes,i know that you are a mother.Pihu is your daughter.But who is her father?
Guddan was shocked by his question.She sweated.
Guddan:I told you... my husband is in the Gulf.

Akshat:Lie.You are not married.
Guddan was shocked.
She thought:How did Akshat know that i am not married?
Akshat:If you were married you would not have allowed me to touch you this way..because you are well cultured lady who values relationships.You can't even cheat your life partner even for a moment.
Guddan was numb.
Akshat lifted her chin:Guddan...tell me..that day after Sameera's birthday party what happened?
Guddan looked at him unbelievingly.
Akshat:You may be wondering why i doubt about that day.I don't know how...God showed me some glimpses.I want to know whether it was right.Did we...did we come closer?
Guddan closed her eyes.Her eyes leaked.
Guddan:Yes.
Akshat was shocked:Then why did'nt you tell me that Guddan?
Guddan:How can i tell you?You had forgotten everything.You were after Sameera.

Akshat:So Pihu is our daughter?The symbol of our love?
Guddan:Yes Akshat.
Both of them were very emotional.
Akshat:My God!Pihu is my daughter.Guddan...i feel so happy...
She became happy relieving herself.She was getting her Akshat back.Pihu was getting her father.
Akshat caressed her face.He pulled her towards him.They both shared a sensuous eye lock.
His fingers went through her while her fingers went through his neck.His finger got stuck up to his chain.His chain struck her eyes.She could'nt believe her eyes as it was her chain which Akshat had snatched from her neck at the rail way station.
Guddan became emotional:Akshat...this chain...
Akshat:Yes Guddan...i was missing you very badly.After you left only i understood that i was breathing you.I wore this chain of yours.This became a part of me.I used to feel that you were with me.
Guddan became so emotional that she went into his arms.

Akshat:Guddan...i can't wait to see my daughter.

They rushed to Guddan's house.Akshat carried Pihu in his arms and started kissing her.
Akshat:Pihu...my daughter...
Guddan:Pihu...this is your father.
She was surprised:Really?
She kissed him back.
P:Dad...where were you all these years?I missed you a lot.

Akshat:I will never leave you and go my daughter.

P:Really?
Akshat:Yes.
Pihu was very happy.
Guddan and Rano looked at Pihu enjoying with Akshat.They became emotional.
R:Guddan...truth can't be hidden for long.That's why Akshat understood what the truth is though it took some time.You both are meant for each other.That's why destiny brought you both to each other.

Guddan smiled.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Awesome 
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Amazing
Finally Akshan cleared all mu and are together pihu got her father
loved it
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Finally the truth is out 
Akshat was so happy after knowing pihu is his daughter 

The raindance and their kiss really well written

Is it the end 

If it is then write an epilogue 

Will be waiting
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Posted: 5 years ago
Finally they are back together!
Wow nice one

Do write an epilogue.. Pihu needs a sibling too😆

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Superb update 
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Fabulous update
Akshan rain was so awesome
Finally all misunderstanding are cleared and father daughter met each other
Please write further scenes showing their married life before ending it
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Strawberry and Red rose Part 7

Rano left the room allowing Akshat,Guddan and Pihu to have private moments.
Pihu told Akshat:Papa...please buy strawberry icecream for me.
Akshat was surprised:Strawberry iceceam?You want strawberry icecream itself?
P:That's my favourite.


Guddan:Akshat...your daughter is also like you.She is crazy about strawberry.
Akshat and Guddan smiled.
AKSHAT:I will get you strawberry icecream now.
GUDDAN:No need Akshat.It's raining outside.


AKSHAT:So what?We are already drenched.Right?
She smiled.
He went out and came back after some time with family pack strawberry icecream.
Pihu jumped with joy.Akshat fed her icecream with spoon.

The next night...
Guddan was blushing thinking of the rain moments.
Suddenly Akshat appeared before her.She was shocked.
GUDDAN:No no...it's only my dream.Why i am always imagining that Akshat is with me?
Akshat laughed:Guddan...it's me.It's not your dream.
Guddan touched him.
GUDDAN:My God!You are here?
He blinked his eyes beautifully.
AKSHAT:I wanted to see you immediately.So i came here.
GUDDAN:If anybody sees..
AKSHAT:No one will see as Pihu and Rano aunty are in deep sleep.
Guddan was relieved and she smiled.
Akshat caressed her face emotionaly.Guddan's smile was very sweet.Her dimples were making her look cute.
AKSHAT:Guddan...i was waiting for this moment for a long time.This moment should have arrived 5 years back,then we would not have suffered even a bit.
Guddan did'nt understand what Akshat meant.
AKSHAT:Guddan...you know that strawberry is my favourite.I want to eat strawberry now.
She giggled:You are always hungry to eat strawberry.You eat strawberry.I have no problem.
He took strawberry from his bag and bit it.
AKSHAT:It's so tasty.Guddan...i want you to share my strawberry till the end of my life.
Guddan was surprised as she knew that giving strawberry and red rose is the dream proposal of Akshat.
Akshat kept the strawberry close to her lips.She bit the strawberry which Akshat bit.Akshat bit it again.
AKSHAT:Since you bit it this tastes better now.
Guddan became shy.
Akshat took a red rose:Guddan...will you marry me?


She blushed.

She held the red rose he was holding.


GUDDAN:Yes,i am waiting to be your wife Akshat.I was always waiting to be your life partner.You know that.Right?
He smiled.
GUDDAN:Akshat...after the rainy night when you returned to my life showering love upon me itself i considered myself as your wife and put vermilion on my forehead in your name.
That time only Akshat noticed vermilion on her forehead with a surprise.
AKSHAT:I love you Guddan.

 


Guddan felt that she was the most happiest lady in this world as she heard the most romantic three magical words from Akshat.
GUDDAN:I love you too.

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They shared a sweet eye lock expressing their love for each other..




Akshat brought his Dadimaa Savitri devi to Guddan's house.Guddan touched her feet.Savitri blessed her.
She cupped Guddan's face in her arms:Because of my grand son you had to undergo so much of pain.
GUDDAN:Nothing like that Dadimaa.


S:You are so beautiful.You are perfect for Akshat.


She smiled.Akshat smiled at her.She was smiling at him also.
S:I can't wait to see my grand child.
Pihu came.
GUDDAN:Pihu...this is your grandmother.
P:Wow!


Savitri hugged and kissed her with tears in her eyes.

Wedding...
Guddan appeared to be a red beauty in her red lehenga.Akshat could'nt control himself.
AKSHAT:Guddan...you look so pretty like a red rose.


She blushed.

He keep admiring her beauty without being able to take his eyes off her..

 


She could not believe that her dream to be Akshat's bride was coming true.
She looked at Akshat emotionally.

Akshat's eyes touched her softly.


They exchanged garlands happily.

 


AKSHAT:Guddan...I take you into my heart as my wife.
Guddan: Akshat,I take you into my heart as my husband.
They shared a beautifil eye lock.
When Akshat tied Mangalsuthra around her neck she found it the most blissful moment of her life.

When he adorned the parting of her hair with vermilion she could'nt express her emotion of being her dearest one's wife.


Akshat and Guddan took seven vows by taking seven steps around the sacred fire.They were promising to be with each other through out.Guddan was becoming more and more emotional.She felt that she was a complete married lady.



In their room...
The room was decorated with flowers.Akshat smelled Guddan.She could feel his breath.She was freezing because of the sensation.


AKSHAT:Though these flowers have fragrance i can feel only your fragrance now.Because you are a fragrant red rose.Who can say that your lips are not made of red rose petals?
She blushed.
He lifted her chin with his fingers.


She was shy.


AKSHAT:Guddan...we took seven vows.But now you have to take one more vow.
Guddan did'nt understand it.
AKSHAT:You have to promise me that you will let me have strawberry at any time.
She burst into laughter.She nodded her head:Yes.
He always giggled along with her.
AKSHAT:Then...i want strawberry now.I am dying to taste strawberry.
GUDDAN:But where is  this strawberry kept?
Suddenly Guddan realized that what Akshat meant is he wants his strawberry which is Guddan.
She blushed.
Guddan was shy:Akshat...you can always have your strawberry.
He smiled as he felt that her words were sweet as honey.


They both shared a sensuous eye lock with a smile which was sweet like strawberry.He started showering love upon his strawberry madly.


When they were in each other's arms...
AKSHAT:Guddan...i think you are tired.You need to take bath to be fresh.
GUDDAN:Yes.
AKSHAT:Can i bath you with strawberry milk filled with red rose petals?
She blushed giving him the consent to do that.He took her arms and led her to the pool filled with strawberry milk and red rose petals making her cool and romantic through out.He gave her a passionate bath.


They felt that the night was more beautiful as it was beautified by their love.They felt that the stars were shining more witnessing their passionate love.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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awsome one
loved it finally they married 

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Nice one 
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