Strawberry and Red rose AkshAn SS epilogue-pg8

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Strawberry and Red rose Part 1

 

Akshat saw Guddan murmuring and entering the college building.
AKSHAT:Hey Guddan...you look so angry.
G:That Maithili...and her stupid friends teased me Akshat.


AKSHAT:How?What did they say?
She made a baby face which made Akshat giggle.
G:She called me behenji...
Akshat burst into laughter:The whole college including me calls you behenji.You are used to hearing it always.Still you are getting hurt?
G:Akshat...you are my best friend.If you tease me it's ok for me.I don't get hurt at all.But if someone else teases me i get hurt.
Akshat smiled pulling her red cheeks.
Suddenly his eyes struck the stylish hot girl Sameera who passed by.
AKSHAT:Wow!Sameera is so hot.
Guddan became jealous.
She knew Akshat's secret crush on Sameera.
G:Akshat...you are always after Sameera.
AKSHAT:That is because i love her.
Guddan got hurt.
G:Akshat...it's not love.What you have for Sameera is only crush.An attraction towards a beautiful girl.
AKSHAT:What nonsense!How can you say that?
G:I am your friend and i can read your mind.
Sameera turned back and smiled at him.She winked her eye at him.
Guddan was irritated.
Akshat was flattered.He was on cloud nine.
She walked away.
AKSHAT:Guddan...Sameera also loves me.
Guddan was becoming insecure.
AKSHAT:Guddan...my wish is to marry the most modern...stylish girl of this college.Sameera.Once i will propose her giving strawberry and red rose.
Guddan felt sad.She thought:Akshat...propose me with strawberry and red rose.Or let me be your strawberry and red rose.
Suddenly Guddan thought:Akshat wants a modern girl.I will wear a modern dress and impress Akshat.

Guddan wore pant and a white shirt.
G:Akshat will be impressed.
She rushed to the college.Everybody was surprised to see Guddan.Slowly they laughed.
Akshat and Sameera also burst into laughter.


AKSHAT:What was the need for this?
Maithili:Behenji can never change.
Guddan was really hurt.


Akshat got angry and shouted at Maithili:Stop it Maithili.Don't dare to insult my best friend Guddan.
Guddan got some relief when Akshat supported her.
Sameera:If you want i can groom you.So that you can look modern and stylish.
AKSHAT:No need Sameera.
He looked at Guddan holding her hand:Guddan...you are beautiful in the way you are.You don't need to change.


Guddan blushed.


S:By the way...today is my birthday.


AKSHAT:Wow!Happy birthday...
G:Happy birthday Sameera.
S:Thanks a lot.But you both have to come to my beach house in the afternoon for the party.
AKSHAT:Sure.
Sameera looked at Akshat deeply:I will be waiting.

Akshat made Guddan wore a hot beach dress forcefully.
G:Akshat...i feel shy.
AKSHAT:You can't cover your whole body with duppatta and go to the beach.Anyways you look hot.My grooming worked out.
G:Really?
AKSHAT:Yes.
Guddan became very happy.


They went for the party.Everybody was stunned to see Guddan in a hot outfit.
Guddan became overconscious about her dressing when others started staring at her.
Akshat whispered:Guddan...relax...
Guddan took a deep breath to relax.
S:You look really stylish Guddan.
G:Thank you Sameera.
Guddan looked at Maithili.Maithili was jealous of Guddan's looks.Guddan gave her a victorious smile leaving her irritated.
Akshat gave a orchid bouquet to Sameera with Guddan:Many many happy returns of the day.
S:Thank you.Lovely.I love orchids.
Akshat and Sameera smiled at each other.
Akshat took a guitar and sang for Sameera:
Chand Sitare, Phool Aur Khushboo 
Chand Sitare, Phool Aur Khushboo 
Ye To Saare Purane Hain 


Taza Taza Kali Khili Hai 
Hum Uske Deewane Hain...(Kaho na pyar hai).
Seeing Akshat and Sameera sharing eye lock 


Guddan became insecure.
Akshat got drunk at the party.After the party Akshat took Guddan to the proper beach to have fun in the water.He splashed water over her.
G:Akshat...you are not in your senses.You are drunk.
AKSHAT:Come on Guddan...
He pulled her towards him.
Her heart beat fast.
They sat on the rock.Guddan held his hand happily.They both were cheerful with each other.

G:I loved this place so much.Really enjoyed a lot with you Akshat.
AKSHAT:Guddan...i want to eat strawberry..


G:Akshat...here there is no strawberry.
AKSHAT:You are lying.I can see strawberry.I am going to taste it now.You know i can die for strawberry.I love it.I'm crazy for strawberry.
He tasted strawberry without realizing that what he tasted was not actually strawberry,but Guddan's sweet lips.Guddan could'nt resist as it was her Akshat.He tasted strawberry more and more making Guddan his in every way.



Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Amzing 
guddan feeling insecure for akshat
loved it
continue soon
Posted: 5 years ago
New concept ... nice attempt
Anupriya Kapoor and Nishant Singh Malkani were coactors in some show!!??? I didn't know that...

Anyways coincidentally I too had chosen Anupriya Kapoor to play one of the roles in my Akshan story too😆

Continue soon 
Edited by Raglak_akshan - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful start👏Guddan and Akshat are best friends😳Cute and innocent Gudda😳He loves to pull her legs😛She decided to impress him and be a modern girl but all laughed at her attemptGood he stood as a support to her😊It's Sameera's birthday and she invited them for a beach party😳He making her look stylish and they enjoying in the party😳OMG he kissed her thinking it's strawberry☺️Song and pics❤️Edited by Vampire2468 - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Refreshing concept
Akshat and Guddan in college 
Akshat tasted Guddan's lips for strawberries awww so cute☺️
Posted: 5 years ago
Nice chapter dear
Love it
Update soon
Posted: 5 years ago
Thank u so much my dear friends
Edit credits to the real editor

Strawberry and red rose Part 2

 

Akshat woke up from the sleep.Guddan was blushing thinking of what happened between them.She was shy to face him.

AKSHAT:Guddan...i fell asleep.
GUDDAN:You were drunk...and then...after what you did you got tired.So you fell asleep.
AKSHAT:What did i do to get tired?After playing in the water i just fell asleep.Right?
Guddan got the biggest shock of her life.
She thought:The moment which i considered the most is not in Akshat's memory at all.





She tried to control her tears knowing that her eyes were becoming wet.
AKSHAT:Let us go back Guddan.
GUDDAN:Yes.
AKSHAT:Guddan...you know...while sleeping i dreamt of Sameera feeding me strawberry.It was such a romantic dream.I never wanted the dream to get over.
Guddan's heart broke.
AKSHAT:I wish i would be able to marry Sameera soon and make the dream real.
Guddan was shattered.
She thought:Akshat can't understand that his feelings for Sameera is not love.But he will understand who his real love is.

After a month...
Guddan felt dizzy and started vomiting.She consulted a Doctor.
Dr:Congrats...you are pregnant.
Guddan was shocked.
Slowly she got relieved.
Guddan thought:I will tell the truth to Akshat.When he comes to know about this he will accept me.He may even realize that he loves me.
She imagined her feeding strawberry to Akshat singing:

Mere humsafar mere humsafar mere paas aa mere paas aa
Mere humsafar mere humsafar 
mere paas aa mere paas aa
Humein saath chalna hai umr bhar 
mere paas aa mere paas aa
Humein saath chalna hai umr bhar 
mere paas aa mere paas aa
Mere paas aa
Mere humsafar mere humsafar 
mere paas aa mere paas aa

Guddan gave him a red rose.He took with a smile.
GUDDAN:Shall we dance?
AKSHAT:Yes.
He kept the red rose behind his ear.They both chuckled.He held her hand and started dancing.They were lost in each other.



Hai safar ye hamara naya naya
Kisi pal andhera jo ho gaya
Hai safar ye hamara naya naya
Kisi pal andhera jo ho gaya
Kahin kho na jaayein ye reh guzar
Mere paas aa mere paas aa


Humein saath chalna hai umr bhar 
mere paas aa mere paas aa
Mere paas aa
Mere humsafar mere humsafar 
mere paas aa mere paas aa...(Refugee).

Akshat caressed her face:I love you Guddan.


GUDDAN:Love you too Akshat.
Suddenly she realized that it was only her dream.She smiled.

Guddan went towards Akshat.
AKSHAT:Guddan...i was waiting for you.
She smiled.
AKSHAT:I was waiting to tell you something.
Her eyes sparkled.


He showed a red rose and strawberry.
She blushed knowing that her dream was coming true.Akshat was going to propose her.

AKSHAT:I am going to propose Sameera.
Guddan was shocked.
AKSHAT:I wanted to tell you this before i approach Sameera.I just can't anymore.I am crazy for Sameera.
Guddan was shattered.She was trying hard not to cry.Akshat ran away.Guddan cried.



Unfortunately Sameera was absent that day.Akshat was really upset.
He rang her up:Sameera..why did'nt you come to college today?I missed you.


Sameera smiled:I have cold Akshat.Anyways happy to know that you missed me.
He smiled:Will you come tomorrow.I want to give you a surprise.
She waited eagerly for that surprise.
S:I will come for sure.I don't want to miss your surprise.



He smiled:Will wait for you.Bye.
She smiled:Bye.

The next day Akshat went towards Sameera hiding the red rose and strawberry.
AKSHAT:Sameera...
Sameera's face was dull.
S:Akshat...why did Guddan leave the college suddenly?
Akshat was shocked:What?
S:Only a month was left for the college to close.Then why?
AKSHAT:Guddan left the college?She did'nt tell me.My God!I have to stop her from going.She must be in the railway station i guess.I hope so.


His red rose and strawberry fell down from his hand while he rushed to the railway station in a hurry.Sameera saw it.He took the red rose and strawberry from the floor.
S:So this was Akshat's surprise.He was going to propose me.But he left everything knowing that Guddan was leaving him forever.
She became upset.

Akshat reached the railway station.
His eyes searched for Guddan with hope.

 

 


Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Thank you..Yes they acted together in Mile jab hum tum
You also added Anupriya?Cool

Originally posted by Raglak_akshan


New concept ... nice attempt
Anupriya Kapoor and Nishant Singh Malkani were coactors in some show!!??? I didn't know that...

Anyways coincidentally I too had chosen Anupriya Kapoor to play one of the roles in my Akshan story too😆

Continue soon 
Posted: 5 years ago
Awosme i hope sameera is not a negative character here
felt bad for guddan hope akshat realise  his love for guddan soon
loved it
continue the next part soon
Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome story
Love it
Continue soon

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