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Posted: 5 years ago
#21
Congratulation  on nee story Nice prologe
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 1




Km 
Mannet room


In morning

Geet open her eyes only to find herself trapped in arms of her hubby. Her body glued to his as only a thin sheet covering both of them. If there was any other girl she would have admired her hubby. But geet immediately keep his hand away from her body. Making distance between them. She hates him  !
He is the reason her life is no more belong to her. He bounded her in relation that snatch all her dream to pursue her career. She wants to be independent but here she is in his bed with him. 
Geet pull her hair not like that he forced her but something in him that attract her like moth of fire. His one touch and she melt in his arms . That irritates her the most. 
Geet looked away from him. Only if that day he denied for this marriage then till now she will be free bird pursuing her dreams.

But it was just a dream 

Only if...

He denied
She get up & left from their not before collecting all her clothes.
...

Maan open his eyes only to find himself alone in bed like always..
He take a deep breath
How much he want her to be with him in morning. Not like that he is one romantic person but still in their 2 month wedding never she stay in bed.
Whole day she made distance between them  . She never talks with him most of the time he fell his presence made her irritated  but then why always in night she melt in his arms?
She hardly exchange words with him  that make him wonder why she stay so aloof. 
But everytime he let it go. May be she is shy?
He just hope may be...
Keeping all his thoughts he get up to get ready for office.
..

Maan come downstairs only to find his family present their geet & his whole family already present their. 
He observed her she give answer only when asked something otherwise she prefer to stay silent.
May be she didn't like to talk much...

His every question end on maybe...
Rest whole day was robotic like always. 
He has everything but he just wished her to open up a little so that they can understand each other better. 

..


Geet walk back to her room. Feeling tired
G- maan singh khurana. U are the responsible one here...
Only if I wasn't forced I will be do happy pursuing my dreams. U u 
Why u did this to me? 
Only if u denied to marry me...

Are u happy now? 
Keeping me as a showpiece in your house? 
How cruel u are? Behave so innocently? 
Like u don't know anything..

But more than u my family is responsible for my this condition. 

..
Flashback


GEET 

Mohinder handa shouted.
Causing her to take step back due to fear. The slap mark was still present their on her cheek. 
Mo- dare u argue with me. 
I let you study that is more than enough! 
Now you are going to get married and if u try to do something disastrous na i'm telling you it is going to be last day of your & mine too. 


I'll first kill you then my myself. 
We live in village and I gave you independence more than enough not now! 
If u want me to dead then only think crossing boundaries of handa mantion . Otherwise you will go from here as daughter in law of khurana's.

..


Geet open her eyes only to find maan looking at her frowned.
Maan enter in his room after returning from office only to find geet laying on bed. 
When he went near her he find her lost & unshed tears in her eyes. 
M- geet?

Cause her to come out of her thoughts. 
He sit beside her 
M- hey are u well?
He asked checking her forehead.

Geet look at him with cold eyes that got missed by him.
She jerked his hsnd away and get up
G- i'm fine! 
U have no need to get worried unnecessarily! 

He look at her frowned
M- kuch hua h kya? 
Geet look at him

G- nothing.
She turn to leave. 
When he pull her suddenly in his arms.

M- will u plz say something?
But she listened nothing. Not even a word.

She struggle in his arms to free her 
M- kya hua? 
I did something?

But when she was nowhere near listening he pick her up in his arms claiming her lips causing her to held him tightly & after that they were lost in passion forgetting everything else..


...

SO HOW WAS IT?

DO I CONTINUE FURTHER?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#23
Congratulations on your new story 

Concept is very Interesting 
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Posted: 5 years ago
#24
Prologue and Character Sketch 

Geet and Maan are married and she is pregnant 
but wants to abort her pregnancy 

Interesting Characters 
waiting to see how each character unfold its self 
I like the ages of both Maan and Geet 
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Posted: 5 years ago
#25
Congrats for new story...
Nice update and maaneet already married...nice start...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26
Chapter 1 

Geet's father had put a condition before her and she was helpless
she had to marry Maan but why is she thinking its all Maan's fault 
did she ask him to deny for the marriage 
she does not talk or bond with his family and she seems very distant towards
Maan but  he seems to care a lot about his wife 
I do hope at some point she can talk to him and let him know that she wanted 
to pursue her career and see what her husband says 
not trying to talk will certainly make her matters worst 

will be waiting for Chapter 2 
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Posted: 5 years ago
#27
Nice update and concept geet is not happy from marriage and maan is happy to be with geet and but geet want to complete her dream what will happen in future waiting to know that update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#28
Congrats on your new story.a different story and a new geet.waiting for the next update
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Posted: 5 years ago
#29
Congrats
Awesome update
Geet is rude and gate marriage for her
Maan is lovely man
Waiting to know  geet dream
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Posted: 5 years ago
#30
Congrats for new story
Awesome update
Love it
Waiting for next update