Originally posted by: meenachem
Shahida hated the smell of coffee, the fact that she was being able to sit there surrounded by the strong smell of coffee without puking was miracle in itself.
^kind of relatable cause i don't drink coffee but tea just like shahida 😆otherwise, i'm interested to know as to what will happen next XD
Originally posted by: SnehaDoll
A little late to the party but I love love this !!
I m rooting for the other woman, Shahida
Originally posted by: --Mirage--
That was a beautiful update.
Rehan seems a good guy and Shahida an innocent girl.Waiting to see how their story unfolds!
Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
Chapter 1, part 1:I LOVED THE FLOW OF THE CHAPTER!Rayan has a big ego, and the friendly banter between him and Avilasha is adorable!I like Natalie! She is clear about what she wants!And Avilasha's feelings about liking girls like Rayan was brought about beautifully, and her feelings as to why she seized the moment with Natalie.The final line though: The heart wants what it wants!Ain't that the truth!
Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
Chapter 1, Part 2:First of all, CONGRATULATIONS! On crossing the milestone!Second, this chapter was lovely!Shahida and Rehan's story is intriguing, for you have given us a glimpse of it, yet left cliffhangers, making us wait for the next chapter! :PI cannot wait to read more!This story is amazing. Sooo, UPDATEEE!P.S. What is the song/poem that you had added in the end? I do not seem to have heard of it before.P.P.S. I broke my record by unresing soon :P
Big big res baby! long tym no see... thought most of it is my fault...
Well well see who's here!!! *drumroll please* All things apart! How're you! I can see that you're writing pattern has drastically changed and improved! Well who am I to say.. i was not around for a really long time... But lemme catch up will ya!the story is intriguing and i get the vibe that ultimately it's gonna be heart breaking... Tragedy is my guilty pleasure so thanks for giving me one. First chapter was heartbreaking and I could hear my heart literally breaking into pieces. But it was kind of vague and symbolic for me, my hands are literally itching to know whether they are true or not. If my assumptions are right, then kudos to you for taking up taboo issues not only in our country, but also whole world. Good luck to your story!p.s: I also wanted to participate in the competition... but bloody sem exams!
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