Akshan os hamse agar koi jal gaya last part 21 jan

Akshan TS - hamse gar koi JAL Gaya.

Hi guys as I have said I'll be back with a new story so here it is.it is clear from the title ki content kya hoga.so be ready for a super cute ride.

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It was two months since guddan n the family came to know about kaushalya conspiracy.things has started changing between Akshat n guddan as well as three Dil n their sasumaaa also. It was Durga who realised a soft corner for guddan when she came to know that she has never got the love of mother.as Durga's mother also passed when she was 14 so she could understand now.

This change in Durga was because of Akshat the night of reception when guddan came to know about kaushalya plan.she got freeze. She was neither talking to someone nor looking to anybody.

Akshat couldn't see her in this stage he went to her n just hold her shoulder.guddan looked at his eyes there was something else never seen before.

She just hold him tightly n cried for the whole night.

In the morning when she got ready Akshat came to her n said start a fresh.

Akshat has started understanding her completely.when she is happy when she is sad when she is angry. He loved to see her smile from the heart. Her laughter her naughtiness her cuteness.

Her beauty her eyes her hairs.

And above of alll her innocent n beautiful heart.

Same was happening with guddan. Akshat has started behaving different to her.he teaches her cooking every day in the night.he has also started teaching her how to drive.

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On night after dinner they went for the driving session.guddan was driving and Akshat was guiding her

A- aaram se guddan hadbadane ki koi zarurat nahi hai.

G- ohhh hoo  AJ aap b na ab jab gadi kaaa staring haath me Diya hai to chalane b to dijiye.

A- hmmm magar sambhal k bus ek Baar tum ye four wheeler driving seekh lo MERI aadhi tension khatam ho jayegi.

Hearing this guddu press the break

Looked at him n asked

G- adhi tension.

A- ha jab tum driving seekh jaogi to maa ko Mandir le Ka sakogi Khud AA Ka sakogi. At least har emergency me tumhe Mera wait to Nahi Karna Hoga naaa.

Or agar kal ko main Nahi Raha to ...

Guddu put her palm on his mouth.she looked him teary eyed n with lots of anger on her face.

G- sharam Nahi aaati apko aisa kahte huye. MATLAB lord Krishna me zubaan kya de Di hamne Thodi chhooot kya de Di Jo jee me ayega kahenge aap.

Saying this she gets out of the car.n started walking on the road.

Akshat realised what he said he jumped out of the car.n ran behind her in an attempt to stop her he said.

A- guddan MERI BAAT suno na Yaar sorry Galti ho gayi zubaan fisal gayi MERI ab Kabhi Nahi kahunga promise.

Guddan turned to him Akshat found that she was crying.

A- guddan I m sorry Baba ab Kabhi Nahi kahunga.ab Rona band Karo pls warna log sochenge ki Maine tumko kidnap Kiya hai.

Achcha thik h main fine bharta hu.

Samne Ice cream shop h chalo aaj tumhe Ice cream khilata Hu.

Saying this he dragged her to the shop.

They came out having two Ice cream cones. After some minutes she got normal. After some cute nok jhok they return home.

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Dadi n durga was in hall waiting for them.

When akshan came guddu asked.

G- maa aap jaag rahi hai ab tak. Kya baat h apki tabiyat to thik h na.

D- ha bachche meri tabiyat thik h abhi abhi tere papa ka call aaya tha unhone tujhe try kiya tha magar tune uthaya nahi.

Teri wo mama ki ladki h na priya uski shadi h uski news dene ko phone kiya tha. Kal ayenge tere mama or papa card dene magar unhone pahle phone pe batana sahi samajha.

Guddu was really happy hearing this.when dadi asked

D- kaha the tum log itni der

G- wo maa

Just then akshat Interrupt

A- maa wo gadi me kuch problem tha to time lag gaya.

He passed a mischievous look to guddu.

They went to their room saying goodnight to both.

When they went

Durga- dadi kyaa aapne notice kiya jo maine dekha.

Ma- ha dekha maine magar ye mera lalla hai na bahut dheet h ye nahi kabool rha.

Du- mere pass ek idea hai dadi.

She whispered something n they share a hi fi .

N laughed.

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Akshan room

G- aapne maaa se jhooth kyon bola.

A- to kya jaaa kar unhe ice cream party ki ramayan sunata.

Har baat maa ko nahi batai jati itna to samajha karo.

They changed n slept on the bed at their respective sides.

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In the morning when guddu 's papa n mama came there was majnu with them.

Guddu was happy seeing her mama n papa but was more happy on seeing majnu.

Akshat noticed it but left the thought.

G- bade tu yaha kya kar raha hai.

M- aree bhai priya teri bahan h to meri b to kuch lagi ki nahi

At this again akshat looked at majnu n thought

A(in mind)- meri biwi ki cousin iski kya lagi.

M- namaskar sir

A- namaste

G- ham to aap logo ko milana hi bhool gaye . Akshat jii ye hamara bachpan ka dost h majnu sorry sidhant singh.or majnu ye ...

M- tumhare pati parmeshwar..

G- phir shuru ho gaye tum

They share a small laugh n again akshat looked at them.

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Sorry guys mon ko bola tha magar fever tha so aaj update kiya h .

Will try to update longer one so it will take some time.

Agar short chahiye to kal kar dungi

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Love u aalll

Part -2

All three guests was there for a n hour.but guddu was busy with majnu they were trading each other .cracking jokes on some topics.

Akshat was noticing this but he was quite.

When they guys left . Durga signalled to dadi n kishore.

K- papa main restaurant jaa raha hu

A- kishore magar restaurant me koi kaam nahi h tumhara abhi or vardan gaya hua h to tum baad me ja sakte ho.

K - nahi papa main chala jata hu .

Looking at durga with mischevious expression

Kisi ko farak kya padta hai.

D- dadi mujhe kitchen me kaam h.

Durga went to kitchen

Kishore to his bedroom.

Aj n guddan looked each other n then dadi.

D- arre bhai jhagda h miyan biwi ka ab tum dono saas sasur ho suljha kyo nahi dete.

Dadi left.

They look at each other.

A-main kishore se baat karta hu

G- main durga bahu se.

Saying this they went to the two sides.

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In the kitchen.

G- durga jii baat kya h aap kishore ji se baat kyon nahi kr rahi.

D- guddan tum nhi samjhogi. Mere pati k pass mere liye fursat hi nahi h .

Kabhi kahin nahi le jate.mujh par dhyaan hi. Nahi dete.

G- nahi durga ji aisa nahi h .

D- aisa hi h

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Akshat enters koshore's room

K- papa Aap aaiye na kuch kam tha mujhe bula liya hota.

A- kya baat h kishore kuch thik nhi lag rahe ho. Mujhe bata sakte ho. If u r comfortable.

K- papa ye durga ka nature .Meri samajh se pare h jab b kaam ka waqt hota h naraaz ho jati h ki main use time nahi deta.jab mere paas waqt hota h to wo meri bat nahi sunti. Ye biwi itni complicated kyon hoti h

A- kishore aisa kuch nahi h

K- aisa hi h papa aap bataiye guddan maa aapse naraaz nahi hote.

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D- main sabit kar sakti hu ki patiyon ko sirf apni akad jamana aata hai.

Tum kuch mat karo bus thodi der k liye unhe bhaav mat do dekh lena akad k ayenge or kahenge ki baat kyon nahi kar rahi ho.

Magar tum b jawab dene ki bajay taal do unhe jalan hogi tab hamari tadap samajh me ayegi.

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K- main kah raha hu na papa bus ek din just for one day inko ignore kijiye apne aap  line pe aa jayengi.

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When they both came out they again looked at each other.akshat went to restaurant n guddu to her room.

There was a party in the evening at mamaji's house.

They were getting ready.

But didn't talk to each other.

A(in mind) - akad dekhi iski ek baar b nahi pooch ki kishore se kya baat hui.ek baar b nahi bataya ki durga bahu se kya baat hui.thik h mat batao main b nahi dhyaan dunga.

G(in mind)- akadu kahin k ek baar pooch hi lete k guddan kya baat hui durga bahu se magar nahi inko to kuch padi hi nahi.thik h main b dhyaan nhi dungi .

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They got ready n reached at the venue.

Guddu first met priya n congratulate her .She Introduce aj to priya.

Then majnu came

M- hi chhote

K- hi bade

A(in m)- ye phir aa gaya.

M- hi sir

A- hi

Aj went to outside.there was some persons whom he knows so he got busy in talking with them.

Guddu n majnu also came outside.

In the whole party aj was noticing her talking to majnu.

Every time when she was smiling to him. He felt his heart bein g tortured.

They were giving hi fi to each other when it was enough for him. He went there n said to majnu

A- are bhai siddhant agar tumhari bachpan ki dost se baat ho gayi ho to can I borrow my wife.

(Saying this he hold her from her waist just like diwali party the difference was that he was holding her from his hands. Guddu felt his gesture a shiver ran through her spine but she pretend to be normal)

Akshat tool her to another side . Just then akshat's friend jatin came there.

J- hi bhabhi

A- haa jatin meet her she is

J- janta hu itni khubsoorat sirf meri bha hi ho sakti h .

G- looking at akshat.

aap...

A- ye mera dost h jatin roy.

G- hi guddan ...

J- bahut hi pyara naam h apka bhabhi.

saying this he handshake with her.

Akshat saw this n realize

(Aasman se gire khajoor me atke)

Jatin was a charmer.he has a great personality n talking skills tooo.

Guddan got frank with him In just few mins.

Somebody called aj so he unwantedly left from there.

After some time when he came back. He saw both were laughing

G-aapka sense of humor sach me bahut achcha hai.

Akshat was irritated when she was praising Jatin.

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They both remembers what their son or Dil told to them about typical husband n wife behaviour so they decided to be in that mode.

Guddu got busy with her cousins n relatives while Akshat with his knowing persons

Akshat in mind

-akad Dekhi iski ek Baar b Nahi Gaur Kiya.

Guddu in mind

- khadoos kahin k dhyaan hi Nahi dena tha to late kyon h sath me.

After a while music started n Jatin with full of confidence asked guddu

J- may I have a dance wid u.

G- looked at AJ he ignored her.

She get triggered n give her hand to Jatin

Ya sure.

They danced for a while n Akshat was fuming in anger.

After the dance was over.he went to Jatin as it was late night.

A- ok Jatin I take a leave now

J- ha thik h Akshat.bhabhi aap se mil k achcha laga jab b Milne Ka Mann karega Ghar AA jaunga warna Akshat ko call karunga.

G- in formally arre bilkul Jatin aap Ka hi Ghar h or inhe call Karne ki kya BAAT h jab man Kare AA jaiyega.

Akshat was now out of his coool.he was just so angry on her that he doesn't even realise he just pulled guddu out from the party.

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Sorry for the late update will update tomorrow.

Tell me how was that.

Love u alll.