MehRya OS : Saathi Re...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This song is very close to my heart and I couldn't help but type down this little one shot. Do temme how it was and also, do check out the song, it's beautiful. I promise you'll love it! Enjoy! Not proofread! Also, bold means flashbacks.




Saathi Re...




"Am I speaking to Mrs. Shaurya Khanna?" Mehek heard an unknown voice asking a strange question. "Yes. What's the matter?" Mehek asked. She was already feeling uneasy. "Mr. Khanna met with an accident and I'm sorry to inform but we couldn't save him." The stranger who sound like a doctor informed. The world crashed. She felt like it was some sort of joke. She looked around and didn't understand what to do. She felt like she couldn't breathe. "Maa. Maa jaldi aaiye." She shouted for Karuna. Karuna came in to find a devastated Mehek. "What happened beta?" She asked in concern. "Maa dekhiye na. Someone said Shaurya humein chod ke chala gya. Uska, uska acc..accident ho gya and they couldn't save him." Mehek forwarded her phone. Karuna dialed to the last received number and her world crashed too.



The marks of the stitches were still on his forehead. Caressing them for one last time, she smiled. She didn't cry for once. The priest kept the last piece of wood log, covering his face and began chanting some mantras. His father did the last rites and she stood by the pyre seeing him go. Everyone departed to home but she waited until he turned to ashes looking at his pyre with frankly no emotions whatsoever.




Saathi rey thoda thehar jaa
Abhi raastein kuch badal se jayenge
O saathi rey thoda thehar jaa
Yeh paanv bhi ab sambhal se jayenge




Returning to her bedroom was never the same henceforth. His smell was all around but not him. She saw his shoes lying near the couch. She wore them and picked up his jacket that he wore for the last time and that had his blood still on, and hugged it. She sat by the wall and held the jacket as if her life depended on it. She let all the pain washed away in the tears. She got up and laid on his side of the bed just to have that feeling of being close to him.




"Shaurya!" She woke up because of the loud thunder and found him nowhere. Seeing his blood drenched shirt reality struck her. It was raining cats and dogs outside. She got up from the bed and went to the balcony. She stretched out her hand to feel the rain. "Mehek yaar. How can you not like rains. That's the only thing I love." she remembered him say that. Sliding the glass wall behind she went inside.




Phir wohi barsaat hogi
Aur ashq saare dhul se jaayenge
Roshni din raat hogi
Aur sab jharokhe khul se jaayenge





Drying her hair with a towel she sat on the dressing table. She picked up the vermilion box. "Tumhein sindoor lagane ka haq sirf aur sirf mera hai." He had said once and he made it a ritual to always put vermilion in her hair parting all by himself. That was chessy for Mehek but that's what he did and she giggled on. Keeping back the box she got up and retired to balcony.





Yaara tu hi toh bandagi hai
Yaara tu hi dua
Yaara kaisi ye berukhi hai
Kyun judaa tu hua




Kehna tha aur kya kya mujhe
Neend kyun aa gayi phir tujhe





Na-na-na-na-na Na-na-na..
Na-na-na-na-na Na-na-na..
Na-na-na-na-na Na-na-na..





"Tumhein mere bina sirf ek hi mausam toh guzaarna hai. Jaise him mausam badlega, I'll be back." That's what he said before going on a long business trip to Calfornia this summer. She couldn't accompany him because her doctor strictly prohibited travelling. "Ab toh do mausam guzar gaye Shaurya, kahan ho tum." Six months passed and her life was no better. People lie when they say that time heals everything. Time never heals anything, it's just that people try to live by, because they have no other option. Time never heals anything. Time never fills the void, it never does!





Hmm saathi re thoda thehar ja
Abhi mausam ka badalna baaki hai
O saathi re thoda thehar ja
Kuch door saath chalna baaki hai




Phir unhi raaston pe
Tere mere kadmo ka milna baaki hai
Dard mein, ranjishon mein
Sang bujhna aur jalna baaki hai





She hung her picture with newborn 'Vihaan' beside Shaurya's portrait thus completing her family. She smiled looking at the wall and then looked at Vihaan, her dawn when everything was dark around her and smiled seeing him play in his crib. She still sleeps with Shaurya's last memory, not that blood drenched jacket but Vihaan.




Yaara tu hi toh bandagi hai
Yaara tu hi dua
Yaara kaisi ye berukhi hai
Kyun judaa tu hua
Kyun judaa tu hua




Haan tere aur meri darmiyan
Ab bhi baki hai ik daastan





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Posted: 6 years ago
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Omg..Hash...take a bow dear.
Am having tears while reading this story...
Filled with heart wrenching emotions...
Kudos to your writing..

About the song...I haven't heard it before. But the lyrics very well goes in sync with the plot.

Keep writing..nd thanks for this one😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh dear!
This is so beautifully written ...
Being honest... I deciphered by reading the first few lines that this will surely make me cry ... so I was reading it this way :
* Reading first few lines*
* Phew! Break!
* Reading mode on*
* Wait !Take a break or u will cry *

Even then my mood went off reading this 😭

I second u @dwriter... (KUDOS TO THE WRITER OF THIS WRITEUP) 👏

I however was expecting a happy ending till the last word ... 😆
But no! Not all the stories have a happy ending ...
Specially that scene of Mehek placing Vihaan's photo beside Shaurie😭

Anyways u will have to compensate now by writing a * comedy vala FF * 😉

Superb writing dear
Write more stuffs😳👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: dwriter

Omg..Hash...take a bow dear.
Am having tears while reading this story...
Filled with heart wrenching emotions...
Kudos to your writing..

About the song...I haven't heard it before. But the lyrics very well goes in sync with the plot.

Keep writing..nd thanks for this one😛



That's a huge compliment gosh! Thank you. I'm glad I could bring out the emotions well. Also, you have to listen to the song. If you are soft music lover, you'll love it. Just listen to it once. Temme if you liked it or not.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Oh dear!

This is so beautifully written ...
Being honest... I deciphered by reading the first few lines that this will surely make me cry ... so I was reading it this way :
* Reading first few lines*
* Phew! Break!
* Reading mode on*
* Wait !Take a break or u will cry *

Even then my mood went off reading this😭

I second u @dwriter... (KUDOS TO THE WRITER OF THIS WRITEUP)👏

I however was expecting a happy ending till the last word ...😆
But no! Not all the stories have a happy ending ...
Specially that scene of Mehek placing Vihaan's photo beside Shaurie😭

Anyways u will have to compensate now by writing a * comedy vala FF *😉

Superb writing dear
Write more stuffs😳👏



I never knew this story was that powerful 😲
I'm glad I could string the right emotions. Thank you so much for this huge appreciation. I may or may not write something more. I'm really moody that way. 😆
Anyway, thanks a ton. 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks. For anothwr OS dear😉
And what an OS ...though it is sad... .But it is really beautiful. . .And. Well. Written with song adding perfect emotion to it... Loved it.. .But it was very heart wrenching to. See. Mehek like this.. And. Glad also that she had Vihaan. After shaurya😛
Keep. Writing more😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Octothorpe



That's a huge compliment gosh! Thank you. I'm glad I could bring out the emotions well. Also, you have to listen to the song. If you are soft music lover, you'll love it. Just listen to it once. Temme if you liked it or not.


Yep...just listened to it now. And I love it. Thanks dear.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AD04

Thanks. For anothwr OS dear😉

And what an OS ...though it is sad... .But it is really beautiful. . .And. Well. Written with song adding perfect emotion to it... Loved it.. .But it was very heart wrenching to. See. Mehek like this.. And. Glad also that she had Vihaan. After shaurya😛
Keep. Writing more😛



First thing first, happy birthday 🤗
Thank you so much for appreciation.
Yeah I didn't want to leave her all alone so added Vihaan though he wasn't purposely planned to be in the story but then it would have been too sad. 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: dwriter


Yep...just listened to it now. And I love it. Thanks dear.



I'm glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautifully written 👍🏼
Paagli phir se rula diya😭😭
I love this song...
Keep writing

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