MG SS:- Mannmarziyan...Chapter-7 Pg-56 Sept-27th - Page 20

Part 4 Edited by Jeevana - 5 years ago

Nice update..

Story is going on a slow pace as this is just the start...

loved it immensely...continue writing plz...would loved o read about the first date too...even loved maan and piyali's scenes and the little nuggets of info that you have thrown in which aren't their in dialogues something like when maan pulls piyali's hand and she feels a tug in her heart of a forgotten memory...beautiful

Wonderful start. You started this SS with divorce of Maan and Geet. I am sure this SS is going to be an interesting one.

they r parted now...maans college friend piya who is his secret admirer is now back n geet got job as a professor in hyderabad n got a collegue...they r trying to cope up with their parted lives but still memorizing their moments together...maan was so workaholic n so clean but geet was messy...how easily she had maans coffee n how easily he asked for date...

Part 4 nice update. Pairing Maan and Geet with other characters is not a good idea but I think to take story forward it is necessary. Yes want to see their first date. Anything related to Maaneet is always welcome.

Yes yea want to know every tiny bit on their story. And its sad the way they miss each other. Agreed that love fizzles out but here its seems something else altogether. Please don't modify your story based on responses. Keep it the way u planned, please

Happy Birthday Hinal!!! 

thanks for updating so soon!