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Salam and hi..

I sit to write something else but it turned out this. πŸ˜†

So enjoy... If you can..

AKSHAN OS- chapter 3(a) : BARISH

" yeah mausam bhi Na! Mumbai ki barish ka koi bharosa nahi. Sarru, lakshmi... Chat s kapray utar waliye?" Durga inquired.

" ji didi. But didi, apne 1 baat par ghor kia?" 

"Kia?" 

"Woh  dekhye.." She pointed towards distressed guddan who was roaming in the whole hall. She was looking at the clock. It struck 11.

" yeh barish to ruk hi nahi rahi" she thought. " Ab to sonay ka bhi time hogya" 

" bhabhi! Iski pareshani samajh ayi! " laxmi chripped.
" yeh kahan soyegi aj" 

Durga face just lit up with this thought. All three went to her to a take a dig in this situation.

" sasu maa! Bauhat der hogyi hai...ap sonay chali  jayn. AJ bhi intezar kr rahay hongay" durga equipped a sweet tone.

Guddan started to sweat " wwwoh ... Woh mjhay neend nahi arahi Na... Bss" 

" aray to phir upar chali jaye.Ab hum  khul kr to nahi bol sktay ..ap smjhdar hain" sarru added her bait.

" kia MATLAB?" Guddan panicked 

" aray barish ka mausam hai, thandi thandi hawa hai, nayi nayi Shadi , jawan biwi or salon k dabay arman, aur  AJ ko to barish  bauhat pasand hai. Ab is s zyada hm  kia smjhayn . jaye Ab aur  intezar Na krayain !" Laxmi dreamily narrated the whole scene.they were enjoying guddan condition.

Guddan was about to cry when she heard her name.
" guddan! Zara upar ana !" Akshat ordered from the stairs and went back to his room.

" jaye sasu maa.. Dekhye un  s intezar nahi hora." Laxmi pushed her towards stairs.

" nahi nahi... Mn wohhh" guddan wanted to run out of the house.

" chaliye sasu maa...yeh akhiri bar apko apkay kamray tak chornay jarahy hm.. Chaliye" they dragged guddan and pushed her into the room where she collided with AJ.

" kia kar rahi ho...har  waqt girti rahti ho" AJ was irritated.
" aur  idhar ao" he dragged her towards bed where guddan came into her senses

" nahi ...bilkul nahi...mn yeh SB nahi krne wali...aaa...ap jawan hain...aur  ...aur  barish k arman hain...bed ...bed thanda hai...aur  Shadi salon s hui wi, aur  ap ko main pasand hun...ap ap ko control krna  chaye Na".. Guddan uttered all in one breath and on other end, AJ face was shocked and expressionless.

" tmhn khud smjh aya k tmne kia kaha ... Srf 1 bat is mn s sahi hai...barish horahi.."

" han Na...to tabhi mn n yh SB kaha...dekhye ap n wada kia tha  apko srf nam ki Shadi krni thi...phr apni Umar dekhiye ...yh Sab jawani mn krte.." Guddan gulped down. She wanted to run away from him.

Akshat decoded the words she has spoken and with this realization, he wanted to bang his head into the wall.

" tm har  waqt yehi sochti rehti ho kia. Aur akhiri bar yh bat sunlo. Mjhy tmse kuch nahi chaye...mn apni sari zindagi aur  kia kaha tha tm n...armaan...SB puray kr chuka hn. And BTW, konsi cheap movie or novel mn itni wahiyat baat parhi hai tm n..." Akshat was fuming with anger.

Guddan realized that she has done a grave mistake by getting into words of her 3 devils . she remember her words and got so embarrassed of what she has spoken.

She put her head down.

" mn yeh dikhane bula raha tha. Barish horahi, Jo intehai zehar lgti mjhy , to yh partition krdya hai mn n bed PR. Na mn tmhari side aunga Na tm meri. OK!" 

Guddan just nodded her head. With previous drama, she was in no position to protest.

" aur  yeh har  baat mn meri Umar kahan s ajati hai .har  kam mn is Umar mn akr nhi krskta... Shadi, dance , fight , se..." He was about to utter the word but, stop at last moment.akhshat couldn't react to this awkward scenerio.

" sorry...woh mn zyada react krgayi"
Guddan cheeks turn red for what he was about to say and wanted to end this.

Akshat laid on his side and turn off the lamp while guddan went to changing room.when she came back, he was in exact position.she laid on her side making her face towards him.

" kuch  zyada krdya mn n ..uncle in Jo bhi kia mere sath, magr apni biwi k sath loyal hain. 

Chalo  shukar...uncle ka ghussa jitna bhi excess ho, hormones under control hain " with this thought and smile, she went into deep sleep.

To be continue

   🀣  UNCLE KI UMAR NA HUI... AJ KO TANE DENE KA BAHANA HUA
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Originally posted by: attiya1.3

Salam and hi... Due to eye injury, I couldn't make Shadi thread 😭
So thought to update this...

EnjoyπŸ˜ƒ

AKSHAN OS- chapter 3(b) : BARISH
saruuu! AJ ka nashta Tayar hogaya? 10 min bad woh  ajayn ge".. Durga inquired while doing usual routine.

" ji didi  magar mujhay nahi lagta aj  AJ jaldi neche ayngay." Saru responded mischieviously.

Durga couldn't get what she meant.

" didi kal ki RAAt yaad nahi apko. AJ n suhaag raat  main to chor diya tha  but kal to pakka kuch  hua hoga" laxmi responded.

" hmmm... Dekhtay hain .In dono ko neche anay to do." Durga said firmly while someone get anxious behind listening this turn of events.

...

His alarm clock stopped with his heavy left hand. It was 5th time it was ringing with a loud sound but he couldn't get up.something was stopping him.as he opened his eyes , he could not move his legs.

" kahin main apahij to nahi hogya!!! Is Umar...ufhhh, jab s yeh  guddan MLI hai, itna barhati Umar ka ahsas kabhi nahi hua". AJ assured himself.
No there is something on my legs.Akshat thought. He get up and saw two legs over him in a twisted manner. Moving above a little, he was assured that guddan must be a gymnast before because her one hand was behind her and other one was somehow twisted.her head was almost out from bed and her hair dropped down to carpet. He was about to burst in anger but , it turned into a sly smile when he looked at her face. Her mouth was half open and her hair strands were all over her face. His anger just burst in one second.with a deep breath, he moved forward to make her poster correct.firstly, he removed her legs, then took her hand from behind and while doing this, he forget his own poster.

" yeh kia karrahay ho uncle! " guddan was in utter shock to see uncle right in top of her in morning.

" kahin raat mn kuch  ya Sab kuch  to nahi hogya" she thought.she burst into tears.

" aap...aap ne  phir raat  main natak  kar k mjhay bed par Sonay k lye convince kar liya aur  yeh Sab!!! " she couldn't complete because akshat couldnot bear more accusations and he put his hand on her mouth.

"Chup! Bilkul chup. Main tumhara Buddha kehna bardasht krskta hun  magar tharki Buddha nahi. Jab bhi koi aesi situation hoti, tum mujh par yehi ilzam lagati ho." 

" main utha to tum is gymnastic angle s mujhay soti nazar ayin.bas  tumhain theek kr raha tha. Jao so aese hi . " akshat stood up and was about to leave the bed when he heard guddan saying," MATLAB raat mn kuch  nahi hua Na! "

" tumhain abhi bhi confirmation chaye. " akshat was totally pissed off.
" nahi nahi... Mujhay yaqeen aagya.wese bhi agar kuch  hua hota to hum  itnay kap..." 
Akshat eyes just widened with her reason while guddan want to just evaporate into air. She tried to get up and quickly leave the room.

"Ahhh" 
" Ab kia hua?" Akshat don't want to talk to her but still asked.

" mere baaal shayad phas gaye hain." Guddan tried to free her.

" ap wahan kahan s karrahay hain. Baal chaddar mn atkay hain  gardan k neeche."

" to phir khud hi nikalo. Main phir tharki uncle ka title nahi chata." 
Akshat left to washroom.when he came back, she was still struggling.

" please uncle...pleaseee... Bauhat dard horaha." She pleaded.

Akshat went forward and leaned on her tried to keep a distance.he dig into her left side of neck which was in front of door blocking the vision of perv who had stopped from the dialogue "please uncle...pleaseee... Bauhat dard horaha " and was looking from keyhole.

Akshat tried to free her hair and in between all this, guddan hair fall on his face.he gulped down her scent and concentrated on his task.

From keyhole, perv eyes widened with a compromising position of Mr and Mrs akshat jindal and continuous " ahhh, ohhh, ouch" from guddan.

" perv " he sensed durga coming towards the room and he ran on other side.

" ouchhh!" With the release , guddan just thanked god. Akshat lift guddan up from bed and both gets a bit awkward with the whole scenario.akshat quickly left the room while, guddan just stayed in bed watching him exit the room.

Downstairs, the three idiots watched the AJ descending from stairs at 10, exactly one hour above his schedule.

" durga bahu, yeh file sambhal kar rakh Lena." 
And durga and other couldn't breathe because they just saw hair strands on AJ shoulder. Akshat looked in their direction and just closed his eyes.

" yeh  mujhay kahan kahan sharminda karay GI" he removed hair strands and left home without looking anywhere leaving three stunned.

From the top, perv couldn't help but just think, " kahin main n villain k bajayay Cupid ka kam to nahi kardiya!!!!"

     BECHARA AJ KUCHH KIYE BINA HI... ITNA SIYAPA... 🀣
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Ek baat batana har FF mai jab bhi Akshan paas aate hai Perv kahan se tapakta hai.. πŸ˜†