Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 24
Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai - 06 Aug 2025 EDT
SHIFTING BACK 6.8
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GRUHA🏠PRAVESH 7.8
Dharma..what a downfall!!
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What if (Fun Post)
Janaabe Aali - War 2 - Hrithik Jr NTR Dance Face Off
She Ijj Bekkkkk?
War 2 shows in New Zealand removed due to ZERO bookings on 1st Day
Dil Se or Kuch Kuch Hota Hai?
Which mihir you prefer
Originally posted by: Mayashika
I am coming soon with my thoughts on this one! π³
Originally posted by: Princesswarrior
That was so beautiful and touching at same time π. I was confused for the first half but after reading about the sudden demise Of chacha and Chachi , my heart sank. It is true that death is inexorable but the way you described naina's emotions, I could feel her pain. A very different,unique and fresh concept. Enjoyed reading and rereading it. Great job.. Keep it up. πππΌ
RegardsInayat
Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Hayee rabba Aayu! Tum Sameer ko maar deti to main yahan ro padti! Thank God...you know the emotional piece you wrote really had my heart...the emptiness one never does want to feel...it is horrible...for a moment, I felt maybe Sameer is fighting a life threatening ailment! But thankfully, that wasn't the case either! Well call me selfish, but seeing Sameer by Naina's side I'm happy- despite the fact chacha-chachi had to go :(
The depiction of sunrise, Sameer's confession was bliss! Sameer realized he'd fallen for her that night- the lines about Sameer not even seeing the colors of the sky, but Naina being his guiding light and then the sunset scene where Sameer replicates the dialogues for night- I love this night, I love this sunset...and I love...wow! You brought back the golden moments of the show for me! The episode is one of the closest to my heart!I know I didn't find time to vote- but of all the OS I've read till now (which ain't that many :P), this one was Dil le lo for me!LoveSur
Originally posted by: Mayashika
Ayu!! π€
Shreya π€To say I loved this would be an understatement. The plot connected with me so deeply. π³
You voted for it as your top3! π³ I know you really liked it :) I am glad it really had an impact with you.I would say, you have tweaked your writing style a bit. I never guessed it was yours.Written perfectly and you have portrayed her pain amazingly. π₯ΊAww! You did think so? π I tried writing something not too cheesy like I mostly do, and instead write a bit emotional piece but I ended up writing a balance of emotions with the flashback :PI would admit, when I read the first 3 paragraphs, I thought Sameer and Naina never reunited and she was breaking down remembering him. But the surprise element was a nice twist.Great job! βοΈOhh! You thought that reading the first paragraph, I did intend to show the same, that they're not together. I am happy the surprise clicked. :)The flashback was so sweet, it balanced the melancholic feeling.
I miss the bhalu wali dress so much too!! πOn a serious note, that night he saw Naina's beauty and the brown frock didn't matter, in fact she looked beautiful to him under the stars and the sunrise. π³Hahah! See I tried the balancing act π Yes. That was the thing and the bhalu dress is missed π I am happy to know you liked the flashback :)Loved how you showed the transition from the sunrise to unset, tha parallel you brought was simply aesthetic to imagine. β€οΈI am happy you liked this particular parallel! As I said, expect you to point out things I never think anyone can catch π³I like the sound of Naina Maheshwari!Chacha-Chachi's accident and death. I had this heaviness in my chest too when I read that! Death is inevitable. πMy poor baby Naina...!Yess. I wanted to show her vulnerable but I didn't like killing them off but Taiji ke jaane par itna rona theek nahi lagta π I love how I incorporated Naina Maheshwari in this OS, I was proud of it ;)But there you showed how Sam stood by her, not leaving her alone at all, giving her the assurance of his presence and consoling and also the role reversal of being guiding light to each other...beautifully shown and Sameer's anguish was also felt closely. π₯ΊIn such a small story, you could catch all that I was trying to show from Naina's pain, to Sameer's anxiousness and even how he would help her through. Thanks a lot! πOverall, splendid, my dear Ayu! π³Thank you so much Shreya! Your reviews as well as your stories always make my day. β€οΈ