Samaina TS: Dil Ka Rishta (Part 3 page 8)

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Tu jo kehde toh mai chodu yeh saara jahan.. jeena kya marna bhi mushkil hai ab tere bina.. Kitne majbur hue tumse milne k bd ..Sbse hum dur hue tumse milne k bd..

"Naina pls yeh gaana band karo na kitni baar sunogi aisa kya hai ismey jo baar baar isey laga leti ho " questioned sameer who was quite irritated on hearing this song more often

"Kuch khas nai bs pasand hai mujhko aur dekho na  meri life mei bhi toh yehi ho rha hai jbse tumse mili hu tumhare bina jeena chodo marne ka bhi nai soch skti mere har waqt har pal mei tum hi ho... So Mr Sameer Maheshwari  Naina ki jaan bhi aapki hi hai tumse bina puche toh marungi bhi nai,pakka promise"replied Naina and winked at him flirteously 


The car halted with a jerk in front of a big hospital bringing sameer out of his dreams back to reality.
Munna Pandit and Sameer hurriedly got down and went inside and asked the receptionist "Naina agarwal kis room mei hai." The trio walked towards ICU where Naina was being attended by the doctors. All of a sudden Sameer stopped "Mai nai ja raha usey milne Naina dhokebaaz hai apna koi bhi promise nai rakhti jb dekho hamesha apne bare mei sochti hai jab mn kiya rishta rakha jab man kiya tod diya aur ab dekho aaj toh hadd kar di isney mujhe chodkr itna dur jaana chahiti hai,nai milunga isey mai" tears flowing from his eyes. Both Munna and Pandit could understand what emotional trauma Sameer was being through,they knew their efforts to console him will bear no fruits but still they had to stand by him at any cost. "Dekh Sameer naraz baad mei ho lena abhi Naina ko teri zarurat hai yeh sb time insb baaton ka nai hai chal ab" instructed Munna.  Pandit held his hand firmly and dragged him inside. 


Flashback 

It was a usual morning at red rose cafe. Entire gang was seated together except Sameer Sunaina who chose to sit on the adjacent table.Sameer's eyes were searching for naina who surprisingly  did not turn up today.No matter what happened she never missed college and was always on time.But strangely today was different Preeti was there but Naina was absent .Sameer was restless but didn't had the courage to ask preeti about Naina's whereabouts. Kamya broke the silence "Preeti aaj Naina nai dikh rahi kaha hai voh,shaadi toh nai kr li chupke se usney jaise roka kar liya tha "asked kamya in a sarcastic tone .She met a deadly glare from Preeti who replied annoyingly "aisa kuch nhi h kl raat se uske ser mei bhut dard tha aaj subah uthi nai mujhe laga aaram krne dena chahiye kaafi din se paresahn hai isliye uthaya nai maine usko."
Sameer who was listening to all this got a little worried and thought pta nai thik toh hogi na mujhse jgda kar rakha kam se kam apna dhyan toh rakhe par nai madam ko apni parwah hi kaha hai. 
No matter what happens between the two but Sameer's love for Naina was still intact in his heart. Whatever relation he shared with Sunaina was purely to make Naina jealous. Infact Sunaina knew this  fact very well as Sameer had made everything clear to her on the first day itself that he needs her help to make Naina realise what she has lost he didn't wanted to break another heart in his attempt .
Sameer's thoughts were broken all of a sudden when a fellow classmate Neeraj came running to the table where Preeti was seated "Aapke ghr se call aaya hai principal ne aapko inform krne ko bola hai aapki sister Naina ki tbiyat bhut zyada critical hai usey ICU  mei admit kiya gya hai aapko foran bulaya gya hai" before he could complete his words Sameer lost his patience and immediately jerked the guy holding his shoulders tightly "kya hua Naina ko konse hospital mei hai voh"
"city hospital mei zyada nai pta mujhko"replied Neeraj who was stunned by sameer's actions. Munna Pandit came forward and tried to calm Sameer. Sameer who was about to leave for hospital hearing about Naina was stopped by Preeti. "Ruko kaha ja rahe ho tum ab kya fikhr krne ka drama kar rahe ho jao tumhari girlfriend k pass aur mazey karo meri behen ki fikhar krne ki zarurat  nai hai tumhe mai hu uske sath." 
"Dekh Preeti kuch bhi bkwas mat kar tu bhi janti hai jo ho rha hai voh Naina ki wajah se hi ho rha hai break up ka raag usney hi start kiya tha Sameer ne nai "replied Pandit irritatedly 
"Hn Naina ne start  kiya tha mai janti hu"replied Preeti " par tum logon ne kabhi samjhne ki koshish ki uspr kya beeth rhi hai bs uske hath par mehendi dekhi aur faisla kar liya ki voh apni khushi se shadi kar rhi hai kabhi socha uske sath kya kya ho rha hai ghr par uska apna baap usko sirf ek jhangat smjhkar bs uski shadi kar k usey apni zindagi se dur krna chahta hai dusri taraf taiji aur tauji bin maa ki bachi bin maa ki bachi bolkar usey kisi bhi gadhe k palle bandhne ko taiyar hai aur mere pitaji Jispr naina ko itna bharosa hai voh chah kar bhi kuch nai kar paa rahe hai aur sirf Naina ka roz tamasha bntey hue dekhtey hai kabhi chalkr dikhao kabhi ga kr aur kabhi naach kr."
         " Itna kuch shyd kam tha jo yeh sameer roz Sunaina k sath ek naya drama khada krta hai kabhi bike par uske sath ghumkar kabhi uski jhooti cold drink pee kar .Kyu Sameer jab tum apni daadhi k kaaran Naina se bhag rahe they toh kya Naina ne tumhara sath chod diya tha kya... Kisi aur ka hath pakadkr tumhare saamne ghumti thi kya.Naina ka pta nai but mujhko apne jijaji par pura bharosa tha ki chahe Naina kitni bhi koshish karle par aap koi na koi rasta bna hi loge ustak pauchne ka par yahn toh ulti ganga beh rahi hai mujhe aapke aage bdhne se problem  nai hai par yahn par khada har ek shahks yeh janta hai ki aap sunaina ko pyar nai krtey ho... Toh yeh move on ka natak kyu...  Aur tum Munna Pandit bhul gye... Sameer k Delhi jane k bd Naina ne hi tum dono ki tuthi dosti bachayi thi aur tum dono ne ek pal ne lagaya usey kosney mei aur Sunaina ko apni bhabhi bulane mei...  Main yeh nai keh rahi jo Naina ne kiya voh thik kiya.. bhut galat kiya par jo tum log kar rhe ho voh bhi galat hai.  Sameer jab do logon ka relation hota toh faisla koi ek nai le skta yehi kaha tha na tumne... Toh un do logon mei se koi ek agar kamzor pade toh dusre ko usey chodna nai chahiye blki apni dugni taakat se usko sahara dena chahiye...Tum dono ek dusre ko itna pyar krtey ho phir bhi mujhe samjhna pad rha hai..Dil k rishtey kbhi nhi tutthey.Usey samjha samjha kar thak gyi kam se kam tum toh samjho" 
Preeti's words reverberated in Sameer's ears. He just froze for a moment. "Mujhe Naina k pass le chalo " was all he could manage to speak. "Preeti yeh baatein hum bad mei karenge abhi hum Sameer ko uske pass le ja rahe hai " said Munna. The trio left for the hospital.
 
Pre-cap : Hospital scenes


That's the first part ... Pls leave comments and let me know if u all want to read further ... Sorry in advance if it has turned a little boring 






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Posted: 5 years ago
Yaay!!!!
Finally I am here darling. Sorry for being late to unres.

From the moment I read your title I have been humming "Dil Ka Rishta Bada Hi Pyara Hai" πŸ˜Š

Boring? oye hello...this is so beautiful, so refrain from using such words in the future updates, samjhi πŸ€—

How much my heart craved to see flirtatious Naina and you granted me the wish for a fraction of time.😊

So I loved your version of breakup. Sunaina pitching in to help Sameer to get his love back was the greatest breather. Moreover, we all wished for a heart-to-heart convo between Sameer and Preeti. Preeti being the only sensible human around and the kind of bond she shared with Sameer always called in for her to drill sense into him. I loved the way you wrote the confrontation, Preeti's anguish, her pain, above all her realization of the depth of Sameer and Naina's relationship. I was emotional while reading the convo, she let her heart talk about all the pain Naina endured which Sameer was unaware of and also gave piece of mind to Mundit. This was fantastic dear⭐️

Oh, I forgot to mention the restlessness of Sameer in not finding Nain in college and also his reaction on hearing Naina in hospital, these two are bonded for a lifetime.

Hospitals scare me and now the reference of ICU is making me restless. Hope Naina has not taken any drastic step. After all, Naina and Sameer are always meant to be together.⭐️

Lots of Love β€οΈ
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Hi Meena Darling!

          I am so sorry for being late...Kan pakad ke Sorry..(Sameer style)😳

 Coming to the update-

Part-1

 The moment I went through the update,one quote from 'Venetia' came rushing to me--

 As soon as one promises not to do something, it becomes the one thing above all others that one most wishes to do.

The way Naina said her life is even at his wish..and the next moment she is struggling with that very life..

 The line Sameer spoke about Naina being 'dhokebaaz'..So true..But one thing we fail to realise that one only gets angry at other because one cares.

 I loved the build up you showed in Red Rose..Sameer's inner thoughts found the best dialogues.πŸ‘πŸ‘You truly shined here as writer.

 Preeti..She stole the limelight.The way she gave to each one but I especially loved how she didn't project her sister as blame less too.Each one 's stance was questionable. Sameer and Sunaina's drama really took the intolerance a notch higher.The whole scenario was such like 'Words mean nothing.Promises are shallow and love?Well that is something you can find in classics..' 

Kudos to you for putting the powerpacked dialogues..πŸ‘πŸ‘

 Hospitals I believe are places where people understand another person a little better and it becomes difficult to hate.

Eager to know how the lost souls and those reeking of illness physically and emotionally unite..

Rushing to read next updates.

 Thanks for the PM and keep coming with your best ones.

Keep Writing, Keep Smiling.

 

With love-

Minu.

 

Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 5 years ago
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Boring?? How can you think that even for a second?!
I really really enjoyed it yaar. All the thoughts and doubts running through our minds... you have voiced them so beautifully! 

I am so happy you used Preeti so effectively. She is one character who can set things right to a great extent. Surprisingly we have never seen a proper conversation or confrontation between her and Sameer since the break-up, especially considering those 2 have always shared a really friendly understanding bond. 

I loved how you have shown Preeti accepting that Naina has made mistakes too, but Sameer's behaviour hasn't been blameless too. 

And so good to read that in your version Sunaina seems to be onboard with Sameer's plan just to make Naina jealous. That way we dont have to worry about her haunting our Samaina post the patch-up! πŸ˜†

Loved it dear and will be eagerly waiting for the next part. Bohoot mat tarsana!
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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful one.  Plz continue.  Plz PM me after updating
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😭😭 ..
This was so painful to even read it..Liked the Song "sab se hum door hue." And the promise Naina made ...
..Its good Preeti voiced some sense in sameer..And he realized his mistake ...What will happen next...Please do continue
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Defo continue! It was awesome!
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Sabse hum door huye tumse milne ke baad reminded me of the famous chocolate scene. Hehe. πŸ˜‰

Boring? Oh please, this was so much exciting to read especially the dialogues were so crisp, I felt Preeti was being our voice. She was truly the highlight!
Both at fault and hurt yet angry at each other, I loved the fact that the concern never wavered..simply heart touching. 
Sameer immediately standing up in shock when he heard Naina being hospitalised made me smile so much,  he forgot his ego, his everything for Naina. 
And another fact I liked was Sunaina was part of the plan, at least we won't see her heartbreak! 

Waiting for the next! πŸ˜ƒ
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Nice it is. πŸ‘πŸΌ
This is what we wanted to see ..
Preeti you're too good πŸ€—
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Loved it!!!
Finally yaar,Preeti ka muh tod jawab!❀️
I do hope naina is ok, though.its true,Sameer aur Naina dono Apne taraf se galat hain.but main toh zada upset mundit ke behaviour se thi.thike,Sameer ka hamesha saath diya unhone,but Naina Ko kaise aise treat kar rahe the woh dono.agarwals ke baare me toh jaante hain na yeh log.
I wish Preeti had spoken up like this in the show,she's the star of the entire update❀️