Os: dard bhara is dil mn itna : part 1

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Ok guys... I have write os yeah i know its not that much good bcz i didn't have an idea yet bt its neccnecessary to boast fourm activity.. Give us feed back 
Scene started from cctv photage play on projector..
Both vishesh and kanchan shocked.. Everyone shocked
Kanchan felt as someone took earth from her feet.. Vishesh to felt her pain... He now truely felt her pain from which she goes from 3 years.. He just imagine things by his own mind which were written in letters before..  Now he saw what actually she goes from.. Her emotions her pain.. Not just of being raped bt also of lonelyness... The pain in which there is felt by someone bt not divided by anyone...
Kanchan falls on floor... N still shocked.. She doesn't know how to react.. Smile r cry.. Smiles on her fate.. Or cries on her fate... After gape of 1 min she start screaming and crying...
Kanchan.. Band karooo...
Vishesh also saw her condition n scream..
Vishesh : suna nai band karo ise... Kis n kia hai yeh.. I will sow u..
Then cctv fotage turned off
Vishesh sits beside kanchan.. N holds her shoulder..
Vishesh : kanchan g.. Kanchan g..
Kanchan still doesn't react...
Manika interupt..
Manika.: haye bhagwan yeh kia tha... Kia tha yeh sb... Bhabhi dekha ap n.. Dadi g ananya sb n dekha na... Kahin mere ankhain dhoka to nai kha rahi na..
Kanchan ... Kanchan tmhara rape hua tha?...
Dadi : bari bahu.. Yeh sb... Janti the na pahle tm is k bare mn... Tm n yeh failsla kase lia... Tm r tmhara beta is khandan ki izat mati mn milanay mn tulay ho... Yeh larki nai... Kalank hai bari bahu kalank...
Here manika smriks...
Manika : haye bhagwan bhabhi ap n yeh kia kia is larki ko jhanki mn betha dia?
Dadi : haye bhagwan... Kul devi ki jhanki mn tm n ise devi bana k betha dia... Bari bahu yeh kia kia tm n?
Devni is also shocked.. She doesn't react she is also still in truma..
Here vishesh shakes kanchan
Vishesh : kanchan g.. Kanchan g sambhaliye apnay ap ko... Hosh mn aiye...
Kanchan slow turn n saw vishesh face... Vishesh holds her face n wipes her tears...
Kanchan slowly stands... N vishesh help her yo stand...
Kanchan pushes vishesh..
Kanchan : yahi chahtay thay na tm... Yahi na... Ase tamsha banana chatay tha mera tm... Lo khush ho jao bana lia tm n tamsha..
She holds him from collor...
Kanchan : kun kia tm n asa mere sath kun kia?
Vishesh stil tries to calm her down...
Kanchan : bola tha na... Bola tha na bata do maa ko sb... Nai manay tm kun kia tm n asa.?
N kanchan is now almost faint.. Vishesh holds her..
Vishesh : kanchan g..  Kanchan g ankhain kholiye.. He saw glass of water n spray on her face with his hand kanchan gain consciousness.. N pushes vishesh... Vishesh tries to make understand her bt kanchan slips her hands from his collor n sits in his feet..
Keru n kanchan baba comes there n make her stand n took her...
Vishesh also going bt his arm felt a tight grip... Vishesh turn n saw its non other then devyani..
Vishesh : ma.. Ma hm ap ko a k smjhain gaye sb abhi plz janay dijye un ko meri zarorat hai..
Devyani: nahi... Hann pahle hamre sawalon ka jawab chahiye..
Kia ap is bare mn jantay thaye ya nai
Vishesh goes silent..
Devyani : hum ap s kuch puch rahe hn... Bataiye hmn
Vishesh : hn ma hm janatay thaye...
Devyani slaps him...
Here manika smriks..
Vishesh shocked..
Scene shifted to kanchan...
Kiru n baba take her back to home..
Kanchan silently without any feelings n goes toward  her room
Kiru tries to stop her bt baba stops her to do that...
Kanchan lockes the room..
Through her jewelry n every thing on bed madly...
N falls on ground.. N cries...
Here vishesh in his room saw moon n also cries..
Vishesh : janta hn kia beet rahi ho ge ap p.. Kanchan g mn ana chahta hn ap k pass ap ko sahra dena chahta hn... Lakin kia karon..
Kanchan : nai smjh sktay tm... R na hi kabhi smjh pao gaye... Kuch nai smjhtay tm.. Mujhe akelay rehnay do plz... Jao .. Jaaaooo tm..
B. G :Dard bhara dil mein itna ke
Rone ko dil karda
Tere bina bejaan sa ab toh
Hone ko dil karda

Aa...

Tujhe chaha Rab se bhi zyada
Tujhe chaha Rab se bhi zyada
Phir bhi na tujhe pa sake
Rahe tere dil mein magar
Teri dhadkan tak na jaa sake

Judke bhi tooti rahi ishqe di dor ve
Kisko sunaye jaake toote dil ka shor ve

Maahi ve mohabbatan sachiyan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae
O maahi ve mohabbatan sachiyan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae

Kismat de maare asi ki kariye
Kismat de maare asi ki kariye
Kismat de maare ho assi ki kariye
Kismat te kisda zor ae
Maahi ve... maahi ve...

Dard bhara dil mein itna ke
Rone ko dil karda
Tere bina bejaan sa ab toh
Hone ko dil karda

Waqt ka karam hai ke tu
Baitha hai mere rubaroo
Hai ishq kitna tujhse
Lafzon mein kaise main kahun

Ik nazar tu dekh le bas meri or ve
Kisko sunaye jaake toote dil ka shor ve

Mahi ve mohabbatan sachiyan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae
O mahi ve mohabbatan sachiyan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae

Kismat de maare asi ki kariye
Kismat de maare asi ki kariye
Kismat de maare ho asi ki kariye
Kismat te kisda zor ae
Maahi ve... maahi ve..
Maahi ve... maahi ve..

Tujhko bana kar zindagi
Maine toh har pal saans li
Tu faaslon pe hai toh
Door dil se dhadkan hai kahin

Na rahe tanhaiyon ka hai jo daur hai
Kisko sunaye jaake toote dil ka shor ve

Maahi ve mohabbatan sachiyan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae
O mahi ve mohabbatan sachiyan ne
Mangda naseeba kujh hor ae

Kismat de maare asi ki kariye
Kismat de maare asi ki kariye
Kismat de maare ho asi ki kariye
Kismat te kisda zor ae
Maahi ve... maahi ve..
Maahi ve... maahi ve..

Dard bhara dil mein itna ke
Rone ko dil karda
Tere bina bejaan sa ab toh
Hone ko dil karda (x2)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice start but I hope Devyani will accept her soon 
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Originally posted by: 4me2

Nice start but I hope Devyani will accept her soon 

Yeah hope so she will
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Show me to Kiru aur Kanchan ki papa ko bada jhatka lagega
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Originally posted by: 4me2

Show me to Kiru aur Kanchan ki papa ko bada jhatka lagega

That scene exist in next part... 
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I just dont want her dad to do something drastic
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yeah he is just a kind person
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In the show today he was shown so broken 
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agla part jald hi chahiye