AdiYa FF: In The Stars | Completed - Page 43

ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sluls
Firstly thanks for the pm...
The update was superb.. i enjoyed it very much.. although i lnow it was long i wanted it to be longer coz of how much i enjoyed reading..
Cant wait for the next one
Update sooner if posibble.

Thanks so much!! 😊

So happy that you shared your views (and that you enjoyed the chapter)!

I'll be putting up the next part soon.

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: monikagdd
Thanks for the pm. And the update is so awesome. Update soon..Lots of love
😊

Thank you so much, Monika! 😊

Glad you liked it.

I will be updating the next part soon.

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masin

@masin

Goldie

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you for the PM!

I absolutely love this story! I read it in one go a few days ago and didn't have the chance to leave a comment, but am doing so now :)

Your style of writing is very descriptive, creative, and keeps the reader hooked! This is such a light-hearted story and you execute it so well with SO much detail, I cannot wait to read more!

My personal favourite has to be Aditya's character - he is so charming, mature, and alert. He reads people well and the way he took care of Zoya without her having to ask (ie. got her a suitcase and the travel pills) was SO endearing!

Please continue soon!

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 5 years ago

I love it very much ur update .

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 5 years ago

Ok first of all thank you for the PM. I hardly see it. But I always keep a check on your FF by myself. And the part is really good. Both are on the realisation that's really great!! Please show the before marriage romance possibly like makeouts and stuff! Thanks :* (:*)

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lavenderxpetals

@lavenderxpetals

Newbie

Posted: 5 years ago

Please update soon :) eagerly waiting

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Peaceful_Haven

@Peaceful_Haven

Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Please update.. It's been long...

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Mona

@AsadZoya1708

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 5 years ago

When are you going to update???

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome update yar
so their families got along well...
Aditya wanted to talk about his feelings towards zoya before her leaving to Mussoorie...but he didn't... I loved the way he put herself above him..he knows if he confess then she will be in a fix... and a break is very good to realize your actual feelings... she kind of missed him and obviously Aditya is full into her... Both are thinking about each other... everything making them remind each other
Their text was really adorable... I am so excited for their meeting... I really don't think he will say it in phone or text message...so...looking forward to it

Thanks so much for your continuous reviews, Ayushi. 😊

What you described is true- both are feeling something yet don't wanna jeopardize their friendship incase the other is not thinking on the same lines.

@last line- I don't think that either ;)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: avanthishiv
Superb update
Loved the Bonding between the family
Walking on eggshells around each other phase is going to continue for a few more weeks between them I presume

And a big thank you for the PM

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! 😊

Unlike the show the families bonding part is something I wanted to do in a positive way. Glad you enjoyed it.

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