Shivika FF: PLEASE LOCK TOPIC. - Page 9

Just one thing I would like to say is -

Although I understood your perspective of Love and longing but in reality Emotions do have a limit. Hurt does change you and so does the feeling of love. Mind and heart works together always with either of the two guiding the other but together working. Annika is being too available and open to Shivaay although having been stabbed right on the heart a zillion times. The emotions described are beautiful but 'Limit' is missing. No matter how Much you love there is one point you don't accept even your own love.. Annika is not being real in this. She is all ready to accept any time In. Love is an emotion mostly one sided be it 2 sided or unrequited it always have a limit. If you have been degraded a number of times, your love remains but with wounds that cannot be healed.. you might forgive him or let go of him but never let him in Atleast not so longingly..  this is what I feel 😊

I would really like if Annika forgives Shivaay and Move on because Her love for pure, does not deserve the million rejections from the same man who resides in her heart. Shivaay has hurt her deep, he cannot and should not be given an open chance to get in as he likes. Easy should never be easy. Woman can be weak in heart but that weakness is stronger that the strength of men.. men are easy women are not :-)

I hope I am not offending you. I really am intrigued with the story so felt like sharing my thoughts. It is your art and I would love to know how you take the story ahead. 

Also have been waiting for the story since long. Keep updating <3

This is some brilliant work.

Missed your weekly update.

This Shivay honestly does not deserve some one like anika...even after all her personality issues. She was a catch. And he let her go..so brutally, so ruthlessly. Is there any possibility of a redemption? To undo what he has done? Since he did everything in his proper sane mind as it seems.. he was under the influence of some meticulously planted misunderstanding by a camp. He himself went and destroyed something so beautiful.

I wish Anika dated someone. I wish he could see through his own eyes when she moves away..stops getting affected and goes towards someone who will treat her better. I wish shivay could see through his own eyes someone pursuing her. She saw her husband getting married to another woman. She deserves better. And he worse

Please update super soon. Loved it

Please please please update!!

I really love your story and I am dying to read the next part!