Yeh Teri Galliyan First day first show Written Update 25Jul 2018

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Posted: 2018-07-25T08:59:31Z

The show begins with Arpita a beautiful young Bengali housewife  being brought by her husband Shubhankar  to meet her InLaws 
They arrive Kolkata by boat ... 
On the way she stops at a pooja mandap  to pray to Durga maa 
She is full term pregnant  n slips on the steps  ..she is supprted by a little boy who was at the temple next to her 
The boy is called Shantanu
Arpita likes the boy n praises his mother for having such a nice son .
His mother thanks Arpita but thinks with teary eyes that where she came from children were mistakes or accidents n were unwanted .. And result of wrong doings ..

Scene moves to the locales of Sonagachi the infamous red light area of Kolkata 

The prettiest sex worker..Beauty   .. boasts about her looks n her fame ...
She is pampered by every one ...she sits pretty on the swing 
Thakuma is the head of the Pari mahal ..which  is the biggest Bari ...  Or home for the good looking  n the best sex workers .
Thankuma is seen performing prayers before Durga Maa on Vijaya Dashami day with utmost devotion 
She is respected n obeyed by every other resident of the bari 

Another sex worker Chanda  is jealous of Beauty  is always pitted against her .
She has an illegitimate son  Shantanu ...who is the main lead of the show .

Shubu  walks in with his pregnant  wife .Arpita .
The new arrival  causes a stir among the inmates ... Nayi maal ayi hai  ..
He brings her on the pretext of meeting her saas sasur .
Beauty makes fun of Arpita's ignorance . She tlls Arpita that her husband hed brought her here to sell her . Arpita denies this but Shubu  says this was right . 

The wife suspects something wrong in the locality and is relucatnt to live here 
The husband gets his wife to Pari and demands one and half lakhs for this woman 
Beauty  laughs and says pregnant women were not  wanted  in this profession 
Chanda and Beauty argue over the price of Arpita and whether she was wanted or not 
They decide to ask thanku ma for final decision 
Arpita is shocked as She realizes she was being sold off by her husband 
She tries to peruade him and pleads him. Not to leave her here 
But he ruthlessly kicks her away n goes off 

Thankuma pays  Shubu the amount he demanded and asks chanda to take Arpita inside 
Arpita is heart broken n disillusioned 
Thakuma makes her cry and share her woes . 
Hakuma imforms her that hence forth she n her child now were property of this bari .she had no other option . 
Arpita soon starts getting labour pains and delivers a girl 
Shantanu is very happy to get a play mate n names her puchki 
Shantanu takes tiny baby puchki in his arms and thanks Durga ma for fulfilling his wishes 

Precap 
The show takes a five year leap  
Shantanu and puchki will be seen as play mates as their mothers carry on the work of sex workers at the bari . 


Edited by Sutapasima - 2018-07-25T12:19:29Z


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Posted: 2018-07-25T11:11:33Z
The evening timing of the show suits me quite well 
Hope to bring some updates .
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Posted: 2018-07-25T11:13:53Z
Thanks for the well wu... 
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Posted: 2018-07-25T12:59:36Z
Originally posted by ..dtd...


Thanks for the well wu... 

I had no plans but the Bengali setting stimulated my writing instincts 
Will have to seek permission from Jyoti in future LOL 
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Posted: 2018-07-25T13:07:09Z
Thank you for the written update Smile
Can we open Other Threads also Like AT's ivs threads Smile
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Posted: 2018-07-25T13:31:22Z
Originally posted by pooja2109


Thank you for the written update Smile
Can we open Other Threads also Like AT's ivs threads Smile

Jyoti06 is our Channel moderator 
She will come soon ...she is presently celebrating her birthday .

Once she comes she will open the thread for all permissions 
"The Permissions Thread "
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Posted: 2018-07-26T00:27:51Z
In the opening episode Arpita did not struggle enough to get out of this situation .Disapprove. she should have run away from there once she realized what her husband was up to !!! Thumbs Downhow can she stand there completely like a statue ??Ouch
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Posted: 2018-07-26T00:36:42Z
Originally posted by Sutapasima


In the opening episode Arpita did not struggle enough to get out of this situation .Disapprove. she should have run away from there once she realized what her husband was up to !!! Thumbs Downhow can she stand there completely like a statue ??Ouch

She is so simple that she even misunderstood that pathan as her sasur g.. they have shown her just like any other middle class regressive women who is not strong to stand against the situations Cry

But puchki is not gonna be like her mother in contrast she will choose a different life for herself! !Star
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