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mishkatfanfrevr

@mishkatfanfrevr

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

I get annoyed by this too..thanks for makin this post😃

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

I feel we should chill!!

If they show every scene then we say they're dragging.. If they skip certain scenes then we say why don't they show every scene.. In both d cases, koi na koi to complain krta hi h.. So CVS hv to decide one way out of the two

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

This is the basic fault in script ... Nice post...And good observation...

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viraf4u

@viraf4u

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

I too agree the story has become lot more choppy now... I hope its not any reason to rush...

but they need to develop and nurture each character and bond.. that is the USP of the show..

Samiana are nothing without the lifeline of bonds... they need to show that..

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Pooja

@Samaina12

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

We'll have to deal with few not so good episodes until we get to the serious part of the story..

Gang scenes before munna swati love story started were good.. They can give us gang scenes but until shefali arjun story doesn't get wrapped up we will be getting more of them.

I really miss shefali naina scenes these days.. It's as if only arjun n shefali are friends n naina shefali are strangers.. But then we can't do anything about it thanks to all the drama somendra did.. I wish they took.up new projects n balanced yudkbh too.. Then.we wouldn't have missed naina shefali bond.. In a hurry to wrap up arjun shefali drama writers hav3 to compromise somewhere..

I just hope they send mama mai bitto gang away soon. I don't mind vedang and poonam ..

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

When the show started all the initial episodes although only 21 mins but they completed each aspects...Showing each character ..And that was so good...That is why we came to know about each and everyone...And we fell in love ..I think this a unique show where fans love all the characters...Just because of their character growth in the show..And bonds they all share..

But now it seems more like 2018 days...No bonding with each other.. nothing...I mean we know basic characteristics of everyone now..But where is the growth...Always showing Taiji and her silly antiques for chai and food...Shefali Arjun behaving like nonsense..And college scene also not using full potential...

Then major drawback is creating plots and ending or leaving it without a closure... There are so many till now.. they take one long week for every new topic...And still end it like some one held them on gun point...Like they are just dragging it to count episodes ...

I still feel there were some very beautiful plots and if presented correctly it would have even better ...As we have seen in so many of the forum posts ..Young writers exploring those points...But no CV's just never cared for anything... Atleast they would have shown Vishakha like earlier ( on phone calls) but no.. nothing...Just end ...

I now just enjoy what I get from the show...And I still watch each episode in loop... But still sometimes it's so much frustrating...

Edited by asmita21180 - 7 years ago

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moon.river

@moon.river

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: asmita21180
When the show started all the initial episodes although only 21 mins but they completed each aspects...Showing each character ..And that was so good...That is why we came to know about each and everyone...And we fell in love ..I think this a unique show where fans love all the characters...Just because of their character growth in the show..And bonds they all share..
But now it seems more like 2018 days...No bonding with each other.. nothing...I mean we know basic characteristics of everyone now..But where is the growth...Always showing Taiji and her silly antiques for chai and food...Shefali Arjun behaving like nonsense..And college scene also not using full potential...

Then major drawback is creating plots and ending or leaving it without a closure... There are so many till now.. they take one long week for every new topic...And still end it like some one held them on gun point...Like they are just dragging it to count episodes ...

I still feel there were some very beautiful plots and if presented correctly it would have even better ...As we have seen in so many of the forum posts ..Young writers exploring those points...But no CV's just never cared for anything... Atleast they would have shown Vishakha like earlier ( on phone calls) but no.. nothing...Just end ...

I now just enjoy what I get from the show...And I still watch each episode in loop... But still sometimes it's so much frustrating...

Exactly. Nowadays its like they think of a topic suitable for 90s era & then show for week & then its over, no correlation to the character's growth sometimes. Its as if this show has become episodic.

There are so many potential stories they can come up with just the actual cast without adding new ones but nope...

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viraf4u

@viraf4u

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: moon.river

Exactly. Nowadays its like they think of a topic suitable for 90s era & then show for week & then its over, no correlation to the character's growth sometimes. Its as if this show has become episodic.
There are so many potential stories they can come up with just the actual cast without adding new ones but nope...

You and Asmita 21180 nailed it.. its become like episodic.. there is no co-relation between episodes.. hair gets cut off in between the sequence.. like it happened in the college - dress gifting .. sameer's hair was suddenly short and .. in the very next minute they were long.. what...

its getting to a point where things are just getting glaringly bad.. there is sooo much they can do with these awesome characters... its just lost chance

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Purv_01

@Purv_01

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: moon.river

I didn't really mind where they had the characters say someone did this or that.

But I really agree with you on that some important SamAina scenes are abruptly ended mid-way or rushed through. And agree 10000% with you about adding new annoying ones; I really don't see how are they helping. We didn't have them before, still it was fun and addictive to watch the show. These new characters are truly annoying (like Mama - Mami, Bitto, Varun).

Definitely miss the long, deep, heart-felt conversations like before.

oh i hate mama mami bitto characters so much lol im just waiting for the day they exit from the show ugh even some of the new college characters are annoying

True, some of the college characters are also irritating. I wish they stick to the original cast. The show was great with them. The new characters, instead of spicing up the show, have made it pretty boring.