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Posted: 5 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: vinushi

Awww my baby๐Ÿ˜ณ tanshi met...n the hug๐Ÿ˜ญ ...finally both sat I love u ๐Ÿ˜ณ..I loved it hayu๐Ÿ˜ณ

Amazing Kamal kar ditta๐Ÿ‘..or ahaman ki nok jhok ๐Ÿ˜ณ.. amazing ... waiting for updates

wo word sweetie...๐Ÿ˜ณ
I will try my best to update soon...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Wo word for ur support gilehri...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

OK I am happy now๐Ÿ˜ญ 

chal ab rona band kr or jaldi se smile kr...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 5 years ago
#43
Wo word guys for a long gap..i was very busy so that i wasnt able to give update...

PART 3-THE LAST SHOT...

Rishi breaks the hug...

R: ok listen i have a plan how to get ur property back...but first lets meet mom and dad they will be very happy to see u...

Tanu's eyes welled up on hearing her beloved uncle and aunts name...

T: sure...

They both goes to bedi house and enters the house...
Both rano and raj are sitting in the hall...

R: dad..
Raj: han beta bol...or ye bachi kon hai???
R: ye apse milne ai hai...

Tanu was continuously crying...
Raj comes and hugs her...

Raj: na puttar na rote nhi hn...or tu mjhse milne q ai hai???
R: dad...ye tanu hai...

Both rano and raj are hell shocked on hearing the name...
Their eyes are now wet..

Raj: mere dost veerendar ki beti...
T: han...uncle mn unhi ki beti hon...

Raj cups her face...and then hugs her...

Raj: puttar tu abhi tk kahan thi or veerendar or shardha parjai kahan hn??? Wo nhi aye???

Tanu is now more crying on hearing her parents name...๐Ÿ˜ญ

T: wo ab kbhi nhi ayenge...
Raj: q??? Kis bt pe naraz hai wo mjhse...mne itni baar phone kiya lekin usne phone bhi recieve nhi kiya...akhir hua kya hai???
T: q k uncle God k pas signals nhi atey na...
Raj: kya matlab???
T: they are dead...jab ap log hme chor kr gae the uske thk 10 saal bad unka accident hogya tha...๐Ÿ˜ญwo mjhe chor k chle gae...

Now she was saying in a bit loud sound...

T: q kiya maa baba apne...q kiya aisa...qqq???๐Ÿ˜ญ

She lost her conscious and before she touch the ground RSB holds her...

R: tanuuu...tanuuu...tanu wake uppp...

He carries her in his arms and take her to the room...

Raj: rishi go and call the doctor...
R: hmmm...

He calls the doctor...
Doctor comes and checks her...

Doctor: inka BP low hogya hai koi tension ki baat nhi hai...ye kuch medicines hn ye ap inko time pe dijiye ga...
R: ok...
Doctor: ab mn chlta hon...
Raj: aiye mn apko darwaze tk drop kr deta hon...

Everyone leaves the room...
Rishi is sitting besides her on the floor... crying and feeling her pain...

R: tanu mn tmhe duniya ki har khushi donga...

He falls asleep holding her hand...

*Morning*...

Tanu wakes up first and see rishi sitting besides her sleeping..

T in heart: how caring and loving he is...i think that he is the gift of my all struggles...now i m happy that i got those struggles...if i woulnt get those struggles...i wouldnt get u..u r my life...i love u rishi i love sooo much...never want to leave u...never ever leave me...i m nothing without u...

Rishi wakes up and see tanu staring at him...

R: ehmmm ehmmm...shadi k baad aram se ghoor lena...๐Ÿ˜‰

Tanu give him a small punch...

T: rishiii...
R acting: ahhh...
T: drame baaz...
R: abhi to hamari shadi bhi nhi hui or muhtarma abhi se apna rob jamane lg gaeen...๐Ÿ˜‰
T: ufff...kya hoga is lrke ka???
R: InshAllah ek beta or ek beti...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
T: rishi had hogai...tharki insan...
R: tanu aise mt bolo i m not tharki...

He said while pouting...

T: mzk tha rishi dont be serious...
R: abhi se serious hogya to shadi nhi hogi na to relax rho...๐Ÿ˜›
T: ufff hato rishi...

Tanu stands up and was about to leave when rishi holds her hand...

R: aj hme apne plan pe work krna hai...be ready...
T: i m ready...

Rishi kisses her forehead...
Tanu leaves and freshen up...
Tanu goes to their chachi's house...

Neha opens the door...

N: tanuuu...

She said smirking: maa dekho kon aya hai...tanu shri...

Bani comes runing...

B: arey tanu kya hua...itne dino baad ana hua...apna haq mangne ai hai???

Both neha and bani starts laughing..

T: han mn yhn apna haq mangne ai hon...
B: oho dekh neha ye apna haq mangne ai hai...aja tanu andar a k haq mang...

Bani takes tanu inside...

B: han ab bol...asal mn hm poore muhaley ko tamasha nhi dikha skte na...

And here both swati and tanu's chacha comes...

T: mjhe abhi tk yd hai ap logon ne kese mera haq cheena tha...or jahan tk mjhe lgta hai mere maa baba ko bhi apne hi mara hai...ta k ap log us property pe qabza kr skn...

Tanu's eyes welled up...

B: tjhe koi shaq hai..

Tanu is hell shocked listening that her parents were killed by her chacha and chachi...

T: mjhe ykeen nhi horha ap log is had tk gir skte hn...mn ap logon ko saza dilwaon gi...sb ko bataon gi k apne mere maa baba ko mara hai or apne meri sari property pe mjhe behosh kr k mera thumb lagwaya tha...

B: kya bataye gi tu...tere pas koi saboot nhi hai...ye batae gi k hmne tere maa baap ko mara tha hmne teri property tjhse se cheeni thi...ja bata de..han hmne hi tjhse teri property zbrdsti cheeni thi hmne hi tere maa baap ko mara tha...ja bata de pr tera koi ykeen nhi krega tere pas koi saboot nhi hai...

T: pehle nhi tha ab hai...
B: kya matlab...

Rishi comes holding the camera...

R: mtlb ye k apke saare ghatiya kaam mne record kr liye hn...or ab poori duniya dekhe gi...

He comes and stands by tanu's side...and side hug her..

R: jab tk mn hon meri tanu ko koi kuch nhi kr skta...

Neha and swati are shocked to see RSB...

N: hayeee kitna handsome hai...
S: han yr...is tanu ko to heera mil gya...
N: han such mn...

Tanu's chacha comes from behind and snatches the camera...and breaks it...

T: oh shit...
B: hahahahahah now what...
R: oh shit...but its ok...i knew u will do some kind of shit...mne manpreet ko pehle hi video snd kr di hai...wo police ko le kr ata hi hoga...

Door bell rings...

R: and here they come...๐Ÿ˜‰

Rishi goes and opens the door...manpreet was standing with police they comes in and arrest them...

R: first let them give tanu's priperty back...manpreet papers...

Mp gives him the property papers...they signs them...

R: good...now get lost...inspector take them away...

Police takes their whole family with them...

T crying: rishi thank u sooo much...
R: mention not darling...๐Ÿ˜‰
T: rishiii...aise time mn bhi shuru hogye...
R: acha sorry...

Tanu hugs him...he hugs her back...

T: I LOVE U RISHI...
R: I LOVE U TOO TANU...
T: God gave me the best gift of my life...and this is u...
R: u r my precious diamond tanu...i believes from my childhood that we will meet...this is OUR FATE...โค๏ธ

So guys here the story ends...i will now give the updates of Decent Love...

Share ur views about the story and hit the like...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#44
Arre waah!!!! Kya update!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘... No words Haya...u rocked it!!!! Rishi's master plan!!! Rishi rocked Bani shocked... "TanShi" moments in room๐Ÿ˜ณ... Totally entertaining,Suspenseful,Super-duper update... ๐Ÿ˜ณ...
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Posted: 5 years ago
#45
Well done haya.๐Ÿ‘ Superb, mind blowing.๐Ÿ‘ I loved it.โค๏ธ
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Posted: 5 years ago
#46
brilliant chapter
tanu & rishi's dad meeting was so emotional ๐Ÿ˜ญ
both were crying while remembering tanu's dad๐Ÿ˜ญ
poor tanu fainted coz of stress๐Ÿ’”
awe tanshi cute nok jhok ๐Ÿ˜‰
finally tanshi expose those monster๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ‘
hoe disgusting they r specially that bloody chacha how can he killed his own brother๐Ÿ˜ก
just for money they killed tanu's parents๐Ÿ˜ก
poor tanu got really broke while knowing that bloody chacha chachi killed her parents๐Ÿ’”
wow rishi was really brilliant he knew they will destroy the proof so he already send the video to manpreet ๐Ÿ’”
yippee finally those monsters r in jail & tanu got all her properties
hope u will update epilogue 
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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: gopsss

Arre waah!!!! Kya update!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘... No words Haya...u rocked it!!!! Rishi's master plan!!! Rishi rocked Bani shocked... "TanShi" moments in room๐Ÿ˜ณ... Totally entertaining,Suspenseful,Super-duper update... ๐Ÿ˜ณ...

wo word dear...๐Ÿ˜ณ
I m happy that u liked it...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Wo word once again...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Well done haya.๐Ÿ‘ Superb, mind blowing.๐Ÿ‘ I loved it.โค๏ธ

wo word lemon...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Glad that u liked it...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: cuteariya

brilliant chapter
tanu & rishi's dad meeting was so emotional ๐Ÿ˜ญ
both were crying while remembering tanu's dad๐Ÿ˜ญ
poor tanu fainted coz of stress๐Ÿ’”
awe tanshi cute nok jhok ๐Ÿ˜‰
finally tanshi expose those monster๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ‘
hoe disgusting they r specially that bloody chacha how can he killed his own brother๐Ÿ˜ก
just for money they killed tanu's parents๐Ÿ˜ก
poor tanu got really broke while knowing that bloody chacha chachi killed her parents๐Ÿ’”
wow rishi was really brilliant he knew they will destroy the proof so he already send the video to manpreet ๐Ÿ’”
yippee finally those monsters r in jail & tanu got all her properties
hope u will update epilogue 

wo word dear...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Glad that u liked it...๐Ÿ˜ณ
I will try my best to give epilogue...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 5 years ago
#50
nice update!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ tanshi nok jhok was awesome.tanu got her property back.WELL WRITTEN.๐Ÿ‘