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Posted: 3 years ago

 

Part 75

 

Geet’s dad appears and Akhil’s mother walks out of the room with him leaving Geet there

 

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While Maan is repeatedly messaging Geet on her secret phone in vain

 

He is getting restless and tensed every second as Geet said there is some problem in her home

 

And lack of replies from Geet is making him more and more worried

 

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Akhil was was looking at unconscious Akhil

 

Doctor enters

 

G-Hello Doctor, sab theek toh hai naa…koi ghabrane kibaat toh….?

 

Doctor-Nahi nahi, I told her mother; he indeed try to slit his hand but that was not even close to the nerves. So uski patti kar dihai. Aur thik thak neend aaye islie need ki goli di hai abhi

 

She nods as the Doctor walks away

 

As she is looking at Akhil her eyes are brimming with tears remembering the time she spent with him playing and growing up since childhood.

 

She keeps her hand gently on his

 

Slowly when sleep eludes her she doesn’t even realized

 

She falls asleep holding Akhil’s hand and her head rested on the Hospital bed

 

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Its middle of the night

 

Maan enters the Hospital room

 

He had been roaming around and using all his contacts to find whereabouts of Geet

 

He looks at Geet, who is sleeping in exhaustion

 

He relieved to see her

 

He had been worrying about her since hours

 

He gazes at Akhil face and then his gaze falls on Geet’s hand which is holding onto Akhil’s hand

 

Maan sits beside her and takes her other hand into his gently

 

He is gazing on her face as long as he could, he slowly closes his eyes

 

He leaves before Akhil or Geet could wake up

 

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Note:

1. Sorry for the small part. But this scene is my favorite scene so wanted to post it individually to maintain the gravity of it

2. Special thanks to my new reader change12 for reading and commenting on all the parts

3. Please suggest if you guys want me to open a thread 2 for the story or want me to continue on this thread

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

 

Part 75

 

 

Note:

1. Sorry for the small part. But this scene is my favorite scene so wanted to post it individually to maintain the gravity of it

2. Special thanks to my new reader change12 for reading and commenting on all the parts

3. Please suggest if you guys want me to open a thread 2 for the story or want me to continue on this thread

4. Don't forget, to add this topic to your watchlist to never miss an update

Thanks you..

I agree small update... but looks like it is an important scene I am just hoping Maan won't take it in wrong way...hope this will not create any misunderstanding between Maaneet.

Please open second thread.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Why not open new thread 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Yaar yeh kya tha?

Why did Maan drop by and not wake her up n why did Geet hold Akhil’s hand? He’s still the same useless person 😡

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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely update waiting for next

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Posted: 3 years ago

75

doctor clear that it is not serious as akhil's never is not cut . he is all safe

maan is worried for geet as she is not responding his messages.

finally maan  come to see geet n find her tired sleeping 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 75

oh no Geet seems to be emotional about Akhil.

Gosh Maan saw Geet holding Akhil's hand and leaves

will he misunderstand Geet? 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Actually yeh Akhil and his mother are messing up with Geet's head... Gadha, idiot woh bhi irritating wala... Sirf ek closet ki wajah se hath kaat diya.... 😡 dramebazz kahika... Uloo ka phatte... 

Yeh Geet bhi na had kardi woh Akhil toh wahi gadha hai joh baar baar uski beizatti ki hai.... Kya Maan ka khayal ek baar bhi nhi ayi uski mann me. Kaise ayega ab yeh Maa bete dono apne plan me kamyab joh hui... Kaminey kahika.... Sharam nhi ayi.....ab Maan joh ayi Geet ko milne hopefully koi misunderstanding toh nhi hoga... . Maan pls apni Geet ko wahan se le jau.... 😭

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Posted: 3 years ago

 Geet in hospital Maan worried about hr he used his contact to locate hr after seeing her tired sleeping holding Aakil arm he left I don't think he mu this situation

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sorry readers, for not posting for 2 weeks. I am in middle of a decision. Now, I had a certain direction for the story but now mere dimag mein naye concecpts aa rahe hain story ke liye. Ab samajh nahi aa raha story ko kaunsi direction mein le jaun


By the way, I created a new thread:


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5166060?ri=6&rv=4499

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago