REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 111

Part 73

fabulous update! well written

glad that Maan and Geet enjoyed their time together! 

oh she saw the docs and is laptop but brushed it off.

Hate this Akhil.

glad Geet put him in his place

update soon

in respect of your note, please continue on IF

Aisa hai to be ready for full fledged gaaliyan from here onwards 😆

Thank you for valuing your readers so much🤗

I think she would have erupted if she found out about the truth, I wanna be wrong about it though 😛

Akhil 😡... That jerk is such an idiot..... I hope that Geet would give him a piece of mind.... Bohot manmani karne lage. Gadhe..... 

Waiting to see sherni Geet throw Akhil galis and punches...... 😉

 Geet enjoyed hr time with Maan and akhil waiting fr hr he really thought Geet as his personal maid but Geet too rhis time didn't listen g s order

Part 74

A-No! How can you say that? You have to do it!

G-Maine kaha naa Akhil, kal kar doongi

A-Tum subah se bahar thi! Its your responsibility! Mujhe subah tak ye chahiye

She looks at Akhil and walks away into her room leaving Akhil and her whole family gasping

Geet goes to her room

She takes out her secret phone sees message from Maan

M-‘Ghar pe sab theek hai?’

She replies

G-‘Uff! Faltu ka issue ho gaya. Tumhe batati hoon sab baad mein. Pohonchne pe message kar dena ❤️”

She was so tired ki uski aankh lag gai

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Her sleep is disturbed by loud bangs on the door

Its her mother’s voice

Mother- Geet! Geet! Beta, jaldi darwaza khol

She gets up with a start and rushes to open the door

She finds her perturbed and tensed mother in front of her as she opens the door

G- Kya hua, mamma? Aaap itne pareshaan kyun ho?

Mother- Wo…wo…Akhil hospital mein kya

She is shocked

G-Kya? Kaise?

Mother- Wo…shayad usne kuch kar liya…par usko hospital le gaye hai…tu jaldi jaa

She nods

Her face has lost color due to worry and concern

She rushes to the hospital

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In the hospital her father is helping out Akhil’s mother

She looks at the bed where Akhil is laying unconscious

G-Aunty, kya hua Akhil ko? Doctor ne kya kaha?

Geet’s father goes out excusing himself

Geet and Akhil’s mother are only in the room with Akhil laying there unconscious

Akhil’s mother’s eyes are brimming with tears

Akhil’s mother- Tumne ye acha nahi kiya, Geet

She frowns

G-Maine?

Akhil’s mother- Tum toh jaanti ho naa ki Akhil tumhe apni zindagi mein kitna important maanta hai….Akhil ki life mein toh waise hi musibaton ka jaise pahaad tutt pada hai….Antara ke saath uske problems ki wajah se toh depressed tha hi, uske upar business mein itna loss ho raha hai; aur ye sab mein wo as a friend tumse hi to sab share karta hai…tumhara saath hi toh chahta hai…par tumne bhi uski mushkil ghadi mein uska saath chod diya….tum aisa kaise kar paayi Geet? Itni selfish kaise ho gai tum?

G-Main? Maine kuch nahi kiya Aunty…maine toh bass…

Akhil’s mother- Bass! Bass karo!

She starts wailing sitting on Akhil’s bed

Akhil’s mother- Mere bete ne….maine…tumhe aur tumhare parivaar ko itna diya…mera beta bass apni zindagi ke sabse mushkil waqt mein bass tumhara saath chahta tha par tum…tumne sab jaante huye bhi usko naakar diya….itna pareshaan ho gaya wo tumhari baton se, tumhare kiye huye apmaan se ki….aaj…mere bete ne…nass kaatne ki koshish ki….kitna khoon baha uska…aur tum….tumhe toh pata bhi nahi ki tum mete bete ke liye itni important ho…warna wo kabhi aisa kadam uthata kya? Bechara mera beta…uski zindagi mein toh dukh khatam hi nahi hote

Geet looks down with guilt

Tabhi nurse comes

Nurse- Patient ke saath raat ko aaj kaun rukega?

Akhil’s mother wipes her tears

Akhil’s mother- Main toh Maa hoon. Main hi rukungi…aur kaun rukega

G- Nahi Aunty, aap ghar jayiye, rest lijiye. Main ruk jaati hoon

Akhil’s Mother- Acha, tum kehti ho toh

Geet helps his mother stand up and gives water to drink

Akhil’s mother- Driver! Gadi nikalo!

Akhil’s mother barks to summon Geet’s dad

Geet’s dad appears and Akhil’s mother walks out of the room with him leaving Geet there

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While Maan is repeatedly messaging Geet on her secret phone in vain

He is getting restless and tensed every second as Geet said there is some problem in her home

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😆I dont know why i enjoy listing to gaalis for Akhil....guilty pleasure

I am all buckled up! start the show!!

Thank you for reading and liking the story....readers are the single most asset i make when writing the stories ...hence all the readers and comments are my motivation to keep writing

Let's see how Geet reacts...I think Geet is unpredictable...coz sometimes she is super meek but sometimes she becomes a sherni...so lets ee

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Can i say i loveeeed your comment...i repeated your words- "geet is not going to be ur slave...she is maan's Princess now."...thausand times in my head. its a great one-liner for the whole progress of the story....so glad to have such insightful readers....I based the story on "One Man's trash is another Maan's treasure"...so your words so aptly convey my feels and the whole story

😆 supari dilwado is Akhil ki