Naina- Sameer : FF Vishakha and Agrawals -Part 37 (Page 25)updated

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Part 1: the big confusion between Naina and Sunaina  1
Part 2: Sameer Vishakha Naina conversation about wedding and getting her family on board 2
Part 3 : Sameer and Naina plots to talk to her family. And Naina's insecurities... 4
Part 4: Naina's confrontation and full on showdown 5
Part 5...Naina and Vishakha conversation aur "Maa ka ehsaas... 7
Part 6: Mission Arjunbhiya: The planning stage 9
Part 7: Mission Arjunbhiya: Coach ka selection aur Jealous Sameer 10
Part 8: Mission Arjun bhaiya... Vicki ka Naina pey fisalna.. and Jealous Sameer 12
Part 9 : Mission Arjun bhaiya:The execution...the cricket match aur Sameer Vicki ki ladaii 12
Part 10: Arjunbhaiya maan hi gaye... salesahab bananey ke liye 12
Part 11: Ek pyara si mulakaat 14
Part 12:  Trophy jitney ki party ki tayari 14
Part 13 : Ek pari aur Rajkumar ka milna : 14
Part 14 : Dono ka haq jatana aur saath mein mil kay duniya sey ladna: 16
Part 15: Ek dusarey ki jeet ki khushi aur pyara sa taufa 18
Part 16: Trophy jitne ki dinner party aur ek ajeeb si movie date ki planning 19
Part 17: ek ajeeb si movie date ki permission  20
Part 18: movie date ki permission to mili ab??  20
Part 19: Mr aur honewali Mrs Maheshwari ki movie date  21
Part 20 : ek pyara sa ehsaas aur sukoon  21
Part 21 : ek anokhi  Subha... 21
Part 22 : Ek anokhi raat kay baad yeh din kya raang layega?? 21
Part 23 : Maa to maa hoti hain... 21
Part 24 : Baicheni ka aalam...aur mili seekh zindagi ki 21
Part 25 : padhai padhai aur sirf padhai... 22
Part 26: birds sanctuary janey kay liye.. hamarey love birds ko chahiye ghar sey permission  22
Part 27: love birds chaley Birds sanctuary 22
Part 28: NalSarovar Ki Picnic ka Aggaz 22
Part 29: Khullam khulla pyar karenge hum dono:   23
Part 30: Tum meri jaan ho   23
Part 31: Is Raat ki Subha kab hogi? 23
Part 32: Yeh Subh hui hi kyun... Kyun? 23
Part 33: kaash ghadi kay kantoin ko,  koi piche ghooma de aur yeh din ho hi nahin...kaash? 23
Part 34: Tere bina zindagi ... Zindagi na hogi... 24
Part 35: Sameer JaiPrakash Maheshwari ... 24


Part 1: the big confusion between Naina and Sunaina ( both in Hindi and English- tried to give translation wherever possible)

It was late at night and Sameer was talking on the phone
with Naina as usual .. and suddenly mami comes in his room for something and
gets shocked seeing him sitting on the windowsill talking on the phone and
blushing.. She inches slowly towards him and hears him saying "So-naina... and
mami thinks he said Sunaina... and without asking anything, she leaves from there
thinking...


Next day she says it all to mama- and he is surprised and
thinks to talk to sameer- but mami says you will make him uncomfortablefirst
find out who this girl is and we can talk to vishakha didi and see what she has
to say.


Next day mama says- I found out about that girlshe is with
him in the same college and in the same class and she is daughter of a big business
man here in ahemdabad . It seems to be a perfect match as they are also rich
and from high society like us. And Sameer is raees and he has chosen the
perfect gal to fit in this family. They call up Vishakha and tell her
everything and she says she will come there immediately to see what is going on
and if all this is true we can also do roka It is appropriate as
Sameer is in last year and he will soon join and lead the business as papa
wanted... and soon will be Sameer Jayprakash Maheshwari. It will only help that
he has partner in this new phase who he knows , trusts and loves.


Vishakha comes home and Sameer is ecstatic to see her---maa
aap yahan...


V: haan mujhe to aana hi tha...mera beta bada jo ho gaya hain...


Sameer is confused...accha hua aap aagayi mein aapse kutch
baat karna chahta tha ( good you are here as I wanted to talk to
you about something)...


Vishakha: maa hoon tumhari.. tumhe mein nahi janoongi to aur
kaun janega..ab batao kya baat karna chahte ho ( a mom always knows what
her kids want...that's y I am here...tell me what is going through your mind. )


Sameer: maa aaj... mein aapko kisi ke barein mein batana chahta hoon...


Vishakha: hmmm kaun hain vo?


Sameer : surprised but blushes and says aap ko kaise pata
chala?


Vishakha: mein tumhari hi maa hoon J


Sameer: vo ...Vo mere college mein hain aur mere school mein
bhi thi,,,maine uske pehle kabhi nahin socha tha kiske saath rehke zindagi mukamil
bhi ho sakti hain... Par mummy
jab se vo mere zindagi mein aayi hain.. usne hamesha mera saath diya
hain aur aaj mein job bhi hoon vo sab ushi ki vajah se hoon... Vo hain to mein
hoon aur uske bagair to jaise mein kho jaooonga... ( She is a girl in my college
and was also in school with me. I had never thought that my life would feel
complete and without her I would be completely lost)


Vishakha: Sameermujhe maloom tha ki mera beta bada ho raha
hain par itna mature bhi ho gaya hain yeh nahin pata tha... She sees Sameer blushing...
and say So?


Sameer: So? ..Naina... uska naam hain... Vishakha smiles and says
Sunaina?


Sameer : shockedSunaina?? Yeh Sunaina kahan se bich mein aa
gayi?? Nahin ...Sunaina nahin.. sirf Naina... Sameer ki Naina...


Vishakha shocked... kya??


Sameer: haan naina meri naina.. nanu ki naina... looks at
Vishakha and says maine nanaji ko bataya tha naina ke baare mein unke jaane se
phele...aur vo bahut khush hue..ki maina naina ko aapna saathi chuna hain..
unhone hum dono ko dher sare aashirwaad diye aur nani ki sadi bhi di- naina ke
liye... ( my Naina...nanaji's Naina- nanu had accepted her and was very happy that I
had her in my life and sent nani's saree as token of his blessings and love)


While all this talks going on- Poonam Bhabhi has already
come and have heard their whole conversation and she is shocked just like
Vishakha.. and vishkha notices her standing there and they exchange shocked
glances .


Sameer: looks at both of them and asks them if they are both
ok.. aap gussa to nahin hain.. yeh sab baatein mujhe appse nahin kehni chahiye...
( I hope you are not angry as I should not be talking to you openly about this
like this )


Vishakha: composing herself: smiles and cups his face and
says... Sameer papa ne mujhse wada liya that ki mein hi tumhari nanu aur maa aur
dost sab hoon. Aur jis ko papa ne itne pyar se haan kahan ho sanwara ho.. us pe
bhala mein kaise gussa ho sakti hoon? She kisses on his forehead.. (Sameer-
papa had taken a promise from him that I will be your nanu. Mom and friend
after him.. and if he was the one to accept this relation and bless it.. how
can I even think of being angry on it )


Vishakha: Ab batao kya mein us sey mili hoon?


Sameer: haa vo school ke function mein thi aapka jab purse
gir gaya tha- usi ne utha ke diya tha.. flashback shown...


Vishakha: accha mujhe itna yaad nahin hain par mein use
milna chahti hoon aaj hi issey pehle ki der ho jaye...


Sameer: Der?? Kyon mummy ? koi jaldi hain? Kya hua?


Vishakha: arey kutch nahin mein apne bete ki pasand dekhna
chahti hoon.. aur usemein bilkul der nahin karna chahti...( I am eager to meet
the one that my son has chosen and don't want to delay it any longer)


Sameer: thik hain mummy mein usko puch leta hoon ke agar vo
aaj ghar pe aa sakti hain to aapko milne ka bhi ho jayega aur mama mami ko bhi
aap bata dena...he leaves the room with phone in his hand to call up naina.. ( I
will ask Naina if she can come over to meet you and you can even let mama mami
know about it so they are also all relaxed)


Vishakha standing there deep in thoughts when Poonam says:
ab kya karengein ... Vishakha says pehle to Bhabhi ko kehna padega abhi vo ruk
jaye kisi se bhi baat na karein ... aur sham ko jab naina aayegi to sab unko bata
doongi.. ( we need to make sure we let
mami know not to rush into anything soon and when naina comes home in the
evening we can sort it out )


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Sameer- Naina phone call:


Sameer: hello Naina : hello J


S: accha suno- mummy aayi huyi hain delhi se..


N: accha yeh to bahout acchi baat hain mujhe maloom hain tum
unhe kutch dino se miss kar rahe the..


S: shocked to realized Naina reads him so clearly and then
blushes giving his faint smile.. haan sahi kaha mein unhe miss kar raha tha...Aur
maine... ummm maine...


N: kya maine? Kya hua Sameer aisai kyun keh rahe ho? Kya kiya
tumne?


S: maine mummy ko hamare baare mein bata diya... silence


N: shocked... and nervous.. but composes and says hmmm


S: Sirf hmmm? Itni important baat aur hmmm


N: nahin vo mein... Chodo...aunty ne kya kahan...


S: mummy tumse milna chahti hain... vo meri pasand ko dekhna
chahti hain.. jisne unke bete ko bilkul nikaama bana diya hain.. and he smiles...


N: blushes... accha... yeh baat hain... but realizes that his mom
wants to meet her.. and suddenly becomes nervous... and says... aaj hi milna hain
unko?


S: haan mummy ne kahan hain tumhe ghar aana hain unko milne
ke liye... koi pareshani to nahin hain correct?


N: ummm Sameer mujhe bahut dar lag raha hain...


S: pyar karne wale dara nahin karte---- yeh shayad kammo ne
kahan tha... aur tum to Kammo nahin ho... rite?


N: chidao
mat mujhe.. pheli baar tumhari mummy se aise mil rahi hoon dar to lage ga na...
jab tumhari baari aayegi , tab mein tumse poochon gi...


S: acha baba thik hain... mein nahin chidaoonga tumko.. to
fir mein kitne baje lene aaoon tumhe?


N: ummm mein swati ke ghar pe chali jaoongi kutch bahana
banake.. tum wahin se mujhe vahi mil jana.


S: haan yeh thik rahega.. varna ghar se nikalne par agar
kisi ne dekh liya to ..


N: hmm thik hain 4pm is fine? College ke baad mein ghar
jaake swati ke ghar ke liye nikal jaoongi...


S: thik hain... suno... I love you J


N: blushing chalo college mein milte hain..


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At home:


Vishakha and Poonam doing something in the kitchen... When mami
and mama comes- didi aap manoge nahin aaj kya hain...


V: mujhe maloom hain.. mein apni hone wali bahu se milne
wali hooon... and realizes what she said and tries to cover up..


Mami: arey wah aapko kaise maloom hua... arey mein bhi kya..
aap Sameer ki maa hain.. aur maa ko sab pata hi hota hain...


V: shocked... kya??


M: haan aaj sham ko humne vo Sunaina aur uski family ko chai
pe bulaya hain.. taki hum sab aamne samne baith ke baat karle aur agar sab thik
hain to shagun aaj hi de dete hain...


V and Poonam both shocked...: V says vo log kitne baje aa
rahe hain?


Mami: karib 4.30 baje..


V shocked.. thik hain... and leaves from there...


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Evening time: at Swati;s house:


Naina preety and Swati all nervous ... N is getting ready... She
is wearing the same saree that nanaji gave ..she is carefully getting ready
being nervous...thinks Sameer never got a chance to see me in this saree that
nanaji gave... so I decided to wear this so that his mom knows nanaji also were
with us all throughout our relationship and approved it..


She is nervous and ready waiting for sameer to come...


Sameer comes and honks 2 honks, and N knows he is here... she
looks at herself in mirror one last time before leaving..


Sameer- munna pandit all are at the door.. Swati says come
in..


sameer says where is
N


Swati: she is in there she is very nervous...


Sameer: hmmm tum aur preety jake baitho gadi mein.. Munaa
Pandit.. tum bhi jaao mein Naina ko leke aata hoon...


The gang leaves for the car.. and Sameer goes in the room to
bring his Naina... slowly knocks the door..


N: Swati aaja mein ready hoon... jara help bhi karde... yeh pin
nahin lag rahi hain..


S: enters... and is spell bound... seeing N... in nani's saree...
there she is standing the love of his life.. and his foever... wearing the saree ...
she looked like the only ray of his life... he is just looking at her with all
his love... she is his...


The flashback of their relationship is shown... ILU scene...first
hand holding.. phone calls... college proposal..and all the memories..ending in
the first twirl they took


N: arey swati please help karde na.. yeh pin nahin lag rahi...


S: slowly moving towards N take the pin from her hand and
closes his eyes ( remembering poojadidi wedding pin sequence) and tries to pin
her saree..


N: suddenly realizes its S and shocked... and says tum..


S: ghabarao mat meri aankhein band hain.. and pins her saree...and
opens his eyes and looks at naina


And they both have their long loving stare..


S: aaj mein vo hi feel kar raha hoon jo nanaji ne feel kiya
tha jab unhone nani ko pehli baar is saree mein dekha tha... aaj mein samaj paya
nanaji kya keh rahe the... Naina.. shayad maine tumhe yeh bahut baar kahan hain...
Par aaj mein jo feel kar raha hoon.. vo mein bayan nahin kar sakta..( Today I
am feeling the same thing that nanu had felt when he saw nani in this sareetoday
I can understand what nanu was telling me..I have told you so many times that
ILU.. but today what I am feeling I cant express in any words)


N: blushes and understands and lowers her eyes..


S: holds her hands and kisses them so lightly and says I
love you Naina.. meri naina..


They both hear the car honks and come our of their world..
and say its almost 4 pm lets go... mummy wait kar rahi hongi.. and he asks for
his hand to walk hand in hand...


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Sameer's house:


V and Poonam Bhabhi are nervous about both the gals coming
here.. V says yeh kahan reh gaye dono...its almost time for Sunaina and family
to come.. suddenly she hears the car honk... and goes to check.. and she sees
Sameer coming in with the gang.. and sees Naina sitting in the front.. she
rushes in to get the aarti thali..and calls Poonam to come too...


The gang comes out and Namaste to V- mundit making small
jokes about honewali Bhabhi and swati and Preety are nervous too..


Suddenly Sameer brings Naina there and V is shocked and
surprised pleasantly seeing the saree she is wearing...and remembers it's her mom's
saree and remembers Sameer saying nanaji had accepted her as the bahu and sent
her nanis saree as aashirwaad.


V is super happy and seeing her does her kaala tikka and
take the thali and does her aarti.. hamare yahan ghar mein bahu aisai hi nahin
aati...


and the gang is super happy and Sameer and Naina are on
cloud 9 and Sameer and Naina takes her aashirwaad and V hugs her son and says
papa was right.. your choice is the best... tum sab mere kamre mein baitho mein
aati hoon...


Sameer and the gang go in the room.. and we see Sunaina
coming in with her family.. and suddenly mama mami are there toosorry didi hum
log ready ho rahe the to thodi der ho gayi..


V and Poonam exchanges looks: Sunaina and family come and
greet and V sees her in skirt and top. .and realizes what papa had chosen is
the best..


She greets all of them and goes for her room..


Sameer is continuously looking at Naina and she is fidgeting
with her bangles.. Sameer comes and places his hand on hers and she calms down...and
looks up in his eyes.. and forgets all fear...


Just then V comes with bowls of ice crme with Poonam Bhabhi
... gives one each to all and goes to naina.


V: She cups her hands and says mujhe maloom hain tum hi ho..
jo mere sameer ko sambhalo gi.. jab kabhi vo ladkhadey ga to tum use thambo
gi..use pyar bhi karogi aur jab vo galti karein to daanto gi bhi. They show
flashbacks for their fights and how she made him realize he is not manhoos..


V takes out her kadas- and put it on her wrists and says---
aaj se tum meri jagah logi.. Sameer ki zindagi mein aur is ghar pe.. aaje se
mera yeh beta aur yeh ghar tumhara hua... and she blesses them both and the gang
is all happy and crying.. and as soon as V leaves.. they do a group hug...


Outside: Sunaina and family are sitting and chatting with
mama and mami when V comes and mami says this is Sameer's mom.. and Sunaina
greets her.. and V says kaisi ho...


Mami says mein soch rahi thi ke itni shubh ghadi hain kyn na
shagun... V interrupts koi jaldi nahin hain.. hum log pehle ek baar Sameer se
confirm kar lete hain.. mami is shocked.. and so is mama..


Sunaina understands and gets up and says haan aunty vo thik
hain.. par mujhe Sameer bahout pasand hain.. and the family is about to get up
to go when she stops in her tracks...


Sameer and Nanina and the gang come out laughing and teasing
and stop in tracks too..


Sunaina sees them together and they see her . Sameer says
Sunaina tum?? Yahan mere ghar?? Kyun? Kaise?


Naina looks at the whole scene and understands what the
situation is and what Sunaina feels for Sameer...


Sunaina looks at Naina and the both give each other
understanding looks and Sunaina saysmein bahut khush hoon.. tum dono ke liye..
and takes her family and leaves from there...


Mama and mami are shocked.. to see Naina.. and they both
remember the mehendi incident and the food processor and all the things they
had said about her...


V breaks the silence.. and says Bhabhi yeh Naina hain...
Sameer ki naina.. aur is ghar ki hone wali bahu...


In dono ka rishta papa ne sajaya tha mummy ki saree se ...aur
aaj maine bhi Naina ko ghar ke kangan deke aapna bana liya hain...


Hearing this mamaji says agar kakusa ne is rishtey ko sajaya
hain to fir koi shaak hi nahin hain...vo bhagwan the mere liye


Mami is not happy but seeing Sameer and V happy she goes
along...


Sameer takes Naina to his room... and naina is shy and
standing by the window with breeze coming through... Sameer leans in and says I
love you Naina.. and Naina turns around and looks at him and says I love you
too Sameer ( flashback of their first ILU).



To be continued... Now its sameers turn to go to naina's home...



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Posted: 5 years ago
This is nice... 
Do update soon! 
Will be waiting.. 
I have a question btw.. how many parts will this have?
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Wow this is written amazingly. When I clicked at it, I didn't know I'd keep on reading till the end and keep on hoping it doesn't end๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
I loved the confusion that triggered the meeting between Naina and Sam's mom๐Ÿ˜ณ
The way Sameer told his mom all about Naina and Nana Ji's liking towards her was so lovely

I felt there would be a major confusion at the end but you handled it so well with Sunaina understanding their love โค๏ธ

I particularly liked the camaraderie between Vishaka and Naina ๐Ÿค—
It was all so beautifully written, Naina's nervousness, Sameer seeing her in his Nani's Saree finally โ˜บ๏ธ

It was the perfect story! I'd be really looking forward to the next part with Sameer's graha pravesh!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

Loved the first part, Naina's graha pravesh and the family accepting her so whole heartedly. Too good โค๏ธ
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Posted: 5 years ago
That was awesome
Naina Sunaina confusion๐Ÿ˜†
Mami is always overexcited.. I loved Naina Vishakha scene n Sameer Vishakha scene
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This was amazing and the plot held humour in it...
You have executed it very well...๐Ÿ‘
It irked me too when Sunaina was introduced due to the similarity in their names but now I am fine with it๐Ÿ˜†
The instant liking between Vishaka and naina was nice, naina's acceptance in the family ended it on a happy note...
Waiting for Sam's gruhpravesh!
Love,
Shreya 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Arey waah naina aur sunaina ka confusion ... Good idea ... Loved it ... Pls do continue soon . If possible pm me whenever u update
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Originally posted by: 9211

This is nice... 

Do update soon! 
Will be waiting.. 
I have a question btw.. how many parts will this have?


Hello thank you so much for that.. seriously I just started with this.. have not thought about parts... but wanted to put in all those sequences that I felt would make their journey a more fulfilling one...

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Very nice!! That name Sunaina has been introduced for the sake of some confusion only! Vishakha's character and bond with Sameer was very good.
Will be waiting for the next part.
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this is really good...I really hope this confusion between Sunaina and Naina doesn't happen in the show. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Wow Amazing start continue soon dear