Hey Guys!!!
I am new to this forum. This story is completely different from the serial and you may find the characters also portrayed differently.
Note: This is my very first attempt at writing something and I have written the dialogues in Hindi. As i am not a native speaker of Hindi you will find grammatical mistakes here and there so please forgive me for that.
I hope I am welcomed to the forums and also hope that you like my story. 😊
Prologue:
"PREETI !!!! YEH TUNE KYA KIYA!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"Naina please maan ja na please, Preeti begged Naina. "Preeti har baar teri manmani nahi chalegi Nainasaid sitting down on the bed.
"Naina apni behen ke liye maan ja preeti tried mollifying her angry sister. "Behen? konsibehen ke bare mein baath kar rahi ho tum? agar tu meri behen hoti toh mujheforce nahi karti naina said turning her head to the otherside.
"Main janti hoon ki mujhe aise nahi karnachahiye tha par mere paas aur koi option bhi toh nahi tha. Please maan ja apnibehen ke liye na sahi, apni behen ki pyaar ke kaatir maan ja, Preeti yet againtried to reason with her sister. "Koi aur option nahi tha matlab? Tu kisi kabhi naam le sakthi thi, Shwetha, Nikita ya phir Ridhi par nahi tu na hameshamujhe hi bali ka bakra bana deti ho. Aur iss baar toh tune had hi kardi hai.Aise kaise mein kisi bhi ladke ke saath date pe chale jau jise mein pehle kabhinahi mili Naina complained. "Haan toh chale jaana aur woh kisi bhi ladka nahihai, Rohan ka bhai hai preeti replied. "Main toh tumhara boyfriend se bhi nahimili hoon aur tu chahti hai ki main uske bhai ke saath date pe jau? Nainaquestioned preeti.
"Maine kehdiya nanahi jaungi matlab nahi jaungi. Saying this naina stormed off to the kitchen.
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Naina startedchopping the vegetables in the kitchen when preeti entered the kitchen and saton the kitchen slab. "Naina maan ja na tu toh jaanti hi hai mujhe bahar akelejane ka permission nahi millegi isliliye maine Rohan ke saamne tumhari naam leliya taki...
"...Taki mere bahanetu rohan ke saath date pe ja sakti ho. Right? naina completed. "Haan preetiblushed. "Main kya karti rohan keh rahatha ki uska bhai bohot bore hojayega aur ussi ne yeh suggest kiya tha toh mainebhi haan bol di. Aur yeh sab usne ek cute sa face banakar kaha ki main mananahi kar payi. Preeti admitted.
Naina ignored her and continued chopping hervegetables. "Naina tu sun rahi hai na, maan ja na badle mein tu joh kahegi mainwoh karoongi. I promise. Preeti requested Naina again. "Hmm toh phir teek hai, main chali jaungeelekin badle mein tumhe ek kaam karna padhega
"Kaisa kaam preeti asked. "aaj se woh saara kaam jho main karti aayihoon woh sab ab tum karogi hafte bar ke liye naina said with a sly smile."Iska matlab kal semujhe mummy ki help karni padegi khana banana mein? "haan" naina said smiling
naina mujhse nahi hopayega yaar. Preeti complained "toh mujhse bhi nahi ho paayega naina replied."Accha theek hai karloongi saara kaam preeti sounded annoyed.
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"Accha yeh le yehperfume laga lena preeti offered a perfume to Naina. Kiss me' naina wasshocked to read the name of the perfume. "Chi yeh kaisa naam hai Naina made adisgusted look on her face. Preeti gave an exasperated sign and said "Nainatere kuch nahi ho sakta. Main jho kehrahi hoon bas wahi karo isse lagake aajana, main bahar wait kar rahi hoon. preeti turned to leave the room when they heard the click of the door.
" Arre wah meri donobetiyan tayar ho gaye. Chachi was pleasantly surprised. "Haan mummy hum basnikal hi rahe the. Preeti said smiling. "Accha tumne gift toh leli na? chachiasked. "Gift??? naina was confused. "Naina mummy woh gift ke bare mein baathkar rahi hai jho humne Shwetha keliye karide the aaj kuski birthday pe dena haina usse. Preeti said stressing on the word birthday and naina understood whatpreeti meant.
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Naina and preeti justleft the house when naina said "Preeti mujhe na ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai.main usse jaanti tak nahi aur uske ssath date pe jaa rahi hoon. mujhe toh uskanaam bhi nahi pata. Naina looked confused. "Aree just chill naina sab theek ho jayega, uskanaam Sameer hai, aur isse hi toh blind date kehte hai.
Please let me know if you liked it as the continuation of the story will depend upon it. Constructive criticism always welcomed. And sorry for the mistakes..😳
INDEX
Prologue : pg 1
Part 1 : pg 4
Part 2 : pg 7
Part 3 : pg 9
Part 4 : pg 13
Part 5 : pg 15
Part 6 : pg 21
Part 7 : pg 24
Part 8 : pg 27
Part 9 : pg 33
Part 10 : pg 38
Part 11 : pg 44
Part 12 : pg 49
Part 13 : pg 54
Part 14 : pg 62
Part 15 : pg 72
Part 16 : pg 78
chaaru262019-04-04 06:27:10
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