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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome tha yaar ... Aaj mein subah see free thi aur kisi ke update ka wait kar rahi thi acha hua tumne kar Diya ... 

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome  waiting for next part
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Thanks everyone for your lovely comments.
Now next chapter.
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Chapter-2
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(Sayyid house)
Barkat: Nusrat Bi ye hai meri beti Noor
Noor: salaam phufi
Nusrat: salaam beti. Mashallah kitni khoobsurat hai bilkul chand ka tukda hai. Kala teeka laga dijiye isse kahin kisi ki nazar na lag jaye isko.
Barkat: baji ab toh bs yeh kisi k nazar me aa jaye aur ek ache khaandan me iska nikaah ho jaye.
Nusrat: ye itni khoobsurat hai ki kisi ka bhi dil aa jayega is pr
Barkat: wahi to baaji kisi bure insaan ki nazar ispe pade usse pehla iska nikah ho jaye,bs yhi dua hai upar wale se
Nusrat: chinta mat kijiye Allah aapki jaroor sunega
Barkat: Amen
Ali: dadi khana khane talo,ifftali ka wakt ho daya hai. Ammi daldi bhooku lagi,jol jol ki.
Jia: awww...yeh kitna cute hai.
(Sab iftari k liye dusre kamre me jati hai,Raja pure time bs Noor ko dekhta rehta hai aur ye baat Jia notice kar leti hai.)
(Sheikh family apni car me ghar wapas aa rhe hote hai,Raja drive kr rha hai)
Jia: ammi Noor aapi kitni khoobsurat hai na,ek dum pari ki trh ni actually wo doll jo bhaijaan humare liye humare 5th birthday pr laye the,bilkul uss doll ki trh hai wo.
(Noor ka naam sunte hi Raja ka dhyaan Jia ki baaton pr chala jata hai)
Nusrat: ha bilkul. Mujhe tajjub( hairany/shock) hai ki abhi tk uska nikaah kaise ni hua? Itni khoobsurat ladki ko toh koi bhi apni bahu banana chahega.
Jia: ha,wo BA pass hai,silayi,bunayi,kadhayi bhi janti hai,cooking bhi kar leti hai unka nikaah na jaldi hi hoga,dekhna
Raja: pehli baar kisi ko apne pair pr kulhaadi marte dekha hai
Jia: mtlb? Oh oh ab samjhi,oho kyu bola yeh sab
Nusrat: sahi bola joh bola,dekha usse kitna kuch ata hai aur ek aap hai jo paani bhi naukar se mangwati hai
Jia: ammi kya aap bhi,har baat humare nikaah se jod deti hai. Aur aap toh bhaijaan k liye ladki pasand karne wali thi na uska kya hua? Pasand ayi koi?
Nusrat: ha ayi na do teen hai joh hume bohot pasand ayi,ab unme se kisi ek ko chunege
Jia: do teen? Bhaijaan apka to ammi swayamvadu kar wayengi.😆
Nusrat: chup badmaash.
(Sheikh family me sab so gye Jia & Raja k alawa. Raja to Noor k khayalo me dooba hua hai, tabhi Jia uske room me aa jati hai.)
Jia: ye bhaijaan kaha khoye hue hai? Oh Noor aapa me hunh? Abhi maze lete hai.
Jia: woh kitni khoobsurat hai na?
Raja: bohot,bilkul pari hai pari
Jia: uski aankhen kaisi hai?
Raja: taro(stars) jaisi
Jia: awaaz?
Raja: itni meethi k bas sunte hi jao
Jia: hahhhahahah...uski chodo pehle apni suno,deewane ho gye hai aap
Raja: tu kab ayi?
Jia: jab aap khayalo me doobe the tab,waise aap Noor apa k bare me soch rhe the na?
Raja: ni bilkul ni
Jia: jhoot safed jhoot. Humne dekha tha puri dawat me aap bas unhe hi dekh rhe the aur car me bhi unki baat aate hi apka chehra chamak gya. Pasand hai woh aapko?
Raja: pasand ni pyaar hai choti. Waise ammi jaan ne un ladkiyo ka naam bataya jinhe unhone pasand kia hai?
Jia: ha aur Noor apa ka naam ni hai usme,unhe toh Nafisaa,Ulme,Kulsum pasand ayi hai apke liye.
Raja: ye teeno kon hai,aur kyu hai? Arre Ammijaan toh Noor ki taarifo k pul bandh rhi thi aur usse hi ni chuna mere liye,ye toh galat hai
Jia: hahahaha...bhaijaan hum toh mazak kar rhe the,ammi ne hume kuch na bataya hai 
Raja: nikal yaha se,chal dafa ho,bhaag
Jia: hadd hai,bhalayi ka zamana ni rha.
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Kaisa laga?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome .. 
Vikrant toh purra flat hogaya ... 
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
Awesome update!
Agar raja itna lattu ho Gaya Hai noor pe to fir ye revenge story kaise bani..😔
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loveinshi let's go with the flow and writer and baby girl 728 what an awesome plot
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveinshi

Awesome update!
Agar raja itna lattu ho Gaya Hai noor pe to fir ye revenge story kaise bani..😔

Wahin toh suspense hai meri jaan
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Mashallah!! Plzz continue...
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Chapter-3
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(Somewhere in Mumbai)
Noor: bhaiya wo wali chudi dikhaiye 
(Raja ki entry)
Raja: arre wo ni wo neeli wali dikhao,aapke hath pr wo jada achi lagengi Noor ji
Noor: aapne hume kaise pehchana? Humne toh Nakaab/Burkha pehen rakha hai
Raja(in mind): ab ise kaise batau ki yaha wasooli karne aya tha aur tukka mara. Kuch acha soch Raja
Raja: woh apke perfume se,aur apki meethi si awaaz se. Aur waise bhi aap chahe saath(7) pardo me kyu na rahe Raja apko pehchaan hi lega.
(Noor blushed badly)
Noor: ummm...bhaiya kitne paise hue?
Chudi wala: ni ni kuch ni,aap le jayiye,paise ki jaroorat ni
(Actually Raja ne use look dia tha,tbhi darr k maare wo paise ni le rha)
Noor: arre bhaiya aise kaise? Aapke haq k paise hai,batayiye kitne hue? Wrna hume ni chahiye ye chudiyan
Raja: abe bol na kitne paise hue? 
Shopkeeper: woh 80 rupay hue
Noor: hmmm...ye lijiye 100 rupay
Shopkeeper: maaf kariye behenji bees rupay toote ni hai
Raja: abe dukaan khol k baitha hai aur 100 k toote ni hai,lagau tere kaan k niche do?
Noor: arre ni ni shaant ho jayiye,aur bhaiya toote ni hai toh koi baat ni,apke bache hue paise rakh lijiye.
Shopkeeper: ni ni mai dusri dukaan se laata hu
Noor: bhaiya koi baat ni,rehne dijiye.
(Noor waha se jane lagti hai but...)
Raja: arre aap ghar ja rhi hai? Toh mai chod du
Noor: aap taqleef mat lijiye,hum rickshaw kar lenge
Raja: arre mai usi trf ja rha hu,chod dunga
Noor: abbu ne aise kisi se lift lene k liye mana kia hai
Raja: aapke abbu mujhe jante hai,chaliye na,jaldi pahuch jayengi
Noor: thik hai. Par hum kabhi bike pr ni baithe hai toh zara aaram se chalayiyega wrna hum gir jayenge.
Raja: arre aise kaise gir jaogi,Raja hai na,tumhe mtlb aapko girne ni dega,bs aap mere kandhe ko jor se pakadna
(Raja & Noor ki 1st bike ride & Noor ki toh actually first bike ride)
(Bike conversation)
Raja: waise ek baat batao matlb batayiye ki jb wo dukaan wala free me chudiya de rha tha toh le lena tha,itna behas kyu kia,aur 20 rupay extra hi diye,kyu?
Noor: mere abbu kehte hai ki agar hum kisi ki mehnat aur haq k paise marte hai toh allah miyan hume kabhi maaf ni karte aur 20 rupay me konsa woh ameer ho gye ya hum gareeb ho gye,unka chutta ni tha toh unki kya galti ye kismat ki baat hai.
Raja: wah
Noor: agar aap bura na maane toh aapse ek baat kahe?
Raja: aapke kisi baat ka mai bura thodi manunga,bindass bol dalo mtlb boliye boliye
Noor: ji,aapko apne gusse pr zara kaabu rakhna chahiye,isse apki sehat pr asar padta hai 
Raja: theek hai ab aapne kaha hai toh mai gussa ni karunga
(Raja ne bike k mirror me Noor ko sharmate hue dekha,halaki ussne Burkha pehna tha bt fir bhi usse dekh k jaan gya ki woh sharma rhi hai)
(Sayyid ghar k saamne)
Noor: ji shukriya
Raja: koi baat ni,kabhi bhi
Noor: Allah Hafiz
Raja: ha,Allah Hafiz,bye
(Mansoor ka adda)
Raja: aapne bulaya abba jaan
Mansoor: ha teri ammi keh rhi thi ki unhe Sikandar ki beti Noor bohot pasand aayi hai tere liye,toh mai Sikandar se tere aur uske liye baat karu,tu kya kehta hai?
Raja: ab agar ammi jaan ko wo pasand hai toh thik hai
Mansoor: acha yaani sirf teri ammi ko pasand hai tujhe ni,toh rehne dete hai
Raja(little loud and excited tone me): ni ni mujhe bhi pasand hai Noor
(Oops)
Mansoor: panch saal ka tha,tb se pala hai tujhe,teri nas nas se waakhif hu. Dawat me pura waqt tera fhyaan usi pr tha,tujhe kya lagta hai mujhe pata ni chala,hunh?
Raja (blushing): wo abba huzoor...mai toh...
Mansoor: hahahaa...dekha Rashid ye Raja sharmata bhi hai. Acha chal bata kab chale Sikandar k ghar?
Raja: jab aap chaho 
Mansoor: acha,toh chalte do teen din baad
Raja: ni aaj hi chalte hai na
Mansoor: hahaha...maloom tha andar se tadap rha hai ye nikah k liye bahar se,jab aap chahe. Rashid driver ko bol Sikandar sayyid k ghar jana hai toh gaadi nikale,abhi.
Rashid: lekin sarkaar aaj toh wo builder se milna hai,wo aata hi hoga
Mansoor: toh usko bol ki kal aye. Aur Raja apni ammi ko bata de ki hum jaa rhe hai rishte ki baat k liye.
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Kaisa laga,everyone? Like & comments.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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 hayyee... Update soon ðŸ˜³