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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

ya ya damn sure maithu...😆

Okay Okay
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Who was that person inside the car who was wounded???

And chakor she did a great job...SR didnt even thanked her...bad habbits SR..😉
And chakor baby if something belongs to you that thing automatically belongs to him so he doesnot need to get permitted by you...😉(haha that too was a bad habbit mr. Rowdy😆)
Great job maithu...😳
Waiting for the next update...😳

Thank you so much dear for reading and liking this part
The person inside the car will be revealed soon 
Well! This SR have a lot of bad habits
Hahahaha I liked how you said what belongs to hers is his LOL 
Thanks for the appreciation dear!
Thank you
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: amrutha131

Loving this DocRo Sukor😃
Can next part come already ?!

Thanks for this lovely name my dear lovely reporter
Well! I could have filled your wish if I wasn't busy this morning!
So it will be only this evening!
See you sooon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor


Wow ammu even I was thinking DocRow and you have coined it

HiFi


Maithu 


good one.

liking the DocRow 

have he ever asked any permission!!! ha ha just liked it. and dude is quick in knowing who she is

and that what is there to steal in the bag...it is all set ready to be stolen from the ...!!!

waiting for it

Am liking her selfless dedication is helping the wounded.

Good one 

like the flow quite interesting and waiting...

now you have pampered me so I am expecting the update like the show timing...

Great thinkers are same kind as both you and Reporter ;-)

Thank you so so so much Sumi for this lovely comment

Happy you liked their presence together and their characterisation

HeHeHe yes! He got what he wanted always LOL 
Well I thought there was no one who is going to get that meaning of stolen but you caught it Heee

Will try to keep the flow for up to I can!

Thank you so much once again Sumi!
See you soon on time LOL 
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update

Sukor are already fighting 😆. Loved his comment about her bag.
Suraj hasn't showed any soft side yet, he's all attitude.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks Mai
Happy you liked it 
Well! This is called little battle! Soon a big one on the way!
Do you think he will have a soft side ? 😉

Thanks once again Mai
Keep on reading
See you soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello buddies!

Thanks for all the positive responses for this story!
I didn't think I will get these much responses!
Thank you!

Link to the previous part : Part 4

Happy reading!

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Part 5

The time I reached home, my parents were already there, waiting anxiously for me this the first time I'm coming back home late without giving them any prior message.
So that was the time to tell them the truth but not fully.
Lying is not my way.
So just truth but not entirely.
"Helped a person who was in need of treatment on the street, on the way back home Maa!" I said passing her medoc "I'm tiered! Can we have dinner?" And without any other question, after I got freshen up, we all catches on our day except the fact that I excluded the rowdy part entirely.
And that was of not a big deal as I'm not for sure going to meet him!

But the thought of his face, his rude behavior, his way of treating me and especially him going through my bag was just not acceptable.
The thing is I'm used to be respected! And that is the reason I keep on thinking about his way of dealing with me even when I really don't want.
Ok! I'm forgetting him and sleeping!
Sleep! Come and take me for now!
Hello sleep!
Ouf!

I'm keeping on turning on my bed since half an hour and sleep is not yet near my eyes!
Okay! Going to use my Maa's technique.
I think it is the Maa mantra of every mother in this world 'Close your eyes and sleep will come automatically!'
And several thoughts started to run in my head and then I slept!
Don't know when but slept.

As usual the day was going from the morning and today, Tina said she will directly join me in the library after her fancy shopping.
So we went together from her house and then I dropped her in front of library and carried on with my work.

Who is calling me now! I thought to myself while pulling out my vibrating phone from the bag.
"Haan Tina!" seeing her name flashing, I picked her call and talked as calm as possible in a way only the person on the other side of the phone can get.
"Okay I'm coming!" I cut the call.
She is in need of money as she left her purse at home.
So closing the books and notes, putting all of them back inside my project bag, I asked the librarian to take care of it as I exited the library.

Crossing the road, I went towards the street not far from the medical shop and made it to where she was.
"Thank god you are here to save Me." she exclaimed.
I shook my head as I pulled the purse and handed the money to her and waited for her to pay and get her things.
When I turned towards the road, my eyes stuck to the faces of two men!
One that I never wished for and one I'm happy to see as he was not in a good condition last time I saw.
And I can see that his eyes were also on me as he called the man near him and pointed towards me and said something.
What is that rowdy telling to him?
Why in this world I have to face the person I didn't want to see?
I thought I forgot him for this day but no, he is in live to make me remember that I can be get used to rude behaviors.

And the next second, the man who I treated yesterday looked at me with an expression I can't say what it was.
He got up and the man by his side, the rowdy also got up.
"Shall we go?" Tina asked but my eye sight was fixed on the men coming towards me, us.
"Isn't he the one we saw at our college?" Tina commented pointing them "And the one with him was also there that day!" she added. "Why are they pointing at you and talking?"
I pulled down her hand and pulled her inside the shop so that we could escape from them.
"Why are you stressed?" she asked again.
"Can't you stop asking question?"
"If you give me the proper answers, I will!"
I looked behind and they were at the entrance of the shop with still their look glued to me, I can Cleary say that.
"Chakor! Are you okay?"
I wish we can disappear from here.
Why are they here?
The guy I treated yesterday isn't even smiling at me for anything.
Feel like a feeling of fear is creeping my body.
I should not feel like that as I didn't do any bad thing but then it is not going away.
And they are closing in towards us.

With all the tension I was going through, my Tina was adding oil into fire by asking questions and questions without any gap.
I can't open my mouth.
The guy who was by the side of rowdy looked at me curiously.
And the rowdy with no expression.
Then the other guy pulled up a bit of his shirt in the back as he was standing just at the arm distance.
And then he pulled out the knife and studied it as my mouth dropped down with Tina going all mum.
And as I looked at the rowdy, she was smiling at me. 
No not smiling but smirking!
But why?

"What" I started and even before I could complete or pronounce the second word, the knife entered my body as the man said "I'm used to hurt the person who saves me!"
As I looked down at the place where the knife was, blood started to come out in a greater speed than I thought as I screamed my lungs out.

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Thanks buddies for reading this!
Sorry for leaving here but I don't want to continue more in order to satify my evil mind ;-)
Let me now your views!

See you!


Next part : Part 6


- Maithili

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Posted: 6 years ago
#98
Maithu not fair😭😡
OMG is he a psycho😲 Or by any chance Chakor is day dreaming😆
Try to update asap😳
Edited by amrutha131 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: amrutha131

Maithu not fair😭😡
OMG is he a psycho😲 Or by any chance Chakor is day dreaming😆
Try to update asap😳

Everything is fair in LOVE & WAR dear!
And here I love you all😉

You will get to know what happened in the next part!
2 days will go by soon and Sukor and CVs will give us a lot of things to discuss, so time will fly 😛

See you soon dear!
Thank you
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Posted: 6 years ago
Interesting update👏
Chakor is so much affected by Suraj😉
You left on cliffhanger😲
Was is it real or Chakor was daydreaming 😲
Eagerly waiting for Moday