#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29 - Page 18

jaya1867

@jaya1867

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Posted: 6 years ago

super cute os

loved it so much di

ishra last part very good

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Dhiyashah

@Dhiyashah

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Posted: 6 years ago

Fabulous os
Thanks for pm
Waiting for epilogue

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Dhiyashah

@Dhiyashah

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Posted: 6 years ago

fantastic os
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EmeraldStar

@EmeraldStar

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+ 8

Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome OS

Ishu hurt cos of Raman behaviour

Good ishu thought him nice lesson

Woohoo finally he realized

Apologised to ishu

Well written 👍🏼

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

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aditi

@aditi12ishra

Goldie

Posted: 6 years ago

Nice story.

Ishra a cute couple.

Yaa fights are general in all couples.

Poor shagun always her dreams shatters.

The ending was amazing.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.

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sanjana_nanda

@sanjana_nanda

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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb update

Thank you for the pm

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UmeraT

@UmeraT

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+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

Hi Rida. Thank you for this beautiful OS. You always pen stories that I want to read and this one is no different. You've left me feeling numb. Again, thanks a ton for writing such a poignant tale of love. It was incredibly painful yet immensely satisfying ❤️

I'll always cherish this OS.

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jaanishra

@jaanishra

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Posted: 6 years ago

Super is di...

Ishita loves Raman madly... He was a flirty for some time...

Hehehe... He gave importance to shagun.. Ishu jealous of her.. I liked her possessiveness... Cute... She asked someone else to play her opposite role jus to make Raman jealous..😳 Raman understood her hurt only when he saw her with another boy... He apologized to her soo innocently and cutely.. I loved tht part... And they play the role themselves.. In the swing.. Tht was nice... Loved the os completely.. Waiting for your other is tooo...

Love you

Lavu

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CrazyAshishFan

@CrazyAshishFan

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing very nice update OS dear

Loved it update

Thanks for the PM

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Harshita Srivastava

@harshiidiv

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+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome Os dii
Loved it
Ishra are college going love birds..
Ishu is possessive for him..
Bt he thinks she is overreacting..
Bt ishita make him tastes his own medicine..
He got to know what must be she feeling seeing him with shagun..
Finally he apologized to her..
Swing scene was nyc..
Thx for pm..

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