Originally posted by: Anjali33
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Kya kamaal OS thaThat song..uske bahane se hi dono itta close aaye.. hayeeπ³Naina bholi h..but bholuram usko bholi rehne na degaπ
Originally posted by: bushraurooj
too good yaar, I was able to visualise it... I hope we get to see such cute scenes...
Whoa! This was lovely! Loved how you weaved in earlier incidents into a secret chai meeting!
Poor Sameer - kahaan Munna Pandit ise English pictures dihka rahe hain aur Naina jo bhaavarth ke chakkar me... π PS: Leap ke baad bhi 90s me hi tho honge - asanskaari kaise banenge? π
Originally posted by: dixie123
Bhavartak mein samjhana was excellent Surbhi ππΌ very well written keeping their basic characters in line.
Too good...can imagine scene in front of my eyes...hopefully something like this happen
Please keep writting
Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Amazing Surbhi... it was very intense and finally Naina ko bhavarth samajh aa hi gayaπ
Too good...loved to read itπ
Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi
I loved loved loved it...
So so beautifully written and such marvellous care taken to keep the characters intact...The flower touch is my ultimate fav now... I just hope CVS Ye flower romance dikhayein...Beautiful os...
This was awesome...
I wish we could see such detailing in the show too...I'm dying to see such scenes between samainaPlease keep writing more of these
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