Payyar ka Inthehan A Prem /Heer FF (Chapter 6 on Page 14)(14.04.18)

Posted: 6 years ago

Payyar ka intehan a Prem/ Heer FF

Prologue:

Jab mein camara ke samne darata hu to apne kirdar mein dhub jata hu. Aapne har rishra ko nibhata hu. Log kehata kitna khubiya se mein opposite leads se parde mein rishta ta nibha ta hu.

Lekin ek bar aisa hua ki job mere reel love and real love ek ho gaya tha. Lekin mein bhul gaya tha ki parde ki rishte hakikat mein hamesha nahi badalte.

Shayed mujh mein hi koi komi tha, shayed mein uss ke payar ki layek nahi tha. Lekin iss dil ko kaun samjhay.  Ek tarafa payyar ka to aihi ek anjam hein.

Mere karibe dost kehete hein move on karo, meine koshish bhi ki,  lekin usme mein bhi mujhe dhoka mila. Har kisiki zindegi mein payyar nahi likha hota.

Pichele saat saal se mein dhire dhire khud ko usse dur ki, dekte hi dekte mein uska sabse accha dost se sirf dost usse good co actor usse sirf jane pehacan ka ban gaya. Ha iss mein meri hi galti hein. Kya karta mein jab bhi usske pas hota ho mein khud ko kho deta ho, mein nahi chahata ki uss ke dil mein mere liye galat phemia ho.

Wo kush hein aapni zindegi mein apne boyfriend lekar shuna hein bahut jald shaddi bhi karegi. Usse kush dekkar mein bhi kush ho, sacche payyar to yahi hota heina apne payyar mein kush raho. Lekin kabhi kabhi ye dil manta nahi kabhi kabhi man mein ye soach ata hein ki kash mera payyar ek tarfa nahi hota, kash mujhe uska payar milta.

Mein nahi janta ki punarjanam hota hei kiya nahi agar ho to bhagwan se mein yahi darkhast ki agle janam mein mujhe uska payyar mile.

 

Character sketch:

Prem Juneja:

31 year old Famous Indian Tv actor.  Previously he had one sided love affair with his one co actor.He knew she would never return his feelings for her. He tried to forget her to do that he gradually distanced himself from her. He even tried to move on in his love life with another co actor. May be it was his bad luck that that co actor betray his trust by having an affair behind his back with his best friend. After that, Prem decided that love was not for him. But suddenly after 7 years while working on a new tv show he will have to confront with his past and something more.

 

 

Heer Maan:

A famous leading Indian tv actress, 28 years old. From her first show, which called anokha rishta, she showed her brilliance in actor. She acted in both positive and negative roles with equal efficiency. Her personal life was going smooth, she thought she got her love of life, she was also thinking about settling down.

However, it seemed like it was not the case. Her six-year relationship with his boyfriend broke suddenly as he broke her trust. In professional life, also she got shows where cvs undermine her character. She was getting offer only for negative roles despite her acting qualifications.

At last, she got a new show, where she meets a long lost friend. He was once her best friend. She remembered she once told him that he was like her elder brother who always supported her.

Heer did not know why she said that to him as she now think about that she realized it was a rushed statement. He was a good friend to her and he was not a brother like figure to her.

She did not know when distance between them increased so much. She did not even saw him for last three years. She needed a friend in her difficult moment.  She thought she would try to renew the old friendship.

However, she did not know that, it would create more complications in her life.

 

 

Jyotika Saxsena:

29 years old famous tv actress. She won the heart of millions by her acting but her own heart broke by a man who she thought love her. The way he broke her trust, make her feel miserable.

 

Now she could only think about her professional life and with a new tv series she would do just that. She quickly became friend of Prem due to their similar bad fate in love.  

She hoped that, by getting a genuine friend her life could become little easier.

 

Rishabh Rampal:

32 years old Indian tv actor, he and Prem was once best friend but today they did not able to tolerate each other. Prem hate him because he was having an affair with Perm's girlfriend that time.

 

Neha Chatterji:

 Ex girlfriend of Prem. Prem broke up with her when he found she was having an affair with Rishabh.

She was also famous tv actress, 29 years old. Sometimes she thought about her mistake of cheating on Prem.

Kartik Triphati:

Ex boyfriend of Heer. He thought he loved her, would marry her one day, but after six years he realized he never loved Heer, he was just fascinated by her. He knew Heer would be unhappy if she married him, therefore he broke up with her and end six years old relationship.

 

 

I know I already have four stories. However, I could not stop myself from writing it.

Who should be the pair of this ff. Please tell me with your comments.

Your options are

Prem / Heer

Prem/ Jyotika

Prem/ Neha.

 Index

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
Oho new wow will come back to read
Also the other update 😃
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Oho new wow will come back to read
Also the other update 😃

I will wait for comment.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Prem heer yaar ofcourse... Pls pls pls prem heer ko alag mat karna... Story mashallah hai haaan...
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: -secretlove-

Prem heer yaar ofcourse... Pls pls pls prem heer ko alag mat karna... Story mashallah hai haaan...

Thanks for your comment. 
Lets see what others say about pairing.
Thanks for liking the concept.

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Posted: 6 years ago
awsome start
ofcouse prem Heer
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

awsome start
ofcouse prem Heer

Thanks for your comments.
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Posted: 6 years ago
  
  Intro is nice and ofcourse prem heer ...Ye b koi puchne wali  
  Baat hai ðŸ˜³
   
 
  
  

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiaharshiti

Intro is nice and ofcourse prem heer ...Ye b koi puchne wali
Baat hai😳



Thanks, I will try to update soon.
Posted: 6 years ago
Jodi of this story will be Prem and Heer.