Ff: Kya karoon main Iss ladki ka!!!!! - Third chapter updated

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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter one
 Preet opened her eyes. She saw her mother and Gunjan didi looking at her. "Preet..." someone called out. She gasped. She knew that voice. She hadn't heard that voice for years now. Her heartbeats accelerated as her sister Simran came to view. How can this happen???? Simmi didi was dead... Wasn't she? "Didi... You're alive?" she gasped. Then everything went black.

"Mrs. Amba Pavanya. It seems like Preet doesn't remember anything that happened in the past two years. You can of course explain to her that she can be Preet now, not Mannu. But it would be better to skip the gruesome details. It won't be good for her". Amba heard the doctor's advice and decided that she would protect Preet. Her men were successful in chasing Raj away from the hospital and now she could take her daughter home. She fumed as she thought of Raj Bajwa. It was only his fault that Preet was shot. She decided that it's better that she didn't remember her marriage with Raj.
After her mother explained that two years ago she had an accident which revealed her truth and everything was settled now, she turned her attention to her now alive sister 'Simran'. She wondered what to say. Simmi simply hugged her and cried. After a lot of rona-dhona she was allowed to home. Sukhi and Babli played dhol and welcomed her. While Sukhi was playing dhol, something flashed in her mind. Something about a scooter... A man standing in front of a house... Everything in a haze... She felt dizzy and almost fell back. Simran had caught her and she looked alarmed. "Mannu, are you okay?". Her family flocked her and Amba escorted her upstairs to her room. After everyone left, Preet noticed that her room was looking odd. Like it wasn't used for a long time. After she had her dinner, she dozed off. Amba and Simran was talking in room. "Shouldn't we wait till Preet is better to proceed with the divorce" Simran asked. "No... Preet was fed up by the relationship anyway... By the way I don't want them taking advantage of Preet's condition like they did to you". "You're right... But how will we explain it to her?". After a bit of plotting they both fell asleep.

IN PREETO RANI ROOM

Someone enters her room stealthily via the balcony. The curtains move and a fair and handsome man comes into view. Raj Bajwa admires the sleeping form of his wife. Preet fidgets in her sleep. She was wearing a salwar with a slit till the knees. It was not visible when she was standing. But now her fair skin till the knees were exposed. Her golden payal was sleeping on her ankles. Raj found the very sight of her very provoking. Rohan comes and collides with his brother. "Bro, you can stare at her all you want at home... Firstly we have to take her home" Rohan admonished him. Raj lifts her off the bed gently, after kissing her forehead. Preet wakes up with a jerk. Finding herself in a strange man's arms she tries to scream. Raj stifles it. "Scream all you want soniyo... Nobody will come... They're all drugged... And I have come to take what is rightfully mine". He releases his palm from her mouth and looks at her brown orbs staring at him with fear. She screams again and again as he carries her off out to be front door, bridal style. Rohan starts the jeep and Raj after tying her up and placing her inside follows his brother. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Congrats on your 3 ff Megha! 👏 I loved the plot. Eagerly waiting for more. 
Hmm... Doesn't raj knows that Preet has lost her memory. He can't take her forcefully life that, in her current condition. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Raj knows... He definitely keeps track of his wife's condition... He is taking her forcefully as he wants a chance with her again and Amba won't allow it if she is conscious... 
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Posted: 6 years ago
This is my fourth ff... 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: Meghateresa

This is my fourth ff... 

Sorry 😛.
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Chapter two
Preet struggled against her bonds. The creepy guy who had earlier lifted her in his arms now lifted her up again. There was something odd about his demeanour. So unlike a kidnapper. Like he was trying very hard not to hurt her while lifting her up. But her misconception was cleared immediately as he didn't pay the slightest attention to her struggles in his arms. She recognised the other guy suddenly. Rohan Bajwa. Even with her memory loss she could remember one thing. Bajwa meant trouble. This means they know she is a girl and she's at their mercy. She recognised the Bajwa haveli. "So you are back with her" a voice said. She turned her head around to see Harjeet Bajwa. There was something odd about him too. He wasn't viewing her through the masked hatred that she was used to. There was a variness and guilt. She tried punching the creepo with her tied up arms but no avail. She couldn't even threaten him as he had closed her mouth with a cloth. He took her to a bedroom and placed her on the bed gently. He went to close the door and she in a bid to free herself, fell from the bed. Her wound started bleeding again and tears started. The creepo rushed to her looking concerned. "Preet... Why didn't you wait for me on the bed". He lifted her up and put her down on the bed. She was freed immediately. Preet could barely move because of the pain. He took a first aid kit from the drawers and sat on the bed. Preet started freaking out as he lifted her top. She slapped his hand away. She could tell that he was getting frustrated. After a few more attempts, Raj accidentally ripped off half of her top exposing her stomach. He was shocked but as she was struggling and fighting, he held her down to prevent her from hurting herself again. He changed her bandages and cleaned her wound. Preet felt embarrassed. She was exposing her skin to a stranger and someone who had kidnapped her, of whose trustability she doubted. She tried pulling her overall around herself but to her shock he had ripped that off too. Furious, she punched him. She tried running out of the room. Raj, who didn't want his wife to hurt herself or run around in ripped up clothes put his arm around her midriff, minding her wound, and lifted her up. Preet kicked the air furiously but Raj was too strong for her. He suddenly slammed his lips against hers and they both fell onto the bed. He had been craving her for a long time to notice that she wasn't responding to his kiss. She tried to push him away but he put his weight on her and prevented her from moving. He deepened the kiss slowly till he felt the moisture on her cheeks. He came to his senses suddenly and pulled away from her. She slapped him tight hard across his face. His cheek stung and he was ashamed of himself. How can he force himself on any girl? Let alone his wife. "Sorry Soniyo". He laid her on the bed again and took out a red shirt from his wardrobe. He gave the shirt to her. "Change into this shirt. Your dress is too ripped up". "Who are you?" Preet asked angrily. Raj closed his eyes in pain at her question. "Just change". "My mother won't leave you". "Yeah, I know your mum alright" he said varily. "You don't know me. I won't leave you for this". Raj laughed suddenly. "Well I really hope you don't leave me Soniyo". Preet pulled the shirt over herself, on top of her kameez. She looks at the unguarded locked door. She calculated her chances and ran for it. An irate Raj dragged her back. "Will you please listen?" he yelled. Rohan barged into the room. "You, Rohan Bajwa!" she screamed. Raj was trying to hold her back. She reached out and flung a vase at Rohan's head, screaming a series of profanities. Rohan dodged it effectively. Raj entrapped her in his arms and closed her mouth with his hand. She started fighting like a wild cat but it was ineffective. "You know, I liked it better when she was calling me Veerji" Rohan said, staring at Preet stunned. Preet wanted to ask when had she called him veerji but couldn't as her mouth was closed by Raj's palm. Amrit came running to the room, hearing the racket. Preet's eyes widened seeing her after a long time, according to her. Wait, does that mean Raj was also back? She thought excitedly. That's great. Now Raj and Amrit will get her out of here. To where her Mummy is. Wait till I tell Raj what this pervert did to me! My yaara and I will together teach him a lesson. Preet thought angrily. "Leave her. You'll hurt her" Amrit ordered. "I won't hurt her". 'Ha, as if' Preet thought furiously. He had already kissed her forcefully. Where the hell was Raj? She needed to complain about this perv. Wait a minute, did Raj know that she was a girl? How will he react knowing that his best friend is a girl? Rohan interrupted her thinking process. He held a photo in front of her. She was in a orange bridal wear and was marrying the creep holding her!!! 'I was married? Why didn't Mummy say anything?' Preet thought shocked. "I said leave her" Amrit said angrily. "She's mine!" he snarled. What? I didn't belong to him! Preet felt angry. "Is this what I taught you?". "She's not cooperating and there wasn't any other way. Her mother won't let me near her. And she can't do that... She's my wife! "She lost her memory for godsake Raj. Amba was doing wrong but that doesn't make you right. I understand why you kidnapped her but try talking with her before asserting your rights! " Amrit snapped. Wait! What did she call him? He was Raj? I was married to Raj? Preet gaped apprehensively at the guy holding her. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update Megha! 
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Posted: 6 years ago
It'll be interesting to see how Preet deals with the fact that Raj is her husband. Her memory has regressed to a time before she fell for Raj?
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Posted: 6 years ago
Yeah, she doesn't remember her marriage with Raj... 
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Oh wait, never mind. I just realised that she doesn't remember Raj finding out that she's a girl so she's probably not in love with him yet.Edited by QueenKordeilia - 6 years ago