YE DIL KHONE LAGA HAI YAARA FF (part2 on pg4) - Page 3

Part 2

Piyush friend Pyaare starts singing a song
tujh ko jo paaya... (he continues singing)
While piyush plays guitar tune on it .
He thinks will I ever be able to sing a song in beautiful voice like Pyaare do !
He keeps playing guitar lost in his thoughts and music!
pyare finishes the song .
piyush:are ruk Kyun gaya .., aur gaa naa !
Pyaare:bhai gana khatam Ho gaya... ab apki baari. ..!
Piyush:nahin..rehne de, ab mood nahin hai!

Pyaare:bhai apko kabhi koi ladki dil se pasand aayi?
Piyush:nahin...Kyun?
Pyaare:kuchh nahin...!
Piyush: ok!
Pyaare:koi aisi cheez jisse aap dil se chahte ho ?


piyush:matlab?
Pyaare:mmm ...apka passion ! Quality jo aap apne andar laana chahte ho
(He knows piyush passion is music..that's why he ask him)

Piyush :mmm music!!! (He gets happy )
Pyaare:to bas ho gayi apki problem solve!
Piyush:kya? Kaise?
Pyaare:ankhe band kar ke us awaz ko mehsoos karo aur gane ki koshish karo...
Piyush:nahin ..mere se nahin hoga ye sab ...!
Pyaare :try to karo pls...
piyush:no
pyaare: plsss bhai...mere liye...
he makes puppy face requesting him
piyush smiles and agrees
Ok ..ok ..par sirf ek baar..!
Pyaare:done!
Piyush closes his eyes and listens beautiful music as if his soul mate singing a song...
he starts listening the song and sings...

mein tenu samjhawan ki ...
na tere bin lagda ji...


Scene shifts to roshni house,
she was singing...
tu ki jaa ne pyaar mera mein karun intezaar tera ..
tu dil to yu jaan meri..
jaan meri!!

Scene shifts to piyush room
he keep listening the song
and sing the same song ...
He finishes the song
and Pyaare clapped for him...
Pyaare:waah! Bhai kya gaate ho !
piyush:chal chal ...jhoot na bol jyada. .digest nahin hoga !

Scene shifts To roshni
After finishing her song
Her family clapped for him
her sis says::ammazing dii. ..Oncemore

roshni:nahin bas...
Now its dinner time...



Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago

piyush playing guitar while pyare sings was nice.piyush wants to sing like pyare.loved pyare encouraging piyush to bring out his singing talent. piyush feeling his soulmate singing when he closed his eyes and singing the same song was lovely.nice song selection.waiting for royush meeting

Lovely character sketch

Chapter was Superb  

Nice CS dear...

Thanks for pm jasmine 

Part 3

roshni sad and confused.
Her elders want her to see rishta as she has grownup now and completed her studies
But ye dil ka kya karein .
Roshni:man maanta hi nahin shaadi ke liye, abhi to padna hai aage aur !
She prays to god
Hey bhagwan kuchh to chamatkar dikhao!

Scene shifts to piyush house ,
piyush asks his mom simar
piyush :mummy hum kahan jaa rahe hain
hum kisi relative ke ghar jaa rahe hain !

Piyush:but kiske? ??

Prem comes :sab ready ho gaye , chalo Chalein!
Piyush :but papa kahan ?
Prem:beta kisi se milne jaana hai
Piyush:kiske ghar ?
Prem :hain humare ek jaankar!
Piyush: ok papa , I'm ready !

Scene shifts to roshni home
Bell rings
she runs and opens the door .
roshni:namaste uncle, namaste aunti!
They replied :namaste beta !
She sees a boy standing too !
Roshni welcomes them
they meet her parents .
rita:aiye aiye ..bethiye.
rita:roshni ja andar se snacks le aa!
roshni:abhi laayi!
Rita :aur batayein kaise ho aap
roshni little brother sisters came .
piyush sees them happily
wow kitta cute hai ye kid!


rita:beta jao piyush ko humara ghar dikhakar aao!
Shonu, priya:yes mummy , chalo bhaiya!
Piyush goes with them happily !

precap: piyush plays with kids and roshni comes .he asks who is she ?
she distributes biscuits to all!Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago

Roshni's family wants to get her married.But she is not interested.guess they want Piyush Roshni to get married n piyush reached Roshni's house.If its Piyush i feel roshni will only be happy to marry him.waiting 4 royush conversation

Very nice superb update dear

Awesome story!!