YE DIL KHONE LAGA HAI YAARA FF (part2 on pg4) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
character sketch

Roshni is a very different girl from other girls ... she is studious one..
She never gives up and fight against any hurdleIin her way confidently, same with her marks
from class 3 , she didn'tget good marks, in spite of studying too hard
but as I said she didn't gave up and now she is the one who is at among toppers in class.
She is simple yet best. She doesn't believe anyone in her life blindly . But she trusts her mummy and papa alot.
They r her support after her best friend, none other than god himself.

Piyush is a play ful boy , loves his mother and family.He is total opposite of roshni.
He respects his parents alot and love them from core of his heart . He makes friends after thinking much.
He is not too serious types yet he studied hard

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Posted: 6 years ago
nice cs.Guess its opposite attracts.waiting 4 u to start it
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Posted: 6 years ago
part 1

roshni and piyush have completed their college studies .

roshni:aaj kitna boring day hai .
           I think kuchh creative karna chahiye !!!
           But kyaaa?
Idea!
I should start composing a song!
Mmm...soch...roshni...soch...!!

scene shifts to piyush house

Piyush: Pyaare chalo koi achchha sa gana gaake sunao!
Pyaare: ok bhai ...give me 5 mins pls ..let's think.

At roshni house,
looking at her cute doll, she is trying to compose a song for first time !
1 ..2...3 ...and ..go...
She starts singing ..
Tera hone laga hai ye yaara ...
ye dil khone laga hai yaara..
o yaara ..o yaara ...sun yaara aa! !!


(She remembers why she don't want to get married and starts putting her thoughts into words )
(WILL I EVER GET MARRIED ?
IF YES HOW WILL HE BE ?
LIKE OTHERS.. OR JUST LIKE ME????
WHY AM I EVEN THINKING ABOUT IT
I DNT THINK I WILL IDENTIFY HIM AT FIRST PLACE IF EVER I MET HIM )

She starts singing her next para...

Us rab ne diya tha taufa humko, naa jaan paye hum fir bhi tumko
Oo Yaara ...Oo Yaara ...
Sun Yaaraaa   ❤️

hope u guys will like my story .
Pls comment ur views
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⭐️ 😳
Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
sharda_123 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
jasminerahul thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
roshni is composing song. it's about her anxiety on her future husband.liked the lyrics of the song a lot.especially where she says that she may not identify her future husband even if she meets him.who is pyare ?he is going to sing 
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Posted: 6 years ago
This chapter describes Roshni's anxiety as to how her future husband will be. Loved Royush bonding 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Very nice update 
Lovely it update 
Thanks for the PM 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful update ...thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank u frds for commenting...
hope u will enjoy alot !
Keep reading ! 😳