Wow new story
Title is awesome
So riya n aisha fight
Riya has upper hand , all is mystery right now
Riya n shree ka aise milna , arjun ko raid ki tip milna , n shree ,riya ka bhagna
Every part was cool and awesome
Plz isko ek dum se finish mt krna , let the story unravel itself and characters to groom slowly n let riya and arjun realize slowly their love for each other. And make both of them to work for each other n plz riya ko sacrificial n arjun ko alpha male mat bnana , let them fight n live through everything
Make arjun find love slowly but certainly while let riya understand love , don't make it spontaneous , like uthe or strike hua that its love
Sorry zyada hi bol gy ... I love ur stories
Waiting eagerly for next part
Update soon n thanks for the pm
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