RishBala TS : Roman Candles - Completed - 09/04 - P : 10

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello!

I know there are 2 of my ongoing stories but you all know that I try to finish them whenever it's possible!
So with the trust you have on me and me on myself, I'm coming back with this new story line! LOL
This might be an OS of 5000+ words or TS of (3000+ + 3000+ words each)!
Don't know yet!

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Roman Candles

Typical firework with stars and shells.


A second is enough to change one's fate.
A sparkle is enough to light one's dream.
A surprise is enough to fill one's wish.
What would happen if a second of surprise happens under the sparkles of starry Fireworks?

(You will understand these lines after reading the story as it's entirely related to this story and may be in general cases too!)

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- Maithili
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sneak-Peak


Seeing him after three years had no effect on me as the distance was not only in Kms but also in communications.
"How are you?" he asked.
"Good!" I said with a smile "Where is he?" I asked.
"In his room!" pointing towards the upstairs.
I smiled a simple smile and ran towards the stairs, feeling his stairs on my back.

***

"You are sweating!" he said as if I don't see my state.
What else can I do other than standing like this.
I did a mistake. 
A big one. 
"Do you want to talk about it?" 
What can I say now?
I don't want talk about that uneventful night? Nope! He doesn't know anything about it.
You stayed away for three years, so stay away for the rest of my life too? It's too rude.

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She didn't change. 
She is still the same!
"When are you going back?" twisting few strands of her hair in her hand.
I smiled as I replied "Three years of exile wasn't enough that you want me to go away?" I know that it wasn't exactly a reply but it has been three years that I didn't meet her and I still feel the same vibe for her, so a playful talk is not a bad thing.

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I want to ask her 1000s of questions but what can I do when the distance between us is unmeasurable.
"Are you alright?"
Her eyes are just going here and there but not lifting towards mine.
Has she found what really happened last night?
What is she thinking?
"Why are you here?" she questioned back.

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That's all for the SP!
Well it might be confusing who is who but when the story unfolds, you will get to know everything.
All your guess are welcomed!
And of course the SP is related to the title, do you get how? ;-)

- Maithili

(Please no quotes, only replies!
Sorry for not sending PMs)
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Posted: 6 years ago
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hmm little bit confusing  
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Seems lyk Madhu is mommy here..
Confusing yet interesting
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting SP maithu.. 
Waiting for the story.. 
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 Seems intriguing ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MGRMFFS

hmm little bit confusing  

Thank you for reading!
Hope the story is not confusing when it comes out! :-)
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MGRMFFS

👍🏼 looking forward

Thanks a lot!
Will be updating in November! ;-)
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pirl18

Seems lyk Madhu is mommy here..
Confusing yet interesting

Well I can't say anything else than thank you for now else I will reveal the story with this big mouth of mine!
Thank you so much dear!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu007

Interesting SP maithu.. 

Waiting for the story.. 

Thanks Buddy!
Hope the story too is interesting!
Will be updating along with Zarir and YES once I return from my vacations!😊